Immortal Yan

The author has a strong evil aura in every book title, but the protagonist actually practices completely upright Taoism, and does not touch any evil method in the narrow sense. Even if there is a little bit, it is just to force the topic, which makes people feel very disconnected.

I read the review of the last book and summarized it. Don't write about a female protagonist. Don't write about a single female protagonist. Every time you look through it, you will find complaints about showing mercy at every turn. It is not well written and will not continue. .

Is Goldfinger a "remnant jade"? (Dao Zheng Feng) 🤓

Have you ever become an immortal? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

I felt like some of the plots were very awkwardly written. For example, in a duel, a pig's foot holds two spiritual weapons and fights against an empty-handed mysterious girl. It looks awkward no matter how you look at it.

Every time the title of the book is very good, I just want to read a classic magic novel like "The Demon"

My personal preference in reading books is to have a female protagonist. I think the character creation of the female protagonist in the previous book was okay, but the emotional scenes were a bit awkward. In addition, I have to work hard to update this book, otherwise I won't be able to retain readers. In other aspects, the writing and plot are quite to my liking.

The plot is quite interesting, and the writing seems to be quite good, but there are still some problems. I sincerely gave the author a few suggestions, hoping to change them.

God, when I look at the catalog, I see such a high B-level. Is it Wudiwen? It's like there's some divine help in the beginning.

Come on, keep reading White Bone Taoist. Although it is not fully subscribed, there are still subscriptions.