Mortal: Rebirth of Zhang Tie, Evidence of Immortality by Killing

Xiao Baiwen has no heart. Even after reaching the state of enlightenment, he is still timid. He can cultivate immortality, but he doesn't and just goes to practice martial arts. If you don't practice with a sword, you can practice with a sword. Gone

Don't be unable to walk around after seeing a woman, don't go to Mo's Mansion, don't write about Chen Qiaoqian, I suggest you don't have a female protagonist, it will make all the same people vomit.

One thing is that it is a piece of beauty that comes out of nowhere. It is impossible to exchange two Foundation Establishment Pills for the Immortal Ascension Token, unless it is fishing. Even if you want to create an adventure, you have to look at the world view of mortals. Playing games like Fenling Yueying by yourself is almost the same.

It's a disgrace at the same level that on the 13th level of Qi training, I beat two people with medium-grade magic weapons on the 7th and 8th level of Qi training, but also used talismans.

The original character Lei Shiyin was so embarrassing to watch, it didn't feel like she was in a world where mortals cultivate immortality. Hurry up and get her Shenyin offline. If you were Nie Ying, Chen Qiaoqian, or Dong Xuan'er, they wouldn't be that embarrassing.

How to tell who is an evil cultivator and who is a demonic cultivator? Among mortals, it is the naked law of the jungle. No one is righteous, including pig-footed Han Li.

If I just kill Han Li directly,

Qi practice Dzogchen and there are so many spells, all of which have been practiced to the level of mastery. To kill a Yu with Qi level 7.8, You need to use Talisman. The explanation is that there are no weapons. In the future, when you reach the stage of transforming into gods to kill foundations and build foundations, you will have to rely on self-destruction if you don't have weapons? After practicing Fire Cloud Art, I have reached the thirteenth level of Qi training. Qi training has been completed. Are you still going to practice Hou Tu Gong? You fill a bottle with red water, and then fill it with black water. Has the total amount changed?

Mortals have read it many times and thought they were familiar with it. But when they started writing, they discovered that they had missed many details when they read it before. As they were writing, they got to know the book again.

Inexplicably, you offended a good old man like Li Huayuan. He wrote too poisonous words about him. He was good to his disciples. They just asked you to become a disciple. Why did you offend them? You just didn't go after becoming a disciple. Why did you have to offend a golden elixir monk? ? ?

When I saw Yu Zitong running up to the protagonist, I didn't want to watch anymore, and he put all kinds of messy stuff on him.

As I read it, this book followed the same path as other street kids. I thought it would overwhelm the protagonist, but I didn't expect it to happen so quickly. One after another, the settings and plots of the street fight. If you don't fight the street, who will fight the street?

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Xiao Cuier, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Holy Ancestor Yuancha, Holy Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Heifeng, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, the four ladies of the Mo family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)

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The author has a trap, the mortal world is just a gangster cultivating immortality. A spell book and a Qi training dare to support foundation building without borrowing the book

It is recommended that you don't leave the harem, seize the time to practice and explore the secret realm, and ascend to the spiritual world and the fairy world. If the timeline is wrong, then it's wrong. It's equivalent to another parallel universe. In the end, it breaks through diversity and achieves the true self.

Brother, when writing fan fiction, you don't have to worry about the word count, so you can't just write it happily?

I deserve to be thrown into the street, I can't watch it without watching it, adding so many private settings, it's useless at all, and more importantly, I don't even have a brain.

Such a big hook, forced to mix the blood color, I will understand it after seeing it later, I will not write without the original work