My Immortal Destiny Compensation Critical Hit System

The system is a good system; it's just that this operation is a bit of a brain fart.

The gift-giving felt too deliberate, and the main character couldn't even disguise themselves; they seemed too carefree. Aside from these flaws, it's not bad.

The protagonist's cheat-like abilities are good, but it's frustrating that he doesn't know how to maximize his own interests... The handling of these situations is poor. Keep up the good work and be more imaginative!

Is this giving the Virgin Mary a legitimizing facade?

Doesn't your immortal-level cultivation technique come with any accompanying immortal techniques? Are you just practicing individual skills?

Is it wrong to offer Geng Metal to one's master/disciple? Must it be given to a stranger?

Gangsters cultivating immortality, and daring to casually take immortal opportunities—they're practically courting death! They can't even accept the obvious ones, yet they gamble on stones, thinking they're something special just because they secretly get some pills and immortal opportunities.

Give someone one life and you'll get ten lives in return; give someone one leg and you'll get ten legs in return.

Well, the premise is good, and the writing is decent, but after reading over sixty chapters, I inexplicably felt something was missing. I think it's because there weren't many satisfying moments. Although the protagonist's compensation for critical hits with various magical treasures, herbs, and cultivation techniques is incredibly powerful, and his leveling up is fast, giving things away for…

Doesn't the protagonist know he needs to disguise himself when selling things? He should at least create an alias, otherwise he'll be in trouble if he gets hunted down.