Changing My Fate in Dream of the Red Chamber

The basic context and logic of the author's writing are there, and the level is still above average. The problem is that in the early stage, becoming a third-grade official is too jumpy. Later, a person with such a high official position has to take care of small things, which makes people feel disconnected. In fact, it is better to talk about switching to a fifth-grade real job at the beginning, so that the things he does later can be explained. The fifth-grade real job is not low, and it is a bit respectable outside, but in the Jia family, it is not enough to be a housekeeper.

I worked all the way to Chapter 213, and overall it was pretty good. The plot of the Jianghu part is quite well written, but I suggest you not write it later... I feel like the author got too excited about the part about the Salt Gang. The style of painting is distorted into martial arts... He is a member of the Salt Gang. First, he looks down on the powerful third-level officials (what level are you). Later, when he meets with the protagonist, he uses swords and guns, and humiliates him to test the protagonist. It's okay that the protagonist is a white body. The protagonist is a twenty-year-old third-grade manfutai, the legitimate son of the Duke of the country, and the emperor's confidant. He has just secured the Zhen family and eight major salt merchants in the south of the Yangtze River, and it is suspected that he has the full support of the Cao Gang. How dare you, a gang selling smuggled salt (even the largest one), dare to threaten the protagonist? I was puzzled... Which of the above-mentioned forces can your Salt Gang afford to offend? The most outrageous thing is that there is no information gap, the Salt Gang knows everything about the protagonist. Even if the leader of the Salt Gang doesn't want his daughter to marry the protagonist as his concubine, he won't commit suicide like this... On the one hand, he doesn't want his daughter to marry the protagonist as his concubine, but at the same time, he's sure that the protagonist cares that his daughter won't be serious with the Salt Gang?

The protagonist has a very strong hero complex. It's not just about getting rich. It can also open up official circles. There are also distinguished friends. I also want to learn martial arts and fight. It seems that he is going to be the emperor. If you become emperor. There are three palaces and six courtyards. Looking forward to seeing the golden hairpin sealing the Sixth Palace.

The writing is okay, but can there be less modern things? Sometimes I sing songs by the Huaer Band, and sometimes I sing Canghai Yixiao. It embarrasses me to death.

If you want to read pornographic articles, don't come here, they definitely won't be available. If you want to see something mindless and fun, don't come and don't waste your time. What do you want to see? I have accepted Jia Mu, Mrs. Wang, Aunt Xue, etc. No need to come, I can't write. This is a novel about Red Mansions that I bring to my life. There are not many slaps in the face, and I don't like to kill people. The protagonist, who comes from a noble family, enjoys and plans at the same time, step by step to reach the peak of life, that's all.

Every time I see the protagonist traveling through ancient times, drinking is like drinking water. I feel speechless even if I don't get drunk after a thousand cups! Not to mention that even if the alcohol content in ancient times was really low, the protagonist's clothes wouldn't matter. But it would be too much for the soul to travel through a thousand cups without getting drunk, right? The liver also travels through time together? You still dislike ancient drinks. Have you never tried farm-brewed rice wine? Even a good drinker can make you drunk without realizing it, and the stamina is huge

Introduction: Persuading people to quit, what is the connection between having a harem in feudal society and brainless cool writing? The article about an impotent eunuch is still so high-sounding. How can a feudal cannibalistic society not kill anyone and decisively play house with you?

If you can survive the first chapter, you won't be poisoned later on, because I think the first chapter is very poisonous. Jia Lian just vented his anger on the boy (just like you think of, fencing). If you are not a person with high poison resistance or a special group, you will probably be poisoned to death. You have to write this kind of plot to purify readers. The author's words of warning to readers at the beginning of the first chapter are not deceptive. They are indeed true and are not a cool article. Anyway, I slipped away.

The plot of rescuing Qin Keqing is really poisonous. Even if he died according to the original work, he would still be better than you. I have never seen Qin Keqing want to save others out of the blue. The pretentious foreshadowing is plain to say that he peeps every day. In the end, he saves people with just a few words. Good guy, he came and left in a hurry. This plot can be said to be completely poisonous.

My writing is a world created with my hard work. Here, there is everything we want but don't have in reality. In addition to the so-called "coolness", there must be pure love, a kind heart, and a beautiful girl that you can't even dream of. When you and I are tired in reality, come to this world and take a rest. We are just tired souls that need to be nourished by pure love and hate, not just various desires and greed. When one is rich in soul, one will not belittle oneself, treat oneself as a loser, or kneel down to the so-called superiors. We are all independent, upright people who rely on our own ability to make a living and live a strong life is a kind of pride. There is no need to look for the "diaosi protagonist" even when reading online articles, otherwise you will feel that you can't find a sense of involvement. As long as you stand straight and have a kind heart, you definitely deserve better. You know.