The Road of Mortals

The author's style is not well controlled. Immortal cultivators believe in eradicating the root of the problem and must kill if they make enemies. Otherwise, inner demons will appear. The protagonist provokes people to target him just because he looked at the story too many times. It's embarrassing. This theory doesn't make sense. There is a problem with logical thinking.

The protagonist's character is so reckless that he dies quickly. In the world of cultivating immortals, there is no need for a reason to kill someone.

If your cultivation level is so low, why do you have to bring a woman in? Even if I save you, what can you do with such a low level of cultivation? Isn't it good to help when you have the ability? It's so difficult to get started and you're jealous. I don't understand.

So why did you lick that woman? You are not very good at cultivation, but you still want to find trouble. You don't know that there are a lot of troubles around beautiful women, and you forcefully make it more difficult for yourself to get started?

Is it so complicated to get started? Who will participate? Several initiates of sects who have been beaten up by the demon sect have to fight hard. If they are not yet initiated, they will be given boiled eggs. If they don't receive the boiled eggs, the sect may be gone.

When you see the rubbing talisman, you know that everything behind it has collapsed. What is the talisman? It is the power (origin) of the magic weapon that is injected into the specific high-grade talisman paper. Your golden finger is obviously a good hand at the rubbing technique, and it has become a copying system. The most ingenious thing is this kind of hollow text that can copy the original at every turn and only needs to absorb the energy of heaven and earth or spiritual stones.

The entry assessment is too long and the rhythm is completely broken!

An entry-level writer was so rude that he actually wrote forty or fifty pages. It's really disgusting. The last one who was so rude was already criticized by eunuchs.

Awesome 👍 Better than me in writing 😁 I have almost 300,000 words and haven't signed a contract yet, so I'd like to give it a thumbs up

The author, the writing is okay and quite interesting. Delete some bad comments in the book circle, otherwise some people will dissuade them without reading them. That's how I am.

Well written, the author will update more

It's a pity that the protagonist is not from the same era as Han Li

It's becoming more and more like a mortal.

It's a pity, I think this mortal fanfic is the best written one