Peninsula Entertainment Starts with a Writer

To be honest, after reading so many chapters, I still think the story you wrote about Xueli is the sweetest and most touching. The emotional scenes in Baicai that follow are a bit forced and quick, which seems boring. After you and Baicai started talking, I started reading like crazy. Alas, to be honest, you shouldn't care about the evil of those sporadic prostitutes. Poisonous speech, most of the people who really like it have lost a lot of money due to your operation. It is really not worth the loss. I hope you learn a lesson. Listening to readers to change the outline is the most confusing operation. When you waver, the article is no longer what you want to express in your heart, and there is no emotion and soul.

The idol female painter

Shirley didn't listen to the advice in the early stage. The emotional drama of the book was well written and the career line was also good enough to attract a group of readers. However, adding so many women to the emotional drama caused most readers to watch the emotional drama in a mess, and the career-line readers had no interest in pursuing it at all.

I personally like harem, but you have opened too many lines, and they are all single-threaded, which will dilute the role of the previous heroine, and the heroines are all idols, which is too monotonous! When eating raw oysters, there are minced garlic and boiled oysters! You have to arrange some career changes, arrange them into your career, and let them fight. Let them form gangs and betray each other, and the ups and downs of the plot will come, right? Some don't need to arrange their debuts, such as Bae Zhuhyun and Zhou Tzuyu. Who wants his girlfriend to dance for a bunch of LSPs on stage all day long?

The truth can stand up...

The male protagonist has won the ranking of the female protagonist 1. Bae Joo Hyun 2. Shin Yoon Joo 3. Kim Jae Kyung 4. Park Mi-yeon 5. Kim Ah-young 6. Cho Ah-young 7. Shin Hye-jung 8. Lee Ju-ri

I spent 40 yuan and I'm not happy if I don't vomit. The author has written 1.5 Million words, and the only characters that left an impression on me were Shirley and Jin Caijing. Unfortunately, Shirley at the beginning, which was so well written, disappeared inexplicably, and she was gone forever on the way to collecting stamps. . . The plot is all supported by various tools, and my career is extremely slow. I write almost 4,000 words a day, and I almost forgot all the plot.

You shouldn't have a harem Except for the career line, the subsequent plot is not interesting at all. In fact, it is enough to fix the number of female protagonists to 3 to 4. After the author writes 300 to 400 chapters, many female protagonists are written well except for Bae Zhuhyun at the beginning. The latter part feels superficial and I started skipping to read the latest. It is not as interesting as the characters of Sister Bae, Jin Taijing, Duck Down, and Snowball at the beginning.

Secretary Kim

Bae Joo Hyun