Douluo: the Legend of the Spider King

Really, the character of the protagonist in your book is so bad that it makes people's blood pressure soar to 180. I feel like I want to give the protagonist a 'loving touch'. It's so bad.

Bibi Dong has two daughters. As her "son", the protagonist assumes the obligation to take care of her two sisters. This is very reasonable, right?😏

After reading more than 200 chapters, let me tell you my thoughts. The protagonist Wuhun's appearance is copied from Bibi Dong. He entered Notting City Junior College in the early stage instead of Shrek. When the game reached Wuhun City, he turned against him and joined the Wuhun Palace. The character's personality is not distinctive enough. In the early stage, Tang Hao was not sure about Tang Hao's absence. With a face like Bibi Dong's, he awakened the same martial spirit as Bibi Dong, but no one saw it when it was reported. Not to mention the Soul-Eating Spider Emperor, it was mistaken for the Soul-Eating Demon Spider, which is also a top-level animal martial spirit, and it is full of innate soul power. Just because you took a look at Tang San's information first, you thought that the Spirit Hall of Notting City was lying. Well, let's assume that you think so, then shouldn't you go and investigate thoroughly? Are you kidding me about sending you an urgent message? If it's true, why don't you stop talking and remove him from his post? Just ignore it? What is the point of having the protagonist attend Notting City Junior College for six years? Just to forcefully create conflict? There were many times in the future where I could kill Tang San and Xiao Wu, but I just held back and refused to kill, right? I was so indecisive, am I here to see your world view or am I here to see my fellow fans? And those people from Shrek, Ning Rongrong, and Zhu Zhuqing, are they half-cleaned, right? You already win over yourself, but then force yourself to push back. What kind of operation is this? Changed writer? Is the feeling of separation from front to back so severe? It's a big departure

I hope the author doesn't want to be too harsh, it feels a bit harsh. I feel like Flanders, apart from picking a little bit, everything else is okay, right? The purpose of letting Ma Hongjun go to that kind of place was to temporarily alleviate the shortcomings, otherwise he would have to die and there would be no other way.

After only reading a little bit of it, no one really thinks Bibi Dong is a good person, right? Is it true that the three senses follow the five senses?

After reading Chapter 40, I really can't stand it anymore. First of all, the life with Tang San and the others in school in the early stage was too deliberate to promote the plot. The protagonist is like a retard. Secondly, Tang San has been embarrassed because of it. It was too late in the spirit fighting arena. I didn't read the details. But I think let alone this fantasy world. Even if someone molests my girlfriend in reality, I definitely can't stand it. If I were Tang San at that time, I would not kill anyone, but the lesson is definitely learned.

To be honest, I have read a lot of the author's books I just hope I don't lick the protagonist group Don't always follow the protagonist group in the early stage To be honest, almost all Douluo fandoms that are popular nowadays are almost all following the pure Wuhundian route Looking at the front, I have been worried that these two situations will happen Oh, I am really afraid of going the same route as the Arrival of the Spider King... To be honest, you are really the author who pokes me the most with the Douluo character setting

Why do you have to write the main character so erotic? If you have a single female protagonist, don't touch other women. Maybe it's because I'm a germophobe.

I don't mean to be disparaging, and cool stories don't need to be clever, but I always feel that the protagonist is schizophrenic, does things inconsistently, and does not conform to normal people's logic, and is a bit crazy.

Forget it about your harem. The introduction emphasizes a single female protagonist, but the main text makes the protagonist so sexy. What kind of operation is this?

Come on, this is my first time watching this type of movie. I look forward to meeting the protagonist and Bibi Dong. It will definitely be exciting when the time comes🤗

Full of loopholes The Death Spider Emperor and the Soul-eating Pig Emperor were awakened in Notin, and they were born with full soul power. The Wuhun Palace recognized the Death Pig Emperor as the Death Demon Pig, and then let the orphan protagonist go to Notin Academy to attend school. The protagonist pretends to be Bibi Dong's son in front of Yu Xiaogang. Yu Xiaogang recognizes the protagonist's Death Pig Emperor martial spirit, and then directly confirms that the protagonist is a twin martial spirit.

I read Douluo and it was fine at the time. As for the protagonist, regardless of his morals, it was just a book anyway. But looking back now, TM is all a trap, and Tang San is a classic scumbag protagonist. First of all, Tang San was an orphan who was adopted since he was a child. The sect regarded him as his parents who raised him since he was a child, and there was nothing wrong with him. Then he decisively stole the sect's secret books and techniques, and was discovered. I just ran away, but when I was chased away by the law enforcement team and the elders and couldn't escape, I thought I was a gentleman and jumped off the cliff immediately, saving myself from being caught and tortured. Moreover, if I jumped, I could still survive if my luck didn't work out. Later, when I came to Douluo, it was a lot of messy things, but the most, most, most, and most infuriating and intolerable thing was that I turned that good young man Huo Yuhao into the Tang family's dog! ! ! ! ! But the reason why he is most angry is not this. You must know that Huo Yuhao has absolutely true love for Wang Donger! As a result, Wang Donger was directly killed, and then Wang Qiuer was continued to be killed, forcing Huo Yuhao to completely fear the loss of his beloved, and then released a thought to Huo Yuhao that Tang Wutong was Wang Donger and Wang Qiuer, so that Huo Yuhao, who fell into despair, could only forcefully regard Wang Wutong as Wang Donger and Wang Qiuer, making him willing to be a dog forever. Later, after reading too many novels, the most damning thing when I look back is that Tang San said it was divided into three, but after peeling off two soul fragments, it was also divided into three! Wang Dong'er was not Tang San's child at all. Looking at what happened later, at most it was Tang San who calculated to absorb Tang Wutong's soul fragments, which resulted in the three souls having some of the same characteristics! ! ! Just like Wang Dong'er doesn't think he is Wang Qiu'er, Wang Qiu'er doesn't think he is Wang Dong'er. To give a few examples from other novels, it's like one breath transforms three pure beings, Tongtian is Tongtian, primitive is primitive, or twins, although they come from the same piece of flesh, no one would think they are the same person! Or a god's soul was broken and then the split soul gave birth to various lives, but no one would think that those lives were of the same consciousness (the most typical situation is when the world's consciousness was broken into a race). Tang San definitely knew this from the beginning. Wang Dong'er was called Wang Dong at the beginning, and finally after exchanging thoughts with Huo Yuhao, he also said that his name was Wang Dong'er! ! ! The last and most disgusting thing is that Tang San had a dirty hand in the birth of Wang Dong'er and Wang Qiu'er. The meaning of their birth was to become Tang Wutong's further food. He had a dark hand to let them fuse with Tang Wutong's soul fragments, which was just to transform them into "same origin" as Tang Wutong and better swallow them. To put it nicely, it's called fusion! ! ! First, he injected Tang Wutong's soul fragment, and then after Wang Dong'er and Wang Qiu'er fused the fragments to possess the same traits as Tang Wutong, Tang San directly killed them both, leaving them with no chance to resist, and then let Tang Wutong swallow them safely. Devouring the two of them who had been transformed by evil hands into being completely homologous to Tang Wutong, laying the foundation of the God King in one fell swoop, it would also make Huo Yuhao completely lose all his heart and everything, and use his love for Wang Qiuer to become the Tang family's dog wholeheartedly! ! !

I prefer Douluo Yida and Douluo Thunder God. It's natural. Why do you have to be related to the protagonist? Do other people's affairs have much to do with you? Just follow your own main line. You insist on making Tang San infamous at every turn to show his darkness. Although Tang San in the original work is indeed a villain if you think about it, he is not so unbearable. Moreover, this is called Douluo Continent, not Earth Continent, and the moral standards really don't need to be that of a saint 😥

The only good thing is that the Death Spider Emperor and Soul-Eating Spider Emperor can perform self-spirit fusion and strengthening skills with the protagonist and Bibi Dong. Then the protagonist has a pustule on his head, the protagonist is Wolong, and the author is Fengchu🤷‍♂️doesn't understand their abnormal human brain circuits

The first thing I want to focus on is, 1. Why is the protagonist caught when he exposes his twin martial souls? Just because you have the martial spirit of the previous pope? 2. Why doesn't the protagonist join the Wuhun Palace? Because you can't write, you can only follow the plot? Written the protagonist to be pro-Wulhundian, without adding Wuhundian? The novel has been written, and those with high qualifications will be invited to enter the Wuhun Palace. You are the only one not to be invited, because all the innate soul power is blue silver grass. I only read the first ten chapters and found two big problems

There is no need to cleanse the Wuhun Palace. The really pitiful people in the Wuhun Palace are the worshipers of Golden Crocodile Douluo and the civilian soul masters. He saved them with his own life. The young master is actually a love brain. He didn't lose to the other party, but actually lost to his superior. He was actually a love brain.

The chapter where Xiao Wu gave the middle finger felt like it was evil in order to forcibly highlight Tang San's evil. It was too abrupt. This is the world of Douluo, not the earth. Even if Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing knew it, they wouldn't have such rich feelings. As for Ning Rongrong, the little witch character in front of her is definitely not a person of noble character. This is simply a scheming to alienate people. People in Douluo are all saints, and they all have moral obsessiveness 🤐 It's really poisonous for you to use this to alienate people.

The so-called master is a joke! There is no useless martial spirit, only a useless soul master! He has the nerve to say it himself! The theory that was put forward was not read by Wuhun 😰 because Bibi Dong was unwilling to kill him, so he just kept messing around 😰

To be honest, the protagonist in the article probably didn't offend the protagonist when he came to see Tang San, and he was trying to win over him. Then the protagonist treated himself like a saint and acted even more disgusting than Tang San. It means to accuse others from a high point, and then do not see any improvement in what you do. If you don't have enough experience, don't write about political humanity. Doing so will only make people think it's too embarrassing to talk about others? It's half-assed, okay, I've always been riding on the popularity of a villain named Tang San, and then the protagonist really turned out to be worse than Tang San. They all clamored to be the successor of socialism, and what they did and said were exactly like Tang San's successor. Anyway, when I read more than 40 chapters, I felt that the protagonist was doing something unknown. At the beginning, he had an intersection with Tang San, and they had to go to the Holy Soul Village together. There was no conflict in the middle. As mentioned in the previous article, the relationship was neither close nor enemies. What is written in the article is that you can be kind in front of others, but suddenly say bad things behind others after we are not together. Isn't this just doing one thing in front of others and doing another behind the scenes? How dare you say that people are two-faced? Writing articles is also messy, with memories interspersed between hunting for the third soul ring? You can write it before or after it, or in the middle. Are you writing a script or a TV series? You are the author and you have your own picture, but when you read it, it will be very confusing, right? Earlier, when Huang Dou Academy was hunting for soul rings, the screen suddenly jumped to explain the protagonist's five years of experience, and it was very sudden that Sister Yan, xxxxx. To be honest, the memories in the TV series are not recalled at this time. There are problems with the structure. The narrative needs to be coherent. It is not about writing what comes to mind here and there, and just filling in the things that have not been written. You can write the explanation during the time when you fall asleep after hunting for the soul ring, or you can finish it beforehand and write it during the battle, Slam Dunk Master? It takes several episodes to shoot a basket.

What kind of rubbish plot is written, saying that you have to keep a low profile and have to get close to Tang San, for fear that Tang Hao will go blind, right? The plot is blunt and stereotyped, and if it doesn't follow the original work, it won't be written at all.

After reading the first 30 chapters, first of all, there is nothing to say about the protagonist's choice of Bibi Dong. Everyone has his own choice. The main reason is that I don't understand what the protagonist wants to do. He said he wanted to join the Wuhun Palace, but he still didn't join. He stayed with Tang San for several years and wasted time. During this period, he also had to watch Yu Xiaogang to gain his sense of presence. During this period, it is a miracle that the protagonist was not hammered to death by Tang Hao. Like Bibi Dong, she said in front of Tang San that Xiao Wu was really a rabbit. After staying away from Shrek for several years, you ended up going to Tiandou? He also has to mislead Qian Renxue in all kinds of ways In general, I can only feel that the protagonist is quite brainless, doing all kinds of ridiculous and meaningless operations. He may have goals but has no ability to act at all. Other fans want to save the Wuhun Palace and join in as soon as possible and start planning. The protagonist of this book is a waste of time. If he hadn't been tricked by Yu Xiaogang when he was destined for the second Wuhun.

Can't it be written in a normal way? The subject matter is good but the plot is too rubbish. The group following in the early stage was too deliberate. Why can a pig's trotters at level 10 defeat a 400-year-old demon spider? The reason Tang San was able to kill the snake was because of the hidden weapon. Isn't there any explanation for the second ring of Pig's Knuckle Millennium? The fourth ring of the 30,000-year Tang Dynasty was fed by two fairy grasses.

This novel has some flaws in the front (at Notting College, the character design seems to have changed very quickly). After receiving the death assessment, it is considered good. Overall, it is not bad. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that the author mentioned a single heroine, Qian Renxue. But when I was at the Royal Academy, I insisted on teasing Ye Lingling every day. Although he later gave me the fairy grass (I didn't say what kind of grass it was), Ye Lingling never showed up even once after the Soul Master Competition. Let's not just accept it. At least it must be shown later that the protagonist really treats him as a sister or a friend. It's not too much to give her a small god status.

I endured more than ten chapters, what is this? This idea was wasted. I looked at the introduction and saw that this Wuhun actually joined the protagonist, and there were a lot of questions. I guess it was revised, but not revised enough. The preface did not match the postscript. I took a look at the table of contents and saw that Bibi Dong was already in the middle and late stages. I really don't know how to write if I don't follow the group. Am I using this idea if I am with the group?

The protagonist looks like Bibi Dong, and then Qian Renxue used Lovesickness Red with the protagonist. What happened? ? Qian Renxue found someone who looks just like her mother? ? ?

The biggest highlight is the single female protagonist. Even if you have a crush on her, she won't accept anyone she meets.

I want to ask about poisoning? Is this book about licking Yu Xiaogang? Wasn't this written in 2022? Are there any other single female protagonists written about Bibi Dong and A Yin? Is this book about Qian Renxue again?

Beautifully done. I hope the author tortures Tang San more.

The author can try to write about the second fight. After all, the first fight is too boring. Apart from being invincible, it is still invincible. Why don't you write a Dou Er, which will be closely linked to yours, and feature Ye Hao's son.