Mortal Immortal

The protagonist is Han Li's incarnation? The only thing missing is the double row of toilets. The plot is copied from the original text, with one two spirit roots refining ten foundation-building pills?

Why do you feel like Pig's Knuckle is following Han Li's path? Could it be that the author copied the original work directly? !

This book would not be affected even if it lacked the main character. Completely copied the original plot, rubbish

Why don't you take advantage of the opportunity to write about a mortal protagonist? ? ? As for the novel about cultivating immortals, I personally feel that Immortal Mansion Immortality is written with flesh and blood. He is a normal person when it comes to women. To cultivate immortality, you need to be powerful. You can't do too much of anything, so you have to do it yourself, collect elixir seeds, medicinal pills, etc. It's enough for a few concubines to provide some elixirs. Do you have to do it yourself?

I suggest you change the title of the book so that people can tell it is a human novel.

I'll just go back and read the original work.

I suggest you change the title of the book, My Dog-licking Life as a Mortal

How about not writing the main character and just go to Mortal Copy and Paste?

If you write about the ways of mortals and weird immortals, I might be interested.

First time writing a book? I don't have much desire to read, so I can just read the chapter titles and know the content. . .

Take away Ling Yuling, Yuan Guang, Zi Ling and Baohua.

Changed into a mortal's story of cultivating immortals with superpowers

A thousand-year-old elixir to repair the formation? ? ? ? Big trap

Keep writing! Why hasn't it been updated in three days? Use the land to promote your own books😁