Speedy Car God

I have read more than one book about "The Grinding Boy", and the one that impressed me most was "King of the Bay Area". Let me tell you some of my opinions about this book: Let's talk about the advantages first. This book about F1 racing does a very good job in introducing the relevant rules and knowledge of F1 racing. It is well detailed and does not appear to be boring science fiction. It also allows people who do not know F1 racing to read this book conveniently and without too much thinking. The plot design is also very promising. It blends the protagonist's growth experience into the key historical nodes of F1 racing in reality. It is both reasonable and slightly innovative. This is something I have not felt in other books about F1 racing from Qidian. The author's writing skills are not bad. Although not as good as many great writers, it is far better than many novice writers. At least the novel is not boring to read. Next, let's talk about what I think are the shortcomings. Like "King of the Bay Area", this book also has a distinct author's personal style. First of all, there are often large-scale exaggerations and provocative descriptions of emotions, and side descriptions often appear to exaggerate certain emotions. The descriptions sometimes seem too literary, and reading too much will always make people a little irritable. Sometimes, long and overly literary descriptions can make me feel less satisfied. Especially for many readers of online novels, enjoyment is often the first purpose. In addition, the author really likes the dialogue between characters, especially the protagonist's ease, high emotional intelligence and "humor" in dialogue with others. Here I would like to express my personal thoughts to the author. When such dialogue appears in the article, the frequency of dialogue can be increased, but the length of each dialogue can be appropriately reduced. I personally feel that in this case, I will not feel a sense of gap and discomfort after reading several pages of dialogue, only to find that it is just to highlight a "golden sentence" of the protagonist. Finally, let me summarize with you. Although there are some shortcomings and shortcomings that I think, overall, this book is definitely a rare book about F1 racing from the starting point, and it is definitely worth reading! I believe that for many readers who like F1 racing, they have read many "shit" racing articles from Qidian, but they have to endure it because there are too few novels on this subject. So you might as well give this book a try. Although it can't be called a feast of delicacies like the Manchu-Han Banquet, it can definitely be said to be a delicious meal with all the colors, flavors and aromas! (All the above are pure nonsense and are for entertainment only and have no reference value. I hope readers can judge by themselves) (doge)

The author is so awesome. He writes about rugby and tennis. The more unpopular F1 is these days, the more he writes about it. The previous books are all good, I like them, and I hope the author can keep at it, come on.

The author should write urban articles, endless court battles and repeated pulls

To be honest, if you have been competing in karts since you were a kid, you won't be able to join other teams in regular competitions, let alone F1.

The author is really awesome, he can teach you all kinds of sports at your fingertips. From the author I followed in "King of the Bay Area" to "Match Point" and now! Come on, author!

You are the best writer on rugby. If you want to write the next book, let's return to the world of rugby.

So what did I see in these pictures? Dude, I know there are a lot of words in one chapter, but at least there is some progress. Don't be fooled. You don't think it's cheap to subscribe to your chapter...

1. You can intersperse more humanistic stories outside the paddock 2. Don't be black for the sake of being black. It's obviously the team's mistake in changing tires and it's hard to blame the protagonist. Forget it being a hard criticism, the whole article only criticizes the protagonist. He is responsible for all the achievements and ignores the problems of the team. 3. The plot is unreasonable 4. Leclerc

The writing is okay, but it's too watery and full of nonsense. I like popular science. Everything in Q1, Q2, and Q3 needs to be explained. I have read F1 novels and I still need to explain it so clearly. What's the difference between reading a League of Legends novel and giving me a chapter explaining each skill of the hero's passive QWER?

There is too much nonsense and too much ink throughout the article.

I hope the author will stop using the so-called American humor in his new book and make his speech awkward during the press conference.

As long as you write f1, I will definitely support you 🙂

Maybe it's because of my family. The author's emotional description of family relationships makes me uncomfortable. I'd better write a good game.

I just watched the movie and I really want to see if there are any novels. You are indeed my favorite author of sports books.

Come on, let's see how you make it up. 🙂

The writing is pretty good but the pace is a bit slow. Come on

I have no patience to read the transfer period.

What the hell are you writing? It's so watery.

It's so uncomfortable to write one chapter this day😣

Rush! ! ! ! ! My two hobbies are rugby and F1. I wrote them both for the best authors in the world hahaha

I couldn't stand seeing the 0.211 Seconds of "neck and neck, a millimeter difference"... You are sprinting at the end of the F1 schedule. If you drive at 120km/h at a high speed, there is a gap of 7m. It is written so fiercely, but the actual difference is how many car body distances? !

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Come on, I'll give you all the tickets I've saved for a month 🤫

Read it in one go😅

It turns out that he is the author of Bambi, and you don't write in this way or that way. I only noticed after reading more than 200 chapters that it was okay to survive the first three chapters. To be honest, it might be better to just go straight to it. The pace is too slow. Every time I write about family exams, it is very procrastinating. It is positioned as a YY cool article. When I write about how the main character's mother allows her children to study for the college entrance examination, it feels a bit both upright and bitchy. Rugby is a niche but everyone doesn't have a home team, so you can write whatever you want, but F1 is different. Basically everyone who watches F1 has his own home team, so let's do it and cherish it. Since I seemed to have watched a pirated version of Bambi at that time, I'll give you all the monthly passes.

Although one of the two books is about rugby and the other is about F1. It is normal in sports articles to look down on someone and then slap them in the face But some similar plots feel a bit out of place when you look at them. For example, the rich second generation who always looks down on the protagonist in this book and the alcoholic who looks down on the team in the Super Bowl. There are also some warm scenes with fans (who have vests) Don't use templates for these things, it's better not to add these things.

The cars in High Intelligence Formula are very handsome and very cool

Maybe laymen don't understand it well! But the front gives me the feeling of reading a physical book

I feel like my writing these days has been too biased (#-.-)