Why Does Your Game Have a Sense of History?

The subject matter is good, but the author looks like a newcomer, and the writing is very sloppy and exaggerated. He fails to describe what is fun about this game. It feels like watching someone play Return of the Great Sage.

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It looks like a junior high school student translating sentences from classical Chinese. If there is no translation modification, you can just use classical Chinese. It's so embarrassing to watch this dialogue

After reading it for a long time, my heart stopped and it was difficult to calm down. It was like drinking sweet rain, feeling hungry or thirsty, and it was difficult to regain my consciousness. Looking at his book for a long time, it was like opening a golden letter and a jade letter, and thousands of years of history were suddenly spread out in front of me. The power of his writing is as powerful as the rushing waves of the Yellow River, outlining the grandeur of the changing dynasties; the delicate parts are like spring rain moistening things, describing the subtleties of the characters' hearts. The textual research is detailed, the local government system is based on canons, and the clothing and utensils are all full of craftsmanship. It makes readers feel like they are in the beacon smoke of the court, the streets and alleys, hearing the sound of gold and iron horses, and witnessing the rituals of the gentry wearing hairpins. The characters in the book may have ambitions to help the country, or may be cunning and deceitful. Their different temperaments are vividly reflected on the page. If the righteousness of the family and the country are intertwined with the love of children, and the rise and fall of governance are related to personal destiny, it not only shows the coldness of the historical writing, but also the gentleness of the literary heart. The prose is quaint and concise, with eloquent diction, just like ancient bronze vessels. The mottled parts show the vicissitudes of time, and the brilliance shows the outstanding craftsmanship. Sincerely, it is a masterpiece of melting history and casting prose, which is enough to make the viewers sigh and praise each section! The layman's idea is that it feels like taking a history class. The writing is quite immersive. I'll add more updates bro.

When people from other worlds play games like Chu-Han War and Dynasty Warriors, they should be just like us playing Warring States Warriors. When I first played, I only thought about how to run the map, how to mow the grass, and how to accumulate combos. I didn't care about the historical plot, architectural style, or game background. I don't even know what the history of the Warring States Period is about now.

It would be more shocking to put the background setting to shock the players, rather than directly posting it in the Historical Records - Chen She Family. More than two thousand years have passed, and Ning Youzhong, the princes, generals and ministers, is still the strongest voice of the common people at the bottom and the foundation of the bottom layer of Chinese civilization.

The author's historical knowledge is still at the stage where Liu Bang is a true villain, Xiang Yu is a true gentleman, and the world will not rebel until the ancestral dragon dies. It is a standard Douyou historical level.

It has a sense of history and a sense of weight. You have to have feelings for that period of history to feel this way. Otherwise it would be impossible

This is a bit of my imagination. For example, in The Rise of the Empire - Qin, the player joins a country called Zhao and rushes to a place called Changping to resist Qin's invasion. Looking at 400,000 companions, the player thinks about how to grab heads - and grabs his own head. Another dungeon has arrived, and the player is thinking - Qin is so powerful, and at the strong request of the player, the Qin camp is opened. For the glory of the empire, the player rushes to Julu under the leadership of a general named Zhang Han. It is said that the Chu army has been surrounded by a river. This is safe - why does the chest hurt? . Chu is so powerful and strongly demands to join the Chu army, but why is he being surrounded again? I heard that there is an old gangster on the other side, how can he beat us, why is singing coming from all directions - why is my heart not beating anymore.

This book is a tomato-level book. It should be a new author. He started to enjoy himself as he wrote it. It is obviously similar to the book World War next door, but it is too different. The plot is incomprehensible. The image of the ancients is weak and there are no interesting anecdotes. I feel that the author's historical level belongs to Baidu Encyclopedia. 3 Minutes will take you to understand the xxx level. If you come here for the personality charm of the ancients, you can leave.

It can only be said that a game like yours is completely rubbish.

My evaluation misses the point I think what the audience wants to see is the positive feedback from another world to China's magnificent history, rather than the author's characters complaining over and over again about how outrageous the history is or praising how awesome the protagonist is Purely personal feelings, don't comment if you don't like it

Looking at the introduction, I feel that it is not good. Without the history and cultural influence, I can only rely on the game to have a hammer. Unless you create the background world view of the game and promote it like lol, you can impress people. If people just run the map, it will be good if they can remember the name of the NPC.

It only takes one chapter to tell that the author doesn't have the writing skills. Can anyone recommend an alternative work?

After reading more than ten chapters, what is the meaning of the player's existence? From the beginning to the end, there is almost no content other than bragging about the game and scorning the NPCs.

For most readers, Belisarius/Cid have no meaning, but they are actually heroes of their nation. But in the eyes of people who do not understand the relevant history, it is just a name How arrogant to think that a civilization lacks heroes?

Yes, Xiang Yu is brave and can fight very well. Then what? The losers were divided into piles. If you really want to write a sense of history, you should fully reflect the differences between the two people and completely write out their advantages and disadvantages. But in your current content, you have completely failed to see the advantages of Liu Bang and the shortcomings of Xiang Yu. Except for fighting, in what other ways is Xiang Yu better than Liu Bang?

It is a bit different from that World War II book, purely in terms of subject matter. The war is visible to the naked eye, and everyone regardless of race, country, or culture can intuitively feel the disappearance of life. But it's very confusing when you use this point to write history. With different cultural backgrounds, some people may not understand the choices of historical figures at all.

It doesn't look like a game at all. This game doesn't look like an online game or a stand-alone game. Everyone's progress is the same, and the replayability of the copy is completely invisible. . . . . . .

It doesn't burn when it should, the characters are inserted too deliberately, and the writing is worse than a word game.

They use a mobile phone worth $7,000 or $8,000 or a graphics card or a computer worth $10,000 to deceive you into paying attention to them three times in a row. Then they send a message saying that you have won a prize, but you have to pay for shipping. They have given you thousands of prizes, and there is still only a small amount of shipping cost, so they just cheated you out of your money. For technical upgrades, freight is payable, but you have to pay him a registration fee or an after-tax fee. Just to remind others to pay attention to the safety of their own property, no need to follow, comment, reply or collect. I don't know what Station B wants to do, so I sent a message to remind others to be careful of scammers and blocked my account.

What I write is all superficial and does not go into depth at all.

It's a bit embarrassing, whether it's reading the script to my dad or after trying out the game, it feels very awkward. What do you mean by killing two people with Xiang Yu and then getting on top, and still remembering it? Why did the reviewer find out that he was GAY and liked this one? Wouldn't a normal person just think that this general is awesome and then lose it? I still think about it so much and have endless aftertaste and stamina. To have stamina, you need to have foreshadowing and character highlights before. You just make this big drama without showing anything, and you don't feel the depth of history at all. I just feel awkward.

After reading five chapters, I felt like I was playing AI chat. If you say you are moved, you will be moved, if you say you are angry, you will be angry.

Let people feel the Chinese succubus. How do you feel when you run to play a lawn mowing game and even Xiang Yu can be chosen? Junk novels

Very good, the first few chapters are complete, goddamn the starting option is Yu. Does an auditor have that ability? It's enough to just follow along as a soldier. If you want to become an official, you have to work your way up slowly. Without any experience, oh, I directly became a high official. Isn't this just fucking disgusting? He doesn't know how to take care of people, and he doesn't know how to fight a war. Virtual 3D real game, written like a 2D word game.

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Also, please fix the matter between Emperor Wu and the Xiongnu. You are really rubbish. It has simply lowered the quality of Emperor Wu's work. After all, it was Emperor Wu who turned the Han Dynasty into a national symbol. How could he have halved the wealth of the common people and left the common people with no benefits? If he did not distribute the benefits to the people, why would we, the people, regret the name of our nation?

The player's subjective initiative is too low 😂. Many of the people who were able to cause trouble when I read it didn't look like a player. But, it can also explain why this is the case, which is outrageous, because the player's plane does not have such history 😂 Therefore, there are too many historical writing tendencies, and the game aspect feels that it can be improved.

Can you please stop adding NPC in front of the name all the time? Each plot will explain whether the player replaces the original character. It would be a bit uncomfortable to read multiple NPCs.