Starting from Mortals, All Heavens and All Realms

Everyone, please stop scolding the author. What is there to scold for an author who has written five books and is only at the first level?

First of all, let's not talk about the plot. There are a lot of typos, which makes people confused and confused! Secondly, the protagonist's IQ is worrying. In the first three chapters, he was directly persuaded to quit. The golden finger is too wide. The protagonist's behavior is childish and brainless. He clearly knows that the other party suspects that he is definitely spying on you, but he carelessly leaves the informing slip, and then runs away to visit the market! He's also big-hearted!

It's true that he has the strength to persuade him to retreat!

After seeing the latest chapter, I was really persuaded to quit. There is a time difference between the two worlds. Can I enter in advance? After all, the time difference is very short, and the shocking day is very near. This has to happen. Press the pig's feet desperately. Haha! Play the biggest trick and be the stupidest pig. It's really a pig's feet, a real pig!

A fairy tale novel was written as a martial arts novel, which is not fun to read

As an ordinary person, he has a super determined heart to seek the truth. He can be said to be a genius. Surrounded by many foundation-building friends, he risked his life to accept the test of magic to kill his enemies. It can be said that he has a fearless heart. This book is worth reading and can be used as a guide for fairy grass.

Having just traveled through time earlier, the protagonist is understandably confused! It was barely watchable when I first traveled to the world of Fengyun, but after returning to the main world, the plot became a mess, and I had no idea what the protagonist was going to do! I really can't. Look at Old Mo Han in the original work. He cultivates wholeheartedly, and everything must give in to this matter! All the plots revolve around this purpose. The old devil either needs something or is passively involved in the plot. In this way, at least everyone can see that old devil Han has a firm heart and can be involved. When old devil Han gets some treasure, everyone feels happy! The protagonist in this book has no idea what he is doing, and there is too much nonsense. Most of the scenes in the article are not about the transformation and progress of the protagonist, but about passers-by. It is really frustrating to read! And when I saw the title of this book, I came in because I wanted to see the collision between the mortal system and the system of the heavens. If that didn't work, just write that the protagonist traveled through the heavens and his strength was transformed, and then a large number of villains in this world plotted against the protagonist, but they didn't expect that the protagonist's strength greatly improved, and then he killed him and became famous all over the world. Wouldn't that be cool? Wouldn't it be enough to make the villain's plot against the protagonist more thrilling, and then rely on the protagonist's ability to come back from adversity? It's not like a boring book, I have no idea what the protagonist is doing!

There are a lot of typos, multiple words, and a lot of repeated words.

The protagonist's situation is suitable for being alone. Why does he still stay in that sect and not come out?

Alas, I don't know how to use golden fingers to improve my strength. It's good to learn swordsmanship in the Fengyun World (Inexplicable Swordsmanship, Sword Twenty-Three), but it's not like there's nothing else. I only traveled through time when I was being chased. Didn't I think that I might not have been there for a long time when I returned there? In this case, why not practice in Fengyun World for a while, and then go back when you are stronger? Don't mention the limit of one month, it is not set by the author. Even if it takes one month, you can do a lot of things. If you can't write exciting articles, don't write so depressingly. Isn't this not fun? In the end, no one will feel comfortable, so why bother?

The system really lowers the threshold for writing. Does anyone agree_(:з∠)_Don't worry

A novel about a sadistic protagonist, I feel that the author has a tendency to self-abuse, and the novel is not smooth to read. All in all, it feels very awkward. Many times there are better choices, but you have to choose the bad one, which results in self-abuse.

The people around Pig's Feet are not dead, which makes me laugh, and the protagonist who easily believes that his teammates are a mixture of several sects is really heartless, and Pig's Feet has been exposed so much and he still dares to think about hanging out in a sect.

There are so many words in the introduction, and I immediately locked onto the word Douluo. I really don't understand how this kind of thing can be ranked together with other books with normal logic.

Damn, this is the first time I've seen a book with so many bad reviews being written. I won't tell you whether it's good or not (mainly I haven't read it yet. I was attracted by the reviews as soon as I read the introduction 🤭). The author's writing perseverance and determination are worthy of recognition.

It's good to be a mortal man. I've written so much about Panlong that I can't stand it anymore.

I really can't watch it! Being hunted and coerced every day! Even Han Li would have paid for it! Farewell

This book was originally good, but I couldn't stand it after reading the latest chapter.

To be honest, since you want to treat mortals as fellow humans, don't go to a world that is much more advanced than him. Otherwise, why would you go back to the mortal world? Just keep going higher. For example, you can go to Datang during the Qi training stage, Fengyun during the foundation building stage, Zhuxian during the Golden elixir stage, and Immortal Sword during the Nascent Soul stage. Each world has a certain effect on you and puts a certain amount of pressure on you, but it does not exceed the level of your world.

It's no longer a matter of writing, it's not a matter of basic Chinese expression skills.

I jumped to Panlong and started reading. I suggest you read Chapter 106. This book is extremely poisonous!

The author's Chinese language skills are too poor and his sentences are unclear. Please revise them.

If this protagonist, SB, doesn't die, then it's really God's fault.

For this kind of fairy tales and fantasy novels, don't write them like stupid idiots. It's normal to follow Han Lao's magic theory. Others have the power to cultivate immortals. As long as you show a little chance, others may collect their souls. In the world of immortals, in order to live forever, who will tell you about family love?

The more you write, the uglier it gets. There aren't many people who abuse the master. They're all dead. You want to try it too.

From the beginning, I felt that there would be relatively few comments.

Author, please write a hundred or eighty chapters later. Is the Emperor of Zhai Zhu good?

It's okay, brother, you just have no inspiration, I am handicapped, and my assistants are mutually exclusive.

I am so excited to write about Panlong. This book is expensive. I can still read it without Panlong.

The author writes well. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Click on the avatar to go directly.