Tianyun Immortal Way

First place 🙄, please update more, there are too few and I don't want to read it.

It's pretty well written in the family stream, but I feel like I have three small suggestions. 1. The protagonist doesn't have any killer skills. He knows a little bit of everything, but nothing particularly powerful. He can add magical powers to kill with one hit or escape, even if there are sequelae; 2. There is also the trap of the soul-eating insect. It's been too long. At the very least, you need to know what your opponent's cultivation level is and what his power is. It's been like this for 200 chapters, like a knife hanging over your head. It's very awkward and depressing to watch. Let's get to the bottom of it first. 3. It feels like you're fighting all the time and it's a plot that can be cultivated for many years. Otherwise, it's too compact and a bit aesthetically tired;

Of the author's three fairy tale books, Tianshi Xundao is the best. Doppo's work is outrageous, plagiarism is serious, and the quality is relatively poor. Now this book is a little better than Doppo, but the writing and plot are much worse than Tianshi, especially the battle description is a bit eye-catching.

Heavenly Master Seeking the Way, why don't you write about it? It's very interesting, but it's a pity.

It turns out that Celestial Master Xun Dao was written by you. I have been chasing him to become an immortal all by himself, but I didn't realize it was your new vest. But why did Celestial Master Xun Dao enter the palace? I think it was well written. It's a pity, it's really a pity 😐

Why did the author write about family history? Isn't it great that the mortal stream in the previous book was good? Although the character of the protagonist in the previous book was a bit unflattering, but I could barely read it, this one is really unbearable. If the author could rewrite a mortal-style novel, the character of the protagonist should not be the same as the previous book. With your previous book's level, it should be popular. Why would you follow the trend and write a family-style book?

I have written almost 100 chapters, but the spiritual root problem has not been solved yet, and I am still in the Qi refining period.

The author is also an experienced writer. This family novel is much better than the family novels written by many new authors. The results are a bit behind. I hope the author can continue going

The writing is a bit messy, sometimes Zhao Guo, sometimes Yan Guo, the male protagonist's name alone is wrong in several chapters, give it a try and read the chapters you bought, and I won't follow it in the future.

It's really tiring to watch, besides fighting there's still fighting

This book is about to poison people even when Shen Nong comes... No wonder there are only over 100 comments for more than 600 chapters...

Is the protagonist Flathead Brother? He is either fighting or on the way to fight.

As a bookworm for 20 years, I can give this book 90 points. There is a little less human connection than ordinary people, the fighting is absolutely wonderful, the training system is not clear enough, after all, it is still in the foundation building stage. There are not many adventures, but there are many things... It is recommended to write more about daily life, cultivation, and system thinking. Too many things are the same and have no focus. Ordinary people write about ordinary things. Hold on and don't collapse! Don't be too fast! He has the potential to become a god, just change his name back

The content of one chapter is a bit short and not enough to read. I think it will be great to finish it as soon as possible and manage the work well!

The price system is too tight, it feels a bit like using penny in the 1970s and 1980s😂

What did the couple write so quickly? More than 500 of them have been building water, ruins, secret realms, nothing, and have been on the front line. Why don't you write about the era of martial arts empire ᥬ😂᭄

It's been so long since the foundation was established, and the person who didn't want to try his best to find more things came back to prepare for the formation of pills. Isn't it normal to go out to search for more than a dozen times for more than two hundred years, and then come back to visit the family every few decades? The talented disciples of the sect have to go out and look for opportunities Without more map battles and adventurous colors, how much progress can be made?

Highly toxic. It was entirely possible for the enemy to capture the protagonist alive and threaten the whole family, but he didn't do it! Give away the resources you fight for to others at will!

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I saw this book in a group and saw that the author still insisted on updating it during the New Year. I was really attentive and read it in one sitting. The author's layout is quite good, but there is a lack of logic in some places. For example, the initial teleportation array can be built even by the Chen family. It is so easy to travel from one place to one city for so many days. I hope the author can sort it out.      NPC，，，，，，， Overall, the pace of this book is quite tight. I hope the author can go a little deeper into describing human psychology and make other characters more vivid. For example, Jin Nanting is better. He can explore his potential and write about it. If the Chen family works together, it would not be good if other families are all scheming, right? After writing so much, I still give a reward to express my gratitude. Come on, the author!

Does any master know~ Which masterpiece is this book plagiarized from?

Several of the author's books are pretty good, why don't you continue writing them?

Work hard and make progress step by step, and every harvest brings a full sense of accomplishment. Wish you great sales. Borrowing the treasure to promote the cute new book "Family Cultivation of Immortality: Rebirth in the Demon Clan Farm", Wang Haihan

The author's book is very good, please update it soon😆😆

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are disturbing, please mute me.