American Comics: From Hogwarts to God Among Men

Why did you copy Superman's bloodline and suppress his upgrade? Take off your pants and fart

There is no concept of blue bars in Harry Potter. There is no need to force one. If it is a normal world and there are restrictions, then forget it. This is DC. Infinite magic is nothing. The pressure is too heavy, and even after copying Superman's abilities, it's still weak. It feels like it can't grow, and there's no desire to continue watching. You should relax some restrictions appropriately.

I don't know why it has to be written together, why can't it be reopened through time travel? This kind of hybrid writing method is almost impossible to complete the book, especially if it is mixed with the DC world. DC is inherently messy, with too many and complicated concepts, and the wizarding world of Hogwarts is lightweight compared to DC. It is just like Tyson suddenly meeting Taylor while fighting. They are not on the same level, and I don't expect it to be able to complete the book. .

The setting is good and the writing is average. First of all, the system has a low sense of existence. It does not appear once in ten chapters, which makes the system appear unexpected to readers. Secondly, it is the processing of chapter 20. The owl wants to kill the protagonist and the protagonist wants revenge. What a climax. What is the result? How to write it? Is the protagonist letting things go? Just kill a gangster and forget about it? Is the protagonist incapable of catching it or can't he flip the table? Let a mouse poop on your head every day? Spying on the protagonist in the dark? Doesn't it matter if the protagonist is killed? The reader felt a lump in his throat and was disgusting to death. The part about empathizing with Falcone was even more outrageous. There was no foreshadowing or hint at the beginning. He just wrote about empathy and even set up a tombstone for the black boss who wanted to kill him. Didn't the reader feel uncomfortable after reading it? Isn't this just pure deus ex machina? I suggest you correct the poisonous points first before writing, or sign up for a class on writing novels and compositions. There are many poisonous points but they are dense, large and small.

Just watch it first, if you become a superhero protecting the United States, forget it. In American comics, time travelers can kill villains for the sake of profit and their own safety, rather than the so-called killing of villains to protect ordinary American people and protect a country that harvests other countries through its economy, military and culture. Don't say that reality has nothing to do with the work. The same goes for the American government depicted in American comics. That's how the author wrote it.

I really vomited. What's the point of falling in love with the label of not having a heroine? 😂😂😂

The author has been criticized like this and his grades are mediocre, but he is still writing. I admire that no matter how messy it is, at least it has an ending. Unlike some old eunuchs with explosive grades, they are very cheating. Or those eunuchs who still have subscriptions but are resolute

Now this movie, now that movie, it's a mess! Writing about Deadpool breaking the wall is the biggest poisonous point!

Too licking Batman. That's not to say that you can't recognize superheroes or even be their followers, but this is a cool article, and the protagonist has cheats. Ever since your Patronus Charm was awakened for bullshit reasons like "making sure people stay grateful to superheroes," I knew your protagonist was going to be a support person and a nanny. There is something interesting about this.

No wonder the exemption is limited, the writing is really stupid. I wrote something big