Changing My Fate in Dream of the Red Chamber

The author's basic plot and logic are there, and the level is above average. The problem is that it's too abrupt to make him a third-rank official in the early stages, and it feels disjointed to have such a high-ranking official in charge of minor matters later on.

Up to chapter 213, it's generally pretty good. The Jianghu (martial arts world) parts are well-written, but I suggest stopping later... The Salt Gang part feels like the author got carried away. The style has veered into a martial arts genre... This Salt Gang, first they look down on a powerful third-rank official (what kind of status are they?)

The protagonist has a strong heroic complex. He's not just after wealth and fortune; he also wants to navigate the officialdom, cultivate connections with influential figures, and learn martial arts. It seems he's destined to become emperor. If he does, he'll have a harem of three palaces and six courtyards. Looking forward to seeing the Golden Hairpin bestow titles upon the six palaces.

The writing is alright, but could you please cut down on the modern elements? One minute you're singing songs by the Flower Band, the next you're singing "A Laugh in the Vast Sea"—it's so cringeworthy!

If you're looking for erotic content, don't bother coming here; there's definitely no such content. If you're looking for mindless, entertaining content, don't bother coming here; don't waste your time. If you want to see anything about Grandmother Jia, Lady Wang, Aunt Xue, etc., Don't bother coming here, I can't write it.

Every time I see a protagonist transmigrate to ancient times and drink like it's water, seemingly invincible, it's just ridiculous! Even if the alcohol content of ancient liquor was really low, and the protagonist's physical form is another story, being able to drink endlessly after transmigrating is just too much! Did their liver travel with them? And they complain about ancient liquor?

The synopsis is off-putting. What does having a harem in a feudal society have to do with mindless wish-fulfillment novels? A novel about an impotent eunuch is presented in such a grand and respectable way. Is a feudal, cannibalistic society just playing house without decisive killing?

If you can get through the first chapter, you're basically immune to the later poisonous content, because I found the first chapter particularly toxic. Jia Lian just used a servant to relieve his lust (like you're thinking of fencing), and unless you're highly poison-resistant or in a special situation, you'd probably die from the poison.

The scene where Qin Keqing is rescued is truly awful. Even if she had simply died as depicted in the original story, it would have been better than this. Having never seen Qin Keqing before, he suddenly wanted to save her. The prelude to his self-importance is, frankly, nothing more than constant spying. In the end, he saved the person with a few words of persuasion. Goodness, they came and went in such a hurry! This part of the plot is, to put it mildly, poisonous.

My writing is a world I created with my heart and soul. This place has everything we want but don't have in reality. Besides the so-called "excitement," it also has pure love, kind hearts, and beautiful girls we can't even dream of. When you and I are tired in reality, come to this world and take a break.