Diamond Ace: the Devil's Savior

There are very few people who can write millions of words about fan fiction, and there are very few people who can write about baseball. Just read it and cherish it. Don't criticize others too harshly. It's good if you write it down. Bear with me 😒

The novelty of this book at the beginning has also passed, and recently I have basically fallen into the habitual routine of the previous book. Opponents are stronger than in the original work, and teammates are weaker than in the original work. If it weren't for the hard strength specifications in the original work like Honglei City, everyone else would be weakened. The most obvious manifestation is the character of mind. The opponent won't collapse no matter how hard he fought, and all the teammates were startled. The slightest headwind made it seem like the sky was falling, and it seemed like he would lose the next second, and then the protagonist came to the rescue... I know this is to highlight the protagonist, but I really appreciate this description of the whole team being like a dog with Pavlov's conditioned reflex. More than one person raised similar opinions in the comment area. The author's attitude was all humbly accepted. Then what? Never change despite repeated admonishment. So I don't hold out much hope. Anyway, I'll just leave if I can't hold on.

Finally, I saw someone writing about other schools. Most of them should be original. After all, the original work is Qingdao, which is worth looking forward to. I also hope to write something different from Qingdao As long as readers can feel that this is not Qingdao in the skin of a pharmacist, it will be considered a success.

I hope to write a slightly more scientific Diamond Ace, but I always feel that there is no systematic training, and it is always practice and practice. One set of methods is not suitable for everyone. I think it is better to teach students according to their aptitude. I always feel that Qingdao is a useless supervisor. He's just a pig, he should have been trained over the years. It feels like he is always following the training methods of the previous generation without having his own opinions. It feels like the training methods in high school are all about burning the body in the future.

Suddenly I realized that I couldn't support it, haha. I looked at the last author and said that the author seems to have said that if he still writes about baseball, he would like to write a fanfic about Fang Gu. I think it is a good idea, because the passion brought by the speed of the ball is very difficult to compare with other things. Just a fast ball can heat up the field, and modern baseball is increasingly focusing on ball speed (Terashima made Akatsuki Furuya's talent too strong, and the protagonist couldn't suppress it, but it is a realistic comic, and in the end Terashima was in a dilemma and stopped drawing it...). Perhaps we can build a comprehensive comic world with Diamond A as the main theme (Diamond A is currently considered the most popular among baseball anime, and the others are either too old or tepid), or write an if line. I have an idea, maybe it can be written that Fangtani retired due to injuries not long after he entered professional baseball (it was really easy to hurt his body if he kept throwing fastballs before his body was fully grown). He was rated as one of the most regrettable ball players by the world, and then he was reborn in silence and regret. The reborn Fukitani accepted the concept of modern baseball. He knew that there would be too many catchers in professional baseball in the future who could catch his fastball. He valued his body more and felt that he should develop first now, so he planned to hide his edge. However, he was impressed by Eijun and Miyuki and changed his mind. I have to get excited... It's just that the works are hard to agree on, and writing is very energy-consuming. It is also difficult to publish a popular book in the baseball category. If you are determined to write about baseball, it is not necessarily a failure. I personally hope that the author can write a favorite, which can at least reduce the pain. It would be understandable if the author stopped writing. The author really persisted for a long time! Football and basketball are more popular as a competitive category, but baseball also has its own charm!

Zhen Shui, let me ask you how many chapters do you need to get water to beat the city?

After reading part of it, it became more and more awkward, so I flipped through the table of contents and decided to give up. The core reason for giving up was that the protagonist was unlikable. Generally speaking, unless the protagonist is a tool like a system upgrade stream, I think the protagonist in a sports novel must have enough desire to win and awareness, not to mention campus sports, a subject that is bound to youth, awareness, and belief. He is strong but has no faith, does not sacrifice his beliefs and ideals for victory, has no love and persistence for the sport itself, is just strong because of his pure talent, and can win because of his talent. I really can't like this kind of protagonist, and I can even say I hate it. I originally thought that the author planned to change the protagonist's psychology after the failure of the key battle in the first year and move forward. However, after looking at the table of contents, it seems that he planned to go to an invincible novel, so I guess the protagonist will be in this disgusting state from beginning to end. By the way, I think the type of invincible writing is stupid in sports writing. Sports is not fantasy. If you win at the beginning, you will most likely only win later. In fantasy, you can provide new opponents through upgrading, but sports writing is difficult. Once you write it successfully, it will easily become a repetition of the first success, which is meaningless. I hope the author can think about it and think about the protagonist and plot planning when writing next time.

To tell a joke, the pharmacist was playing the Big Game, and after five innings, the Thunder hit a home run and scored 1 run.

He always likes to go through twists and turns to win, and at the age of 15, he has such a cool mentality and makes many tricks, pretends to be different, and wins the championship. To be honest, I didn't read the description of how the teammates became stronger, and the protagonist's pretense throughout the whole process. Are all the good talents in pharmacists? My own team describes the protagonist throughout the whole process. I will not talk about Todoroki who has watched the anime. He has won many championships since he started. Except for the various twists and turns in winning the game, I have never seen the author write about the pharmacist himself and other school teams. During the game, everyone was surprised, shocked, scared and angry at the protagonist. In one sentence, the protagonist is invincible and will win! It can be said to be an invincible article. Baseball does not depend on one person. The main character is highlighted throughout. Why don't you write down the other teammates yourself? Not to mention your hydrology teammates, and give some introductions. There are only 4 first-year students. I really can't write a pharmacist with my own framework. It is better to use Qingdao to write a book like before. There are ready-made frameworks for various people's characters. The editor also has to compile a set. This book is a failure to write a pharmacist! Suitable for people who have never read anime and manga, the whole process is mindless

From the beginning of Return of the Pitcher to the current Magic Throwing Savior, I have read all the Diamond fanfics you wrote, although I didn't pay to read them at the starting point. I searched for Diamond fans in various software and found that your writing is the best. Thank you very much. Since watching Ace of Diamonds anime three years ago, I have discovered that I really like sports anime and read fan fiction. It's a pity that there are very few sports anime fan novels. It's rare to see someone seriously writing diamond fan novels. I hope you have the ability and conditions. I'm looking forward to writing that unfinished novel you mentioned. I'm sorry that I don't have the financial conditions to support you, and I wish you make a lot of money in the future.

It's true that not even a bit of meat or starch has been filtered out, it's all water.

I have read several books, but this one is really not a breakthrough, and the professional knowledge of baseball is still not enough. There is a person who wrote Diamond A, which has enough professional knowledge, but it collapsed in the later period. Why do you say that your professional knowledge is still not enough? There are very few pitchers in the major leagues who are less than 190cm tall and weigh 100kg. There are also pitchers. A straight pitch that does not float is not a standard pitch in the major leagues. People like Narimiya were considered geniuses in high school. Without height and weight, they are not even qualified to enter the professional league. I don't know why so many people think they are so awesome. Although the book next door has collapsed, it is still awesome. They are all time-travelers. They can't even compare to a high school student and they are still playing der!

In fact, I feel that Diamond Ace's Akatsuki Furuya is quite a tragic character. When he was a child, there was a strong baseball team in the area, but unfortunately he didn't meet it. Finally, he came to Qingdao and met the protagonist Junei.

I have written 1,500,000 words, but the writing is still so bad. Every time I want to read on, I am persuaded by the writing 😭

The more I look at it, the uglier it becomes. I used to say that the catcher was not strong enough to use his full strength, but now I see it is just like that. Strong? Laughing to Death

I think the author can break out of the world framework concept of animation and always write about the protagonist or a single character. Can the perspective of the growth process be changed? For example, the author can write a supervisory role perspective. In addition, can he jump out of this world and write about making baseball games and the reality of Koshien, the interactive perspective of the major leagues, like the current one, [Power Baseball 2022], and other methods. Simply put, because the author has a very mature concept and writing method of baseball, can it be better to write a new world with a different perspective and method.

I'm really speechless. I can't stand this novel. It's not the content of the novel that's wrong, the problem is the protagonist's name. My fucking name is Li Lei 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭[ fn=12]😭😭😭😭😭😭😭[fn= 12]😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Author, have you rested for a long time? Is it time to start?

I don't know if the author has an outline, or if he has an idea of ​​how long a game will take to describe. Although it is important to hit the big three in the market, there is no need to spend so much space describing it. The key is that so much ink does not significantly advance the setting of the core characters. I have already imagined the huge content of the subsequent game against Qingdao. I hope that the content of the subsequent competitions can be streamlined. Although the starting point is to charge per word, it is too watery and people will leave, so I won't make much money. I might watch it for a few more days, and if it becomes unbearable, I might just leave. After all, I don't want to spend money and get bored.

I've read a lot of Diamond A novels, and I don't understand the ball speed. Basically no one can surpass Jiang Guxiao. Is Jiang Guxiao's ball speed very good? And I think those scenes where the ball speed is so fast are a bit dramatic. Even Jiang Guxiao's ball speed is not that good. I feel that the host is very weak. This book started with 140. If calculated according to normal potential, it will not be able to reach Jiang Guxiao's speed by the third year of high school.

The author, could write a book about coaching. This kind of audience has a wider audience😁

It's very well written, keep it up, the amount of updates is a bit touching.

Have you decided what to write in your next book?

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

There is a new book next door 🍅: From Ace of Diamonds to Continuous Struggle. It's well written, but it's just a little immature.

I plan to update a few chapters 😊

Is it over? Then I will start to make up for it.

Real reaction, I feel that this book could be better if the author simplifies it a lot.

I just came across this book. I have read other novels by the author before, but I didn't read them because I didn't feel much about them. This one is my favorite after reading hundreds of chapters. But when I read the comments that it stopped later, I felt a bit of a pity. Sure enough, the protagonist of the pitcher is cool👏

If you have something to do, just explain it. If you don't say anything, you will obviously be a eunuch.