White Bone Daoist

Is it Sword Cultivator or White Bone Dao? Don't choose the title randomly. I thought it was a novel about White Bone Dao, but it turned out to be Sword Cultivator. Why did you choose this title?

Classic, open up the main character, and then in order to prevent the protagonist from developing too smoothly, reduce the protagonist's luck, and even reduce the protagonist's character. Other articles, many of which are pure casual cultivators, start with five spiritual roots, and you have to fight for them in order to join the sect. Where is the protagonist? The disciples of the big sect and the old monster were reborn at the beginning, but they also had a rough start. Rebirth in 800 years. It stands to reason that an old monster who has been cultivating immortality for 800 years is at least not a complete novice in terms of combat experience, various secret techniques, various skills of cultivating immortals, ways of doing things, etc. No matter how bad he is, he can still cope with the early stage, right? How could it be possible that he could not be defeated by his peers, that secret arts depended on his master, that he needed to learn all kinds of arts now, and that his behavior was as stupid as that of a college student (he was targeted by disciples from aristocratic families and went out to seek refuge, yet he did not hide his identity at all, leading to being hunted down). The two big profits I got from "rebirth" in the early stage were the innate sword fetus, but I only got half of it, and I could accept it when I thought that the other half might go to the heroine; the other was "ranking among the best in discussion", which was even more poisonous. It made me a big enemy, and I had to go out to seek refuge. Among the immortality novels with more than 2 million words, this book ranks near the top. It's amazing that the first 30 chapters are disappointing.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the male protagonist always uses swordsmanship and never uses spells such as White Bones. Why is the book called White Bones Taoist? The title of the book is too low. Let me help you choose a name: Dao Tongtian 🤓

The protagonist opened countless plug-ins and got countless opportunities, but in the end he was still on par with the few supporting players.

Damn, when I saw him suddenly having an affair with a fox, I rejected him directly. I thought only my senior sister had subscribed, and I was so angry.

I suggest you learn from Haoyu Zhenxian. At first, the author's grades were not good, and then he started advertising like crazy in every book.

I was obsessed with it from the beginning, and now the more I watch it, the less I can stand it. Fantasy and immortality can also be interspersed with emotions. However, the author made the protagonist as lustful as himself, showing no mercy at all times, and even demons, ghosts, immortals, Buddhas, and nuns all had an affair with the protagonist. It's such a mess, I can't stand it if I keep writing it like this.

Isn't Nangong Ling's writing a bit too disgusting? In the chapter about the giant centipede demon soil, he even kissed someone who was possessed by an old woman. It makes me sick just thinking about it. After that, Nangong is not dead. This book can be discarded.

First of all, the book is quite good, but what should I say? The protagonist's Tao, sword cultivation, and White Bone Tao are actually not very related. He simply has the ultimate divine treasure (a realm in the book) "White Bones Reaching the Sky". So in fact, whatever magic weapon the protagonist uses does not affect him from taking this path. After all, his companion spirit fetus can be anything set by the author (this does not mean fighting against the author's settings). I don't mean to ask the author to revise it now, but if there is a next book, the author can consider making the connection between the protagonist and his own skills less far-fetched. After all, according to the setting in the book, the protagonist takes the path of killing, and in the early stage he takes the path of kendo, but later on it has nothing to do with kendo, it is just a pure spiritual fetus and the magic weapon is a sword. In fact, this is also a problem in this book. The protagonist's skills at all stages are pieced together (not a complete set of skills), and the protagonist's spells are also pieced together here and there. There may be plots to sort out one's own skills and spells in the later stages, but why not consider inheriting them from the beginning? Of course, this is also the author's setting, I'm just giving some advice

If the Dharma King does not change the chapter, he will definitely be persuaded to withdraw. .