I Practiced Shintoism in the Ancient Times

It's gone, I can't bear it Now Honghuangwen must go to the goddess of sun and taiyin, and hug Nuwa on the left and the queen on the right.

Brother, I'm afraid you don't know what Xiantian Wu Tai is, right? You haven't heard of the saying, right? There was God in the beginning, and God and Tao were the same. The Xiantian Wutai are the five periods around the beginning of heaven

The ancient cultivator of Shintoism can write about the three emperors of the ancient world, Cangli, Houtu and Jiutou. Hongjun's ancient world is immortality, demonism, Buddhism, and Shintoism is after becoming a god.

The preface is inconsistent with the follow-up. The first part says that we will not accept disciples, and then the second part talks about what we will leave to the disciples. The first part writes a bunch of realms, and we don't even compare them with the traditional realms. Then we start to change the realms. Oh my God, I looked confused. I said there was no distinction between men and women in the ancient world, and then I couldn't help being a licking dog, and then it went into the traditional style. What female fairies don't like to fight, and two goddesses serve one husband together... It's outrageous.

When I saw Avenue of Stars, I was very confused. What is Avenue of Stars, and what is the perfect view of Avenue of Stars?

How can duckweed last long without roots? I feel that the author's thinking is solidified by the ancient myth of the classic stream. He does not have a deep understanding of the ancient world, and there is nothing new. The writing style and plot are not delicate enough, the logic is not complete enough, the thinking pattern is not broad enough, and the path becomes narrower and narrower. I would like to give the author a suggestion. The endless years of Hongmeng, Chaos, and the Wilderness are flowing like a stream. Choose the small to make the big. You can first intercept a short period of time, develop a story, and create a protagonist. If you can write it well, you can then gradually write bigger.

Why are you talking about the Penglai Islands? ? ? Those are just three ordinary islands, not that mysterious.

I can't even write a clear introduction, but how can I write a good novel?

It's just a fantasy novel disguised as a prehistoric one. I thought it was some new trick

The starting point is higher than anyone else, but the protagonist is too useless and has a bad character