The Sword of the Heavens Comes Out to Kill the Immortals

The writing is unclear, there is no obvious main line, and it is east and west. It is the worst among all the Zhu Xian fans. It can be signed in this way, and the lower limit of the starting point is still very flexible.

I thought it was pretty good in the early stages, but the emotional scenes were too awkward and I couldn't stand the plot anymore, so I gave up.

There is no main line, just a lot of nonsense.

I just finished reading it and I think it was well written.

The author said that this book was slow to gain popularity, but the slow rise was not noticed at all. He was just copying the plot content, converting it into words and writing it in the book. Half of the chapter should be plot. It was taken from the original text. At least I saw that the previous chapters were

I would like to solemnly state that this is a book that sells Zhu Xian and Zhu Xian as dog meat. It can almost be regarded as a Zhu Xian fan. Because Zhu Xian fan cannot write or sign a contract, so I have to struggle with Zhu Xian. I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I can't satisfy you for the time being. There are also those who are struggling with the Yi Jin Jing. The Yi Jin Jing is a Taoist book and was later passed down to Bodhidharma. Buddhism and Taoism are one and the same. What are they struggling with? Finally, those who say I am a watery person refer to the first point. When I write a Zhu Xian fan, I am not allowed to have a slow pace?

About plagiarism! It is said that there are many people who are popular, but I am now in trouble. Regarding plagiarism, I would like to carefully explain that whether it is "Zhu Xian: Qingyun Sword Immortal" or "Starry Sky Dots of Light", it is my trumpet. I have posted it on Qidian before, and the contract signing notice came. I was ready to sign the contract, but it turned out that it was Zhu Xian: Qingyun Sword Immortal. Immortal fan fiction made it impossible to sign a contract, so I came up with "Goodbye Outside the Realm of Zhu Xian", which meant that I published it on other websites, but still couldn't sign a contract, so Zhu Xian fan fiction couldn't be written. Later, I changed the theme to no longer be a fan novel, but about the heavens, and then there was the current "Sword of Zhu Xian out of Zhu Xian". Therefore, there were some disharmony in the early stages of this novel, and that was because the main outline was changed. If plagiarism itself is considered plagiarism, then I have nothing to say.

I have only read twenty chapters. Let me share my personal opinion. The protagonist has an awkward personality but is not ruthless enough. He talks about kindness but is disgusting. If he has no ability to save Caomiao Village, he will not save it. I also need to explain, what do you mean, I have said it before. You don't believe me or anything. My words are more like self-liberation. Then When facing Zhang Xiaofan later, I am doing it for your own good. If you are too incompetent, you should not know this kind of thing. In Revenge of the Village, the protagonist just said this and asked Zhang Xiaofan to endure it. This inappropriate hypocrite always acted like I was doing it for your own good, which made it a bit uncomfortable to read.

Why doesn't Qidian have a blacklisting function?

After reading the author's historical works and browsing the comment section, I can only say: garbage should stay in the trash can.

Are you writing Zhu Xian as a romance? Momojiji, it's not daily life but love talk, this is killing immortals, what the hell.

The original work of Zhu Xian only has over one million words. You, the author, have only finished the Zhu Xian chapter with over 800,000 words. Visually, the Zhu Xian chapter has over one million words. Do you have to compete with the original work in terms of word count? And this is still Zhutianliu? You can tell how talented the author is just by looking at the number of words.

Lu Xueqi broke my guard with just one hee. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't write them. Writing them forcefully is extremely poisonous

I don't know what to say. I've been struggling for 30 chapters and haven't started cultivating immortality. I've been teaching others my own golden fingers everywhere. You've added too much nonsense to Zhuxian's cultivation system. I'm sick of it. You're really useless. It's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away.

Eating hundreds of meals, and then watching the whole village die like this, this protagonist has something special! ! !

In order to copy the original work, the author pretends that the protagonist does not know the plot, and then adds a few sentences from the protagonist to the original work, which is just one chapter.

When I started practicing in chapter 40, the daily life in the first 40 chapters was not interesting. I had to talk about it. It was boring to watch and it was difficult to motivate people to continue reading.

Don't have a female protagonist, it would be useless if you have a female protagonist

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This book is copied very carefully. Compared with Zhu Xian and the author of this book, he copied it without skipping any plot. He just added a protagonist.

It would be better to have a female protagonist, and multiple female protagonists

Tip 100 just for commenting! ! What are you doing? You just started cultivating immortality after Chapter 40, why don't you let people say you're stupid? You even deleted my comment, that's funny! ! !

It's too confusing. It's been more than 50 chapters and the protagonist hasn't completed the first level of Yuqing yet. It's so long-winded.

I never thought of using your mouth to fight. . .

I've read about a dozen chapters, and I feel like it's just as bland as water, and I don't have the desire to read more.

You endured the discomfort to watch Fairy Sword, but in the end, you became the protagonist directly. You planned to copy the plot of Fairy Sword again. ? Haven't we watched the TV series? Shit, I can't stand it anymore

It's well written. I suggest you start writing campus romance novels in the name of the eunuchs. Are you selecting readers here?

I just want to know if there is a Zhu Xian fanfic that doesn't lick Lu Xueqi. This heroine was considered a bad person at the beginning.

I thought it was okay before, but then I found out that it was a joke and it was really annoying.

After reading dozens of chapters, starting from the Qingyun Sect, I always mentioned Xiaozhufeng. I couldn't write without women. It was disgusting.