I Write Diaries in the Marvel Universe, and Iron Man Crashes from the Start

When Thor learns that he's been shaved, blinded in one eye, and his beloved hammer has been crushed, and most importantly, that because he didn't behead Thanos, half the universe's population has been wiped out, he's filled with remorse and becomes a reclusive couch potato. While the protagonist's actions might seem like a fleeting thought, the impact on Thor is profound.

This is clearly your true feeling! Who would write a diary like this? It's awkward and distracting to read; you can't even read it without thinking!

When Nick Fury learns that S. H. I. E. L. D. Should be called Snake Shield, will he be furious? When he realizes that harboring aliens will harm Earth, and considering that almost nothing he's done is good, what will Nick Fury do? Will he only be able to pray to Captain Marvel or seek help from Asgard to destroy Snake Shield and the Skrulls?

How did this novel become so popular? Who's even reading it? The parts from Tony getting the diary to chapter six were pretty awkward. And what's with the protagonist introducing this flying creature—does it even recognize its master? Did the author just fly in from somewhere? Isn't Qidian known for writing coming-of-age stories with engaging narratives? Or is this a novel from a reading platform?

How could the author connect diary writing with fighting crime? I don't understand.

The beginning was alright, but the latter part became just a retelling of the original plot with filler words, like a compilation of marketing posts. Why compare it to marketing posts? Because in order to reach a high word count and deliberately spoil Marvel characters, the author's entire diary writing style and tone are like a marketing post bombarding the audience, not a diary at all.

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to become a disciple of Master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu his devoted follower, joins the Spirit Hall, supports the Spirit Hall in unifying the two empires, and takes his wife Xue'er to meet his father Tang Hao.

It's tough. 50% Of the content is diary entries spoiling the plot, reviewing and criticizing the movie; 40% is about how characters are shocked after watching it, then the story continues exactly as it was; and the remaining 10% is just descriptions of the protagonist that are neither here nor there.

Who would write a diary in the style of writing online rants? The diary entries don't read like a diary at all; they're all spoilers and rants, it's too deliberate.

Why is it always about fighting crime? The US itself doesn't care about crime, and S. H. I. E. L. D. Doesn't care about street crime. Are you out of your mind, some time traveler fighting crime?