I Really Am the Second Generation of an Immortal

I was just saying I wanted to find a book about second-generation immortals to read, and here it is, but it's not what I was looking for. I wanted to read about the extravagant and decadent lives of second-generation immortals.

Stop writing this. This time, how about writing a Gujian series plus Xianjian? You can start from the ancient times of Gujian.

Using your hands and feet is not as good as rolling your face on the keyboard. Give your hand to the adorable Xiuxin (the Heavenly Emperor).

How about we write a Legend of Sword and Fairy story again? Dude, you're a master at writing multiverse Legend of Sword and Fairy stories.

I would like to make a suggestion: the author's world-building in the novel is too empty. The Fifteen Provinces of Tianyun are just a noun and lack any sense of reality. The protagonist is just performing one show after another on an empty stage.

Not very good. I've read 12 chapters, and it's not very engaging.

The story doesn't match the topic, and the protagonist doesn't seem very bright; he's only holding on because of some kind of cheat ability.

Actually, I wanted to read the follow-up chapters of "The Dream of the Thunderbolt Apartment" and join a group. I've only read up to the section on the Grand Master of the Imperial Academy, so I don't know if the author is still updating. I think it's quite good.

The first time the Peacock Pavilion Master mentioned her name was Ji Nishang, it later became Su Munian.

I watched it three times and it still didn't take me ten minutes. What should I do?