Yang Family's Path to Immortality

I don't know why it's not good to write about a family without a heroine. It would be better to write about a family like Qinglian, but Lao Mo's writing skills are not good and he has never improved.

If there is no heroine, write about the sect instead of the family.

Why write about family history when everyone is sterilized? It's better to write about martial arts. If you want to follow the trend, it's not like this.

If I change the name of the book, I feel that this family does not have a sense of belonging. After taking out the exercises, I can go out to practice as a casual practitioner, or find a secret place to farm. Cultivation on the island. Copy the Rise of the Shen Family, The Peak of Green Lotus, The Han Family, The Story of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality. Your family is the starting point in the early stage, but it is a drag in the later stage.

There is no heroine in the family. Goodbye, just be happy!

Big brother, the first family. What is a family? It is a group that joins together through blood ties. If the family is like this, it is better to just write about casual cultivators. Second, you do not reflect the unity of the family at all. You can't figure it out when changing the map. Third, if a family wants to farm, they can open up wasteland and spiritual fields at will. It will also degrade. What if this is still a medicinal material? Fourth eldest brother, I can't see what this book wants to reflect at all. Fifth. If the path to immortality were so simple, it wouldn't be that powerful powers would fly all over the sky, and golden elixirs would be as numerous as dogs. I like family stories very much, and I have read a lot of family stories. I would like to make some comments on my own behalf. If the author doesn't like it, treat me like a fart. Don't scold me, thank you. I'm not scolding anyone either.

How did a family without a heroine come to be? It's hard to understand.

I have read the Chen family, the Wang family, the Li family, the Lin family, etc., But they are all eunuchs. I don't know how long this Yang family will last 😁

The author can go to Tieba and the like to promote it more. Remember if there is a heroine bar or something like that?

I think this realm is better, Kaiyuan, Qi Lian, Foundation Establishment, Zifu, Jindan, Yuanying, Shenhua, Xiuxian, Hedao, Mahayana, and then become an immortal. The others are fine, but I think adding Zifu in front of Jindan is a bit excessive, otherwise the jump from Foundation Establishment to Jindan would be too big.

You can say whatever you want to say, but don't be so silent.

The writing is indeed good, but you must pay attention to the rationality of the plot. A little stability is better than anything else. Come on, keep writing. I believe it will be a good book.

Come on, I believe you have to be patient. Strong people are all tempered.

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After reading the comment section, if the author wants to write about a heroine who is dedicated to seeking the truth, if he has the ability, he can become a supreme elder, only cultivate and protect the family, or else he can spread seeds and work hard to give birth to children.

The article is generally good, but the details are a little messy. Come on, I hope it will be published soon.

My initial ideal was to write a novel about cultivating immortals, which I have done now, and also added family elements. What I want to express about this novel is that the family flow is not just one protagonist, but multiple people, such as Yang Yueping, Yang Ruitao, whom I wrote about, and then there are several more prominent ones. Their characters, appearance and growth trajectories are all different. So if you can't stand it, you can jump to the second volume and start reading. The first volume is just the end of some branches. I just want to use the first volume to describe the plot of the third and fourth volumes.

Many novels about family affairs are written like a running account. What you do today is what you will do tomorrow. The writing style is too straightforward, without ups and downs and contradictions, and the meaning of literature is forgotten.

It feels okay. I like this kind of slow-burning style. The kind of cool stories where the protagonist chats with his cousin usually collapse. Come on.

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