Douluo Dalu: What Do You Mean My Martial Soul Is Luckin Coffee?

The first major poisonous point: The protagonist's uncle is very good to the protagonist, and as a food type Contra, and he is only in his 40s and is very young, he will basically break through to a titled Douluo in the future. As a result, in Chapter 33, you have to arrange a second-hand Jiang Nannan Give him The second most poisonous point: Dai Huabin wanted to kill the protagonist, and he did it first and openly at the city gate. Many people saw it, but you told me that for a Soul Master student, I need a Contra to sign a renouncement contract? And you can also say that the protagonist's uncle is not from Shrek? He has already broken through to Contra, so who helped him hunt for the eight spirit rings in front of him? Also, he has been working in the inner courtyard for so many years, how can he still be outsourced? Really, if you write Dou Er and want to rebel against Shrek, I think that's okay, but you can't write it so ugly, right?

How powerful is the Duke of White Tiger? The pseudo-extreme ice crippled the Duke's second son and he didn't even dare to save it. It was Mu En who came to pressure. The outline should be to go to the sun and the moon, but this plot is just what the author thought of and wrote. It's too out of the ordinary.

Not the author. You just apologized for writing the plot of introducing Jiang Nannan to his uncle in the last chapter. In the next chapter, you wrote about being almost killed by Ma Xiaotiao. Are you ready to forgive Ma Xiaotao again? Help, the love trilogy is disgusting readers.

Good idea, but the plot is very toxic.

I came here from Douyin. I came across this novel tweet and specifically read it at Qidian. This idea is very good and I am very interested. But the writing of the article is really a mess, it can be said that it is just a mess. You either write about being funny, or you write about the protagonist's hard work. When you write a protagonist, you think about balancing literature every day. What does it mean when you write some writing on supporting characters every day? Do you think about finding a partner for your uncle every day, instead of thinking of ways to wish your uncle to become a god? It's too low-end. An 8-year-old boy is already thinking about his partner. Whenever a girl appears, he has to think about whether she is a suitable partner for marriage, and then write about it in various writing styles. Can you not let the sperm get into your head? Either you write about being funny, or you write about working hard to become a god.

I feel like what the author writes is based on what I've been looking for on Douyin lately.

According to the new setting of the Third Master, Ditian is actually a female dragon

From a plot development point of view, after being captured and returned to Star Dou, you should have been slapped in the face and moved towards the plot. But it turned out that you didn't regard Munn as a normal person at all. What did you think of a genius with at least a ten-thousand-year soul ring? What's more, they are relatives of their own members. Tell me which leader of a force would be stupid enough to suppress someone who will definitely be part of his core lineup in the future? What's more, this is Shrek. The key word for people is to protect one's shortcomings. If you want to change the sun and moon line, that's not how you turn it. The evaluation is that all the good ideas are wasted, and the plot is stupid.

Wherever there is luck, there must be Michelle Ice City. When I saw the title of the book, I wondered if there would be a heroine or villain of Michelle. After reading the introduction, it turns out that Michelle has a role.

A good subject matter was ruined by the author. Not only was it OOC but he was also demoted. In the front it was written not to be sold to evil soul masters, but in the back he went to the Empire of the Sun and the Moon. Then he made the Holy Ghost Church the state religion.