Diamond Ace Pitcher Returns

I really don't understand what benefits the author will bring to him by arranging for the protagonist to have sex with a 13-year-old underage girl?

The author seems to have been reading the book circle seriously, and he was really moved. In addition, he has been reading some of the original text for a few days, so he will write about Rongjun seriously. Because I am not interested in Akagi, I started watching Qingdao, and now I see the part where the little wolf cubs and the others are taking the entrance test. The biggest feeling is the little angel written by the author. Rebirth, adult, past life superstar. Together with these attributes, the little angel must have undergone a radical change, so I watched it with a tolerant mind. But at first, it was indeed very uncomfortable, but later, there were some shining points in the author's writing that gradually moved me! I stopped now simply because Wakana's plot was too abrupt and I was so angry. It was thundering and I just wanted to do something else and write down my feelings about the little angel in the article. First of all, why is Rongjun being scolded so badly. That is really not unfair! The first is the problem of expression, which is a fatal flaw. It just so happens that the post downstairs pointed out the word "sneer", so I'll add another one, "seeking death". When I saw it, my expression was almost the same as that of Senior Di Dongqian - it was really like being struck by lightning. How could Eijun think of such words in his heart? This is like fielding on the field. There are two people on the base. The fielding could have made the catch, but you missed the catch! The opponent directly scored two points! I understand that this is all because the author was too invested in writing, and there may not be any guide who is familiar with Little Angel to help, so the sense of self-involvement is too strong. Because I really haven't seen this kind of word in the future. But such words are still in my mind and have a fixed impression. This is what readers are like. After all, reading articles is much faster than writing them. This is one of them. This is an obvious problem in terms of expression. The second one is more serious. This is a question that runs throughout the entire article. Why can Ace of Diamonds post "little angel" openly in the barrage without being scolded by fans? The direction of cursing people in the comment area is always to bully the character, rather than "shouldn't post little angels". Because Eijun is indeed an angel. Even if he works as a relief pitcher every day to clean up the mess of Jianggu, even if he is forced to get yips, even if Chunjia is benched and gets a handful of bullpen dirt, even if he knows that he is almost not expected to become an ace... After experiencing so many things, he still treats Qingdao as he always has. "There are no more people holding you back, let them see the power of Qingdao!" "Do you know why the supervisors don't care about your fate? It's because they trust your identity as the ace!" Using words that are almost masochistic to encourage and lift others up is something that ordinary people can never do. Because like a fool. But Eijun can do it. Don't he know that his behavior is stupid? No, he knew it very well! It is precisely because he has this clarity but is willing to do stupid things that he is called an "angel". Such a character is like a dazzling diamond, which cannot be erased by time. The author did not grasp the very important essence of this part of him. Eongjun in this article is too aggressive. In the original work, Eijun is definitely not like this in terms of interpersonal communication. I absolutely believe that even if he joins Qingdao as the "Demon King", the relationship between him and his seniors will not be worse, it will only be better! Sawamura Eijun is a genius in interpersonal communication, and everyone in the team dislikes him. Even soy bones and an iceberg can be melted by him. So Eijun, who joined Qingdao at the beginning, was really OOC. Being scolded is really not unjust. The reason for this distortion is probably that the author naturally added Eijun's state and sense of self-awareness during the game to the little angel state in daily life. The most taboo thing about fan fiction is too much self-introduction. Fan humanities require empathy and analysis of characters. The author has put too many filters on Rongjun. For example, his appearance is actually about the same as Koharu's cuteness, and his personality is somewhat androgynous and feminine. These are probably subconsciously ignored by the author as a straight man. Actually, I am looking forward to the author's reply after writing so much. Also why do I say polarization? Because I am indeed very satisfied with Eijun on the court. Except for the part where his character is not OK, there are many aspects of Eijun's performance in the game that make me accept that this is what Eijun will look like in the future. For example, Eijun absolutely trusts Miyuki's matchmaking. For example, Eijun is a person who thoroughly reflects on himself. For example, Eijun is absolutely dedicated to the pitcher's mound. For example, Eijun is indeed a thinking person. The author wrote that point! And behaved very well! In terms of pitchers, the research and performance of Little Angel has basically reached its peak. This part made me believe in the author's love for Ace of Diamonds. Without that love, some things simply wouldn't have the same level and feel as the original. So I skipped Wakana Chapter and am willing to write this long review. I am very grateful to the author for bringing me this fanfic. In my ideal ending, Eijun and Miyuki will be selected by the Giants together, catalyzing each other to become stronger, and finally becoming baseball legends in the major leagues. Because they are on the same team, they are definitely the best choice. It would be fine if there was no CP. It would be nice if the character of the little angel was more original. It would be fine if there were no blunt emotional lines. Unfortunately there is no if.

To be honest, I was quite immersed in reading it in the early stage, because the original Little Angel was always struggling, which made me wonder what it would be like to return to the first grade after becoming an ace. This book satisfied my fantasy. It's a pity that I no longer have the motivation to read Chun Jia at the end. Although the original book is terrible, it embodies the idea of ​​​​Ace of Diamonds. However, this book no longer has this idea. It is an invincible template. I know the result of the game from the beginning of the game. The plot is like a running account, and the protagonist's personality is too different from the original book. It's a drama every minute.

It's time to weaken your daily routine again⋯⋯

This is a long-term complaint about this article, and the student party is slowly replenishing it. Early Warning! ! Contains CP brain, if you like Wakana BG, please click here to read it xxx The author seems to be watching, so I will say it bluntly, I will just keep this post to complain slowly Today I bought the chapter of Qingdao VS Daocheng! ! ! It's an old saying. To be honest, this paragraph is definitely the climax of the early writing Misawa really feels like a soul mate! ! Surrender is like a husband and wife. It is difficult to express the full expression of feelings in the fan fiction. Really, even if you can't write about Danmei, it would be great without cp. It would be a pity not to write more about Misawa's friendship. Watching the game, I can only feel how well-matched Misawa is. If the most un-OOC thing about Little Angel in this article is the challenger attitude and absolute trust in Miyuki's playing, reading this article, their cooperation has the flavor of the original work Even the characters who were slightly weak in the early stage have become more vivid, especially everyone in Room 5, Masuko-senpai, and Kuramochi-nii's mentality changes. Narumiya's temperament of being egotistical but giving everything for victory. This section is really amazing

Ahhhhhhhh this is so beautiful, what kind of fairy is this? I beg the Great Demon King Sawamura to become a god in the big league. Is this the end? ? ? ! ! ! I haven't seen enough at all!

It's time to write about the game. Let's wait for a while before reading 😊😊 (PS: Will this game be very long?)

The author wrote Yoshida so well! In reality, Kyoto's ability to reach the Koshien finals is really due to luck. The final loss to Osaka Kirikage, the strongest generation in the finals, is due to the gap in strength! Aomichi who is stronger than Osaka Kirikage in the novel is actually so bad?

Supervisor: Sawamura 666 Others in Aomichi: Being beaten, depressed, desperate Sawamura: I'll pitch, I'll hit, I'll run, I'll make tactics, if the pitching is hit, I'll inspire others ? ? ?

Every time I see a group of people saying that Todoroki Todoroki's attack on the village is very powerful, I get very angry. As for my eyes, I just say that Gong Ming and Todoroki are not a matter of time.

The writing is getting better and better, but I feel like the protagonist still lacks something. The "Big Demon King" represents the final boss, which makes people feel the presence of fear and despair. Sawamura seems to not have this temperament yet. In the last year of high school, can high school students across Japan experience what "fear" and "despair" mean?

He is simply an original character wearing Eijun's coat. Although they are usually neither older nor younger, I respect them both in my heart and in my behavior. What is written in this chapter? "But your Kawakami's ball, how powerful is it?" "Eijun withdrew a sneer from the corner of his mouth." Haha, if the author can't control the character's personality, don't write fan fiction, just write it all original. Even if it has been ten or twenty years since Eijun graduated from professional baseball and went to play in the major leagues, the memory of Seido will be indelible. It is as if he met Kuramochi on the first day. He despised his seniors, was arrogant, and only had eyes for himself. Is this the Eijun you see?

After losing the second match with Narimiya Daocheng, the organizer of Koshien actually said that it would not work without Seido, especially since Sawamura brought great popularity and the match was suspenseful, so they gave him a wild card. This is poisonous. It makes it like a celebrity entertainment. It is not pure and its nature has changed. It does not rely on strength and star aura? Then there are the five major star players of Qingdao, Chen Ping of the Star of Tomorrow program group. The star nature is too rampant. After watching it, I feel that it is not a diamond, but the star pitcher is a legend.

Coming from your third book, it means that this book is completely unreadable. It is full of Long Aotian patterns from many years ago. The Great Demon King Sawamura? Demon King's Guards? Have you watched too much anime or something? This is a baseball player, not a star idol, not akb!

I have read it three times. There is no more beautiful diamond book than this one.

Overall it's pretty good-looking, but the aura of the main character is so awesome. There is no suspense about the crushing. It's okay if it's a fantasy theme, but it's a bit boring if it's a sports competition. Although the author is not forcing the protagonist team to lose, it is too much to keep a clean sheet at every turn.

Hey, forcibly weakening Qingdao's strength and increasing Daocheng's strength seems a bit boring.

Author, I'm really convinced. You always mention Sawamura's experience and skills in his previous life. I'm tired of reading it no matter how boring you are. Also, the more you write, the more you go around and around, asking and answering questions. It's really boring.

I really can't stand the need to complain. The author often makes grammatical and semantic errors. Fortunately, the core now is Sawamura. If the core was not Sawamura, and the core position was given to him, Miyuki would probably have to vomit blood from exhaustion. When you read it for the first time, you will think that "he" refers to Sawamura, but you will immediately realize that the logic does not make sense. It took me three times to realize that "he" refers to Miyuki. The correct way to write this sentence should be Fortunately, the core now is Sawamura. If the core was not Sawamura, and the core position was given to Miyuki, he would probably have to vomit blood from exhaustion. From a grammatical perspective, when encountering "him", readers will start from the position of "him" and search upwards for the closest noun that has the deepest impression. In the original text, the term "Sawamura" appears twice. There was another time before when "you" and "he" were used to refer to the same person in a sentence. Another time was "Sawamura is so good. Even so, I think Sawamura is not so good."

Ace of Diamonds TV Animation Season 3 Production Decision to be Released in 2019

Hmm, I couldn't help but watch it, too lazy to save it. To be honest, I found that Xiaoxiong always deliberately described Ning Gongming as a character who could compete with Eijun. To be honest, I felt very confused as to why he had to describe this guy as so awesome. 1. In this book, Eijun, as a reborn person, has 10 years of experience ahead of all current high school students. Moreover, Eijun knows from reading the original book that his talent is not inferior to these top players. 2. In addition to 1, Eijun has also improved rapidly after his rebirth, so at least there is no pitcher in Japanese high school who can surpass him in pitching, let alone hitting. Eijun is the top pitcher in terms of pitching and all-around ace. 3. I know that Xiaoxiong may want to find a rival for Rongchun to make Rongchun look less relaxed, and also make the plot more ups and downs, right? But, Little Bear, the main reason is that you have described Eijun as too invincible from the first chapter to the present. He has 10 years of experience ahead of him and has been improving. His change-up pitch is getting better and better, and his ball speed is faster than in his previous life. In addition, the weight of the title of Big Devil is due to the stimulation brought by Eijun in this life. Therefore, other pitchers have evolved faster and cannot pitch as well as Eijun. Otherwise, the title of Big Devil is simply unworthy of the name. It is too unscientific to be tied to someone with 10 years of experience in an instant. You should really buy a piece of tofu and kill him. 4. Then when Qingdao attacked, Eijun hit a hit... I said the little bear is big, just like what a reader posted outside said before. When Eijun was playing in the Dream Team, he could hit Allen's ball. Do you think it is appropriate for Gong Ming to have a hit? Eijun's dynamic vision has been upgraded. Allen's ball speed is above 160. It's a completely new world above 160, and Allen's ball speed is above 160 and he can throw change balls. Eijun can hit it. Allen is at least one level higher than Narumi Narumi, right? It's like Allen's ball power is so heavy that he can hit a hit (the bat is broken). When he hits Gong Ming, he can even see clearly the posture of catching the ball and the degree of rotation of the ball. The power of the ball has not dropped significantly. Not to mention Allen, it is ridiculous that he can't hit a home run 😅 To sum up, the Cubs have described Eijun through various plots as too awesome, and then After that, I beat the weak opponent [Nari Gongmu is at least one level weaker than Eijun] and the match is even, which makes me feel like I'm watching the standard bloody protagonist of hot-blooded anime. It's the kind of match where I'm on par with the strong one or even ahead overall [For example, in the Dream Team, it was Eijun who raised Seido to a higher level]. I'm "too" even with the weak one. Doesn't this cause conflict? In fact, there is really no need to attach too much importance to Narimiya Naru in this book, because in this book, not to mention hitting, even pitching is weaker than Eijun, and the protagonist Eijun's stage in this book is originally in the major leagues, so why do you "force" write it to be evenly matched. At least the coach and Chris from my dream team both told Eijun that being in high school was a drag, and then the author would do this every time he met Narumiya 😅. The inconsistency caused too much conflict. I can't understand it

There is no emotional line to adjust. I got tired of it after reading a third of it. The novel is too long. It's boring to watch basketball for a long time.

I am an audio book anchor. With permission from the copyright, I am now broadcasting this book on Himalaya. The author writes very well. It is very comfortable when playing.

Your writing is great. When I was in college, I was obsessed with Ace of Diamonds. I was deeply involved in it. I was always moved and distressed by the growth of the little angel. Later, I fell in love with reading novels. I was wondering if there were any novels similar to playing baseball. Then I discovered this book you wrote. I was really happy at the time. It gave me a lot of happiness in my three years of free college. Thank you. I hope you will be happy every day 😊

Why doesn't anyone write about Falling Valley? Haoqiu! ! !

I think the author can completely develop a baseball novel set in Japan, and there is no need to write a fanfic.

It's become more and more disgusting since I entered Qingdao. The junior high school chapter is better written.

This is the best Diamond Ace fanfic ever written

I saw it on other websites. After reading more than 100 chapters, I thought it was good. But I was afraid that I would go to Qidian. Com to read the comments on BG written by Ruolai CP. When I saw that it was not BG, I felt relieved immediately. I came to Qidian to buy the genuine version and continue to support it.

I didn't read the article. Is there a female protagonist? Is it a single heroine? Is it an original heroine?