The Beginning of American Comics Integrates the People of the Motherland

It's too weak. It overpowers the protagonist's combat power. The protagonist hasn't learned to fly until it's released. The writing is mediocre, the plot is mediocre, the dialogue is awkward, the content is watery, and there are too many things added. The author failed to grasp it well, making the plot very messy. A person who ruins the motherland still has to make a percentage progress bar. It's better to just give the ability to the people of the motherland and slowly advance to the silver super.

Assess is too awesome woo woo

If you want to be a protective umbrella for mutants, if nuclear power is average, just killing a few people is not enough. You must at least show in front of the whole world that you have the ability to challenge an entire aircraft carrier fleet. And it is generally incapable of destroying the dead. Let the opponent resist even for a moment, because being able to resist means that you can fight back, then your existence is at most an alien that can be killed at a certain price It will definitely not serve as a nuclear deterrent Of course, if you regularly clean up the country's top officials, that's another factor

Hahahahahaha, you even started integrating the people from the motherland. I thought the protagonist was a person from the motherland at the beginning. After reading the first chapter, I started from scratch (1% of the people from the motherland) 🤫

But no one who writes about the people of the motherland can read it. He is just a self-proclaimed weirdo. Only when he uses TikTok too much will he feel that the people of the motherland are awesome.

1% Has a force of 7 tons, 2% has a force of 15 tons, 5% has a force of 39 tons, and 12% has a force of 97 tons. On average, every 1% of the force is only about 7 to 8 tons. Isn't it really true that 100% of the motherland's talents have a force of 700 tons? Author, you can suppress the protagonist's strength. Originally, I don't care about this, but you have to write it reasonably. According to what you have written so far, it is obviously unreasonable. I originally thought that this percentage would increase exponentially, but I didn't expect it to increase proportionally, and the ratio is so low? (Only 7 to 8 tons of force per 1%)? If you think that the people of the motherland can only have the strength of more than 700 tons, the problem is that you yourself said in the book that you assume that the people of the motherland have the strength of 70 to 80% of Superman. Are you disparaging Superman by writing this? Judging from the movie Henry's performance in lifting a concrete building and easily pulling a 10,000-ton ship, Superman's strength starts at least 10,000 tons, and in the Easter egg of Batman VS Superman, it is mentioned that Superman pushes the continental plate to prevent earthquakes (from this point of view, Superman's strength is already inestimable and cannot be simply described with numbers). I hope the author can really write about 70% to 80% of Superman's strength. From the current point of view, even if the protagonist, a native of the motherland, reaches 100%, he will not have the strength of 70% or 80% of Superman, and even 0.78% Is enough to meet him.

I hope it will be helpful to the author. It is too difficult to find a good story about the Marvel universe and the X-Men universe. As for DC, I am not interested in anything else except Superman and Wonder Woman. I have carefully checked the information. I have watched the above movies twice, and some have watched them three times.

Do you think Gu Yi is a wet market aunt? You have to get involved in everything?

Do you know what I feel when I read this paragraph? It's the same as when Kong Yiji showed off that he knew the eighteen ways to write the word fennel. He was self-righteous, arrogant and ignorant

When writing about people of the motherland, each one is worse than the last. I have read more than a dozen, but only two or three are okay.

No, no, no one thinks Azu is more powerful than Superman, right?

There is a reason why it is not popular 🔥. The author should review it himself. You should read what you wrote as a reader!

Do you like well, good, fine so much? Like a clown 😅 If you really want to show off your English skills, why don't you write the entire article in English? In this way, I still admire you as a talent

Click in to take a look. Another routine to defeat monsters, upgrade and unlock. Never seen again.

It's a bit confusing for the people of the motherland to fight the Hulk.

Generally speaking, what are the people of the motherland like? His strength is not to mention 700 tons. What happened to 7,000 tons? Isn't it just like playing when Magneto hits him? Not to mention when he was fighting Phoenix Girl, Magneto set up a stadium with tens of thousands of tons. If you use two steel columns as a hydraulic press and squeeze them, wouldn't they become ketchup?

The unlocking progress is 1%, a routine from many years ago, haha

Super nanny system + super nanny, writing about people of the motherland who are selling sheep's clothing as dog meat, and the system's puppet protagonist. The protagonist does whatever the system wants the protagonist to do without any brains.

An Asian or a mutant is called a native of the motherland. Where is your country? The English context is very suitable in that black robe, but the Chinese context is very strange.

The people of the motherland are not all that strong in Marvel, and here you have a progress unlock.

I've only read Chapter 43. Mutants, Marvel characters, and Transformers have all appeared. I don't know what else will follow. Is the author right?

I think it's a bit outrageous to write that you only have 9,000 tons of power by absorbing cosmic energy and system help. . Is it a little too weak? The force of 9,000 tons cannot even pull a cruise ship. . The movie version of Superman easily pulls up a 100,000-ton ship with one hand. .

Originally, Marvel would be confused if they added X-Men, and they also added Transformers. I just want to say that the Marvel Cinematic Universe is not enough for you to write? It's such a mess, why don't you just include Teletubbies? It's so disgusting🤢

Seeing the Decepticons and NPC supporting characters there was so terrifying that it blinded me. I thought it was normal at first glance, but after subscribing to more than 400 chapters, I just treated it like dog food.

When I looked at it, Ancient One suddenly appeared, and I couldn't stand it for a moment. It's OK to mix them together, but it's too abrupt and meaningless... And to be honest, this native is the weakest one I have ever seen. The laser eye can only be used for 5 seconds... It's okay

There are no big poisonous points, but there are a bunch of small poisonous points, one for every few chapters.

A very standard white text. Although the wording in it is very watery and the ending is not very good. But it's still okay to hit Facebook as a show-off.

Are these two books written by another author?

Do you know why Marvel separated the X-Men and Iron Man series? Because it's unreasonable to treat mutants like this. What kind of superheroes are Iron Man and Captain America? They are super thugs.

Chapter 57, is the five-second ray time cumulative? You're kidding me. . Shouldn't it be used for no more than five seconds at a time?