The Heavens Begin from the Mortal Plane

This writing is so disgusting🤢! What the hell are you writing! Isn't it good to go to work honestly?

Can we let the protagonist die suddenly and change the protagonist? When the system gives you a chance to choose a spiritual root, why should you choose three spiritual roots? Such a protagonist should die suddenly! If someone else chooses someone with supernatural spiritual roots or heavenly spiritual roots, otherwise I really can't stand it. The current protagonist is too intellectual.

This is the book. After reading a few chapters, I felt that I was very mentally retarded. The beginning is weird and I don't want it. You have to know that the mortal world is not peaceful. How can you go too far to the south? It's not modern. When I chose spiritual roots, I also chose three spiritual roots. You should know that you can easily cultivate golden elixirs with a single spiritual root, and you don't need elixirs to build a foundation. , And besides, if you want to fully develop, should you choose the Five Spiritual Roots plus the Five Elements Spirit Body, or do the Five Elements exercises plus various skills, and then go to foundation building or golden elixir. If you go to a strange world and then to Tainan, you are still unarmed. I saw it funny and thought it was unnecessary to take off your pants and fart. I guess you don't even have an outline of your book. What is the goal of piercing the heavens, immortality, freedom, power or beauty?,,,,,

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The author probably has never read The Legend of Mortal Cultivation. Among mortals, the Heavenly Spiritual Root is several times more powerful than ordinary spiritual roots. It is the object of competition among major sects. With this spiritual root, it is not a problem to find a sect to safely cultivate to the Nascent Soul.

There are some things I can't say but I'm unhappy After reading part of it, I feel that the protagonist really has no b-numbers. His character is obviously not suitable for mortals to become immortals. He chose such a world. It's not like he has no other choices. He chose this way because he made it on his own Of course, the character of the protagonist was shaped by the author. It feels very artificial now.

Looking at your profile, I know there may be "problems" in the front. After all, you have to be beaten three times. But writing like this can easily lose readers. Many people will be driven away by you if they don't see the back. Really, writing like this is not good. After all, if you travel to the past, as long as you are not a "giant baby", you should basically be cautious. , If I don't practice to the golden elixir, I probably won't go out. Of course, if I don't have the resources, I will definitely go out to look for it, but I will definitely be very careful and don't dare to expose it. If someone discovers the secret, I will definitely kill people and silence them. Now I will read this book to verify how many percent of my guesses are correct. I wish the author a huge first order and a great sale of this book!

What do you think it looks like? Why are there so many entrustments? But it's just a weed. I have never seen a mortal cultivating immortality. But the appearance of the main character is very disappointing.

I feel that the author is better at writing fantasy, but not suitable for writing about the heavens! Other time-travelers make decisions before taking action. As a time-traveler, the protagonist relies on plug-ins, and the supporting role relies on brainlessness! With an IQ as high as a mortal's cultivation of immortality, I'm afraid he wouldn't be able to provide benefits to others.

I just finished reading Chapter 21, and I feel that the actions and character of the protagonist are not suitable for ordinary people, and it feels a bit messy because the author wrote so many original works unexpectedly. The writing is not quite in line with ordinary people's style. For example, the Immortal Ascension Conference actually gave me a burning feeling. And he was forced to kneel down at the beginning. What was the purpose of writing this, to make the protagonist realize that he is weak? ? Normally, wouldn't it start by lying down and developing? It's twenty-one years and I still haven't seen the Guigu system developed properly.

I watched a few pictures and couldn't stand it any longer. I slipped away.

When I saw the introduction to "Building the Foundation of Heavenly Way", I lost the desire to read it. Where did the "Building the Foundation of Heavenly Way" come from in "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality". Either create your own cultivation system and don't modify it randomly.

IQ is a good thing, but this is the world where people cannibalize people. After being played to death, I finally said thank you, which was embarrassing.

Since you can travel across all realms, why must you choose spiritual roots? Isn't it bad to practice Taoism in the real world? Fuxi opened the sky with one painting, and Pangu opened the sky, even though he was dead. Yuanshi opened the sky, Taishang Laojun opened the sky Which one is not better than you from all realms? Do you still have to choose spiritual roots to practice? Shangqing Taoism, Yuqing Taoism, Taiqing Taoism, which one cannot be practiced? Cultivate directly to become a Celestial Immortal. After becoming powerful again, you can move into Daluotian and become a Daluo Celestial Immortal...

It is inevitable that there will be some mistakes in the code words. I also ask all readers to comment on the mistakes or the things that you think are wrong. Little Quail will correct them one by one. Here, thank you all readers for reading my book.

With such a dark heart, I wrote more than 50 chapters and released it! How does the studio make money?

Chat group. . . . Abandoned the book

Why does Qidian Daodu recommend the exact same book to me every day? Why? Why? Why? In the past few days, I have clicked on the starting point to introduce drugs and stopped changing books at all. I fainted!

I thought the number of comments was almost the same as the number of chapters, so I thought I could read it, but I couldn't resist the poison in the first chapter. When I entered the comment area, I saw that they were all criticizing the author 🤤 I made the mistake of reading the book without reading the comments 🙄

After reading the introduction, I decided not to read it. Goodbye!

Why not choose Tianlinggen or Mutated Spiritual Root? I don't understand?

I just read the introduction and came over to see everyone criticizing the author. After reading the introduction, I knew that the author must have been scolded badly.

Dear readers, please tell me what other worlds you want to see.

It's still okay to start, there are glitches! I have a teammate (Han Paopao) who is not a bad person, understands the plot, knows how to be patient, and has a Taoist companion. It's okay in the middle, but I can't write well at the end! After Nascent Soul, there is a paragraph where the protagonist is still in the world of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", and then the hanging means that the protagonist will ascend to the next map. The uncomfortable part begins. The protagonist has established a chat group (mission)? There are people from all walks of life in there. Then I drew people into the group, and then performed all kinds of tricks... And after the last five chapters, I dodged! It's really a solid start, watery in the middle, and then loose at the tail! You can take a look at the beginning

I've read more than 20 chapters and can't stand it anymore! I don't know what is written here. It's very confusing.

What is written is nothing but nonsense. To say this book is rubbish is to insult the word rubbish.

This book is written with some flavor. Xianxia is a fairy after all, and good Xianxia breaks away from the shackles of martial arts imagination. The author is very bold in starting the foundation of heaven. As a result, the fairyland chapter may not be the main world of this book!

Does the author have no heroine?