Bailu Xianyuan

Just accept this person who always travels through time and doesn't believe in ghosts and gods.

Good subject matter, but the author's skills are too poor. After reading 3 chapters, I could have directly stated my wish to become an immortal and asked questions. Unfortunately, it was too weak and made the book a mess. No wonder the results are so poor.

The introduction gave me high expectations, but the content gap is a bit big.

Just like the title, the previous introduction gave me a feeling of fantasy cultivation with a huge world view, a relatively strict hierarchy, and a rather fantastic world! The latter part gives me the feeling of deceiving the whole world, turning fiction into reality and becoming a legend! After reading the book, after only three chapters, you will find that the protagonist is a loser, the logic is not fluent, and even the basic character cannot be established~ I don't know where the author copied the introduction from, but I want to say that if you don't have the writing skills, try not to play high-end~ Who asked you to steal the introduction randomly? It's too fragmented, your protagonist is nothing, it's a waste of my time~😅😅

I didn't know that the water was good, and I kept groaning without pain. Even if I described life in the last dream, I still had to show some spirit when I woke up. Firstly, I didn't have the perseverance to seek immortality, and secondly, I didn't have a thorough understanding. The protagonist has no sense of ownership and is just an ordinary mortal, struggling in life.

No matter how you look at the male protagonist, he is just trash

You say that you have become an immortal, yet you still make fools of ordinary people. Just like a demon cultivator

It has the flavor of a traditional fairy tale. There are fewer and fewer such works. Now even the officials are engaging in black mythology. All I can say is, haha

Generally, writing too slowly is not very attractive

The subject matter is really good, but my writing skills are really inferior.

I really don't know what to say, no matter what novel I read at Qidian, this can be ugly?! Can you guys recommend some to me? I'm also reading a lot.

After reading two chapters, it reminded me of The Great Sage by Li Qingshan. It's a pity that he didn't write the emotions of the Great Sage.

It looks okay so far. If I stick to 🤭, I can recover my investment.

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