Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Strengthening All Things

Is this the invincible text? ? ? After reading Chapter 24, I can't hold on anymore! Too much nonsense. The writing is not that good, so just two pages is enough. In the first ten chapters, I felt like I was reading urban daily writing. Can you believe it? !

The first four chapters are pretty good, but why do I get so wordy as soon as I write about women? And I can't stop writing just these four chapters. It seems like there is still a lot of space to write in the future.

This kind of novel with a prefix, at first glance, looks like a mass production of a studio.

It's fine up front, but it's not good when I write about the village.

The author is a little speechless with this setting. The spiritual energy has revived, the beasts and plants have mutated, and they still protect animals? An invincible plug-in is written for you as a mentally retarded and weak chicken👎🏻I think the protagonist should hand himself over to the country.

The male protagonist's design changed again and again. At the beginning, he was still an LSP. Later, he lost all four and became six. In short, no one could get used to it. He obviously had a super golden finger, but he always made himself nervous. He was very anxious to do anything. He could obviously develop slowly, but he had to take risks to fight in the wild. The plot also changed, and he made himself follow. It's like a worldly expert, it's annoying to watch, and the plot of the latest chapter is even more poisonous. It looks like you reluctantly saved a beautiful woman, and then reluctantly took her in and gave her food, and you reluctantly gave her magical powers. If you look at it like this, Tiangang Disha only has 108 magical powers, and they were all given away before they could even be put on the shelves. I can only say that your plot design is really good!

When it was not strengthened, decades passed, and when it was strengthened, it could not even wait for the 100 points of physical strengthening. It was boring. The most important things kept being delayed, and the number of words was deliberately slowed down. In the end, he was still a eunuch

Abusing the mainstream, please watch with caution

Shui Wen, this novel has always been in the water. Not even one percent of the people who write about cultivation are bothered by worldly things. You are still a cultivator. Why don't you go to the neighborhood committee to be an aunt? ?

I learned some magical powers again and again, one chapter at a time, for dozens of chapters, and even if I died, I would never break through, and I would still be able to practice my Qi at the first level.

The setting has been eaten. Strengthening all things cannot strengthen one's own cultivation qualifications? I unlocked the information about my infinite bloodline and gradually strengthened myself to the level of super god

Double opening? Good guy. By the way, why do I seem to have seen this introduction somewhere?

The newly written chapters are just like nonsense. There is a lot of nonsense in reality. There is no need for me to go through it again in the novel world. Goodbye!

The introduction at the beginning is quite nice, but once you get to the main text, it's really disappointing.

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Entering the village completely changes the style. Very poor. It's better to buy a piece of wilderness and farm in peace of mind

The author is not a newcomer. The protagonist is a man in his forties. He should have a lot of life experience. He has seen the darkness of society and should know what to do and what not to do. Why does he feel that the character has no brains? He also goes to the library. I am afraid that the author has never been to a library and does not even know the basic rules.

Originally, it was good to come to the mountains to cultivate immortality. A cultivator is less involved in karma. Otherwise, why would you go to the mountains? Find a good place to cultivate immortality. When your cultivation level is high, go out and pretend to be an expert to get things, exchange them, buy them, or give them to others. You can also directly say that this thing is destined for me. The protagonist's operation is too low. There is no point in pretending like you, and the feeling is not enough.

It's so poisonous, I can't stand it. There is no plot in the first few chapters. It only briefly introduces the world view and family environment, and one sentence about the goal, and then it's about looking at women in the library? ? What are the benefits of going to the library? And what's going on with Bai Ling? What a strange character design, and what kind of young women's library is this? What kind of plot is this? Are you writing this just to say that the male protagonist is good-looking? Then you take your brother to the library to read together? Originally, the setting of this younger brother was quite good, like a sunny boy, but this is the result? What's more, the wingman is numb, really numb. The interactions between the various characters are so strange. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is an awkward explosion. The first part is actually fine, although it is very flat and has no taste at all. Until the library, I added a Lao Ba's secret hamburger to the bowl of clear soup noodles, which made it numb.

Again? ! ! So he is a habitual criminal? ! !

If you have resources, why don't you think about your family, but do your best to others?

What should I write for fun? The first part is like a pornographic article, and the second part is about going to the Qinling Mountains and not being allowed to eat animals. The rules are quite lenient. Aren't you strengthening it? Cultivation? Totally inconsistent. . . . .

Besides writing about women, what else does the author have to do? It would be strange if he didn't hit the streets with a must-be-beautiful series.

Why does it have to be arty, wordy, and disgusting?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The mixture of text and white is a bit uncomfortable, and then the plot is not fairy-like and has a bit of an urban feel.

When I was writing about Resurrection of Spiritual Energy, I said I was not satisfied and wanted to re-open a new book, but then it was unfinished. However, the new book was still unfinished. Am I ******?

There has been no update for three days. Is it gone?

Creatures that cannot be strengthened are still interesting, but the most disgusting thing is to strengthen pets.