Da Qin: Stealing Gai Nie's Chief Swordsman at the Beginning

It seemed okay at first, but in the end, there was some kind of system that rewarded 10,000 sweet potatoes. I was really convinced. Don't you think it's against the rules of the author?

The two female protagonists are almost enough. Firefighter and Xiaomeng don't have much other contact with Ying Zheng. If you fall in love with the protagonist in a short time, it will become a mindless and cool novel.

Daily Detoxification is indeed well-deserved

Haha, I read a novel and it mentioned that Zilanxuan would catch all the time travellers.

After looking at this introduction, I don't even have the desire to click on it.

Collect them all, it's a harem anyway, so why not satisfy the desires of the harem party, single heroine lovers won't watch it anyway.

The protagonist gives me the feeling that he is dispensable, and he does nothing except attract and flirt with girls 🤫

Just looking at the introduction, the Emperor Sword Technique and the Heavenly Shield Sword Technique are already repeated. The Heavenly Shield Sword Technique is described as a sword technique, but it is actually a method of attaining the truth that directly points to the Great Dao. It is a supreme method that can lead to both death and death. The founder of Chunyang, who was transformed into a calamity body by Dong Wanggong, used this method to prove the Dao.

，？ 1: The protagonist is too clownish. When he sees a woman, he gets hard. You know, Chunyang Wuji Gong is a Taoist master's skill. What they pay attention to is the unity of Taoism and law. Chunyang refers to the man who has practiced since childhood and has never had sex. He maintains his pure Yang skills. Wuji refers to the profound intention of the author of this skill. What about you? It was written as a dirty trick in the Little Yellow Book, and I was convinced 2: From the perspective of Yingzheng's history, he is a very profound and far-sighted person, a person with profound thoughts. He talks less and does more, and is cautious in his words and deeds. When it comes to you, Yingzheng is still laughing and joking with you. To be honest, brother, when writing something, remember to read more history and understand a person better, no Be like some emperors in history who have never farmed before and then issued an imperial edict to teach people to farm 3: Since you wrote about women, very few people have read your book. It's not that we don't like beauties, but the people you portray are too different from the people in our images. For example, the Purple Girl in Qin Shi Mingyue, as the leader of an intelligence organization, do you write like a little white rabbit? The person who does the intelligence is not cruel. Look at the dragnet in other cartoons. How charming it is. Then look at what you wrote? 4: Brother, that's all. I hope you can write better and better. Come on.

It's just a dog raised by the emperor. How dare someone like a domestic slave be called a swordsman?

Lighter as the heroine. . . The Fire Girl, in anime, is a person whose whole body has been seen by many people. . . Why are you so lovable? . .

Emperor's swordsmanship? Do you deserve it? Are you the emperor?

This symmetry

After reading the introduction, I have to say that in the Qin Dynasty, the descendants of Guigu, the Zongheng Dao in the world, were the guests that all countries competed for. No one had such a big arrogance to let the descendants of Zongheng compete to see if there was anyone qualified to be his subordinate.

When I first watched Qin, I thought Nong Yu was pretty good. The more I watched it later, the more I realized that Nong Yu had some kind of serious illness. A bunch of stupid people said, "This stupidity doesn't mean it's cute", it just means it on the surface.

Author: The first book you wrote is still good, but you have finished it. I originally wanted to see if you could come up with something as creative as the first book, but after reading it for so long, neither of them worked.

Are you making trouble?

I haven't written the first book about spiritual energy recovery yet.

Yin Yang Family Star Soul

Yan Lingji

Why is it a eunuch? This book is not bad.

It was good at the beginning, but the plot of Tian Xing Jiu Ge was boring at the beginning, most of it was the original plot. And the memory will gradually become blurred. I don't understand. If you watch an anime and then travel to that world, wouldn't you memorize the plot? ? ? You might as well say that you don't want to worry about it and just follow the plot. This is more appropriate.

What I wrote before was okay, but when I went to Korea, I felt like I was copying the plot. I didn't see the protagonist in a few chapters, it was all about the original work.

Another person who licks Ying Zheng, basically 100% licking him. If he doesn't want you to rebel against Qin, can you not lick him? Author, don't you think there's anything interesting about Ben Ben Licking? 🐷You all know the plot

I think it's okay, maybe I haven't read similar novels? Add bookshelf and keep reading

Is there an ex who is shocked? If you have it, watch it; if you don't have it, don't watch it yet. .

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Nowadays, the protagonists of Qin Dynasty fan fiction are all prosperous, and none of them are human beings.

It looks pretty good, but the updates are too slow and infrequent.

It looks like he is a eunuch. It's a pity. I still like this book.