Exchange Master in the Movie World

Forget the Frankenstein's monster trope, what's the point of the cheat system after dozens of chapters? What's the initial reward even mentioned? The system's presence is practically zero. I suggest dropping "Exchange Master" from the title and just calling it "Movie World."

The book starts off inexplicably, and then it becomes a complete mess, with all sorts of things thrown in. After reading dozens of chapters, I was still confused and had no idea what was going on. The author is overthinking things, frantically adding ingredients to the pot, and indulging in self-admiration.

They hyped it up like a magic herb to lure people in, but after reading dozens of chapters, I still don't understand it. It's too chaotic, a complete mess! They just forced it together! If they'd only cut a couple less stitches, it wouldn't be such a mess! I'll just read a bit more in the bathroom to kill time.

The last book flopped, and they still haven't learned their lesson. They're still trying to merge monsters like this. The beginning should be the beginning, the big shots should be big shots: Zhao Ruilong's anti-gang campaign should be the anti-gang campaign, Yu Huanshui should be Yu Huanshui. The whole thing is a chaotic mess of fusion. Even if you have a bunch of great authors recommending your book, it'll still fail.

The logic is chaotic, the plot is confusing, and it's completely self-indulgent; there's a reason this book did poorly.

I've read 70 chapters already. I was listening to the audiobook before. I still don't understand it. What's the "exchange master" exchanging? I've been listening to the story, but it's too confusing. The author always seems to think they've explained things clearly. Actually, it's all just the author's assumption that everyone understands what they've written.

So many people are complaining about your problematic writing style in the comments, can't you even fix it? What's the point of what you've written now, just to plant foreshadowing? You're almost at 100,000 words, and your writing is already a flop. The foreshadowing hasn't even been revealed, and you're already discouraging readers from reading further.

The plot unfolds haphazardly, too fragmented. There's virtually no development for the supporting characters later on; they're just mere plot devices.

There's no main plot, no goal, it's too chaotic, I'm leaving now.

Quite disappointing. "Hong Kong Variety Show Mayhem" is nowhere near as good as "Gialin's Anti-Triad Campaign." "Gialin's Anti-Triad Campaign" is set in modern times, and since fewer people write about it, it can attract attention as long as it's well-written. But "Hong Kong Variety Show Mayhem" is truly unwatchable.