Ten Thousand Horrible Immortals

I found a problem, that is, the current Xianxia style foundation building requires foundation building pills. Shouldn't we attack the Foundation Establishment Realm on our own first, and then ask for help from the Foundation Establishment Pill when it fails? Geniuses and monsters all rely on their own talents to reach the realm, and only losers succeed after failing several times. They only rely on sect elixirs to build their foundation, or their talents are neither above nor below. Do you use elixirs just to be on the safe side? Why do you think about taking elixirs to build your foundation as soon as you come up? This is not normal😓😓😓

It's a pity that the protagonist has three spiritual roots, two foundation-building pills, and a golden finger. He doesn't want to practice cultivation and forcefully create all kinds of conflicts. Everyone wants the protagonist to die. The protagonist is either seeking death or on the road to death. He goes all the way! The 5th level of Qi training will kill the 678th level of Qi training. The 7th level of Qi training will kill the 9th level of Qi training. It is estimated that the 8th level of Qi training will soon kill the foundation!

I found a problem, that is, the protagonist is always busy and never rests. After the incident is over, another incident occurs. . . . There are also too many enemies, really too many. One brainless villain is eliminated, and then another brainless villain comes. Many times, the anger is directed at the protagonist, and then the protagonist kills him. . . I wonder if a villain with such a personality would really meet the protagonist? He shouldn't have been killed long ago.

According to the background written by the author, it seems that everyone should be killed if they meet each other. The sects are all running around with enemies, but there are still so many people. It's awesome.

It's okay, but I always like to write about how girls are delicate and strong, and how the protagonist is unmoved 😅. I feel that your label of no heroine may be a bit dangerous. I personally don't like to read these. I watch no heroine just to avoid watching these disgusting plots. It's not much, but it's as disgusting as rice mixed with rat shit 😄

Well written, but the system is superfluous

It felt good in the front, but suddenly the protagonist's brain was squeezed by the door. In the original town, I still knew how to be patient, but when I arrived at the sect, it seemed that there was only water left in my mind, for fear that others would not notice me.

It's too frequent. They always get into fights. I'm tired of watching the fights. Could you please take some time to recuperate? Before it's over here, the fight is coming over there.

There is a bit too much nonsense in the early stages of this book. It can be revised appropriately.

In fact, the idea is good, the poisonous points are not bad, and the various settings are not too bad, but the results are not as good as the author expected. As a veteran bookworm, I would like to tell the author this: when the author and the works are not famous, or even a new author, if you really want to write the ideal novel, you must first write the work as much as possible Besides, there are several chapters that start from the 80th or 90th chapter that fully prevent theft. I can't say it's wrong, but the strategy must be wrong. They are not great authors, and the work is not a new setting. Premature and strict anti-theft will not attract many readers. It is not attractive enough. Those great authors have never thought of strict anti-theft. Maybe I didn't fully express what I meant.

This book is very well written, come on,

If you do this, no one will get the Foundation Establishment Pill every time you send everyone into the secret realm! ! ! ! This is still 100% impossible to obtain with the Secret Realm Foundation Establishment Pill! ! ! What is written about Jindan Yuanying later is nonsense! ! ! How about you be more exaggerated and build your foundation by eating some shit! ! !

It's okay, I can read it It's just that this acceptance speech is too sad Since you decided to be a eunuch if you can't reach the desired data three months after it was put on the shelf Then I have to wait four months to see if your book is dead, and then take a look Whose money is blown by the strong wind?

The plot is good, but the author's writing style is poor, and the inner drama is very cumbersome to write, yes! It just gives people the impression that you need to use three sentences to explain something in one sentence. It is recommended to read the books of those seniors and learn these writing methods. I think your grades will be better!

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On the recommendation vote, be optimistic about this book

Author, I think your update is a big problem.

If there weren't so many illegal and poisonous points, your grades wouldn't be so bad. The end-of-chapter comments would be even higher than they are now. You only know one or two tricks to promote the plot. Do more research on the things that promote the plot. You shouldn't despise such an important thing.

The author has created a group. If you are interested, you can join the group to communicate with the author. It's too bad that there is only one author besides me.