Origin World: Devourer

One day I can use this as a side job to make money, and I might put more energy into it. Now life is forcing me to run for life😂

It is really well written. I felt like the original novel when I read it. The plot is exciting and much better than the one written by Light Blue. However, when I read it later, I realized that the book was not finished. I thought that after so many years, everything that should be continued was finished. I didn't expect that this book is so new and I have just started writing it! Come on come on!

Please help to activate the comment area. The update is a bit slow. After all, I am not a professional user, but I will continue to update. If you think it is too slow, you can give it a try 😭

I personally think Devouring the Stars is better written than Lord Snow Eagle. I could feel a rush of blood when watching Swallowed Starry Sky, but I didn't feel anything when watching Lord Snow Eagle. I felt that Dongbo Snow Eagle became one of the most awesome people in a very mediocre way, and his love of practicing guns at the beginning had nothing to do with his most awesome skills in the end. It seemed that nothing he practiced at the beginning affected his development.

Not bad, I think it's better written than Tomato's Swallowing Starry Sky 2!

Who bought it for me and collected it? 🙂 Don't do these things

In the original article, Luo Feng is sensible and rational, but in this article, Luo Feng is a reckless man, a brainless fool, who doesn't even have the brains of a normal person. He should have been forgotten by the author. If the author hadn't been cheating, he would have died eight hundred times.

I said three updates, thumbs up if you agree!!

Congratulations to the author for signing the contract. I have been following it since I was more than 50 years old. I also feel that the author's writing is very similar to Tomato. I hope the author can work hard and not be as unfinished as Light Blue. I wish the author a happy life and have time to write more chapters 😜

By the way, why change the name? Let me make a bold guess. I have seen a similar situation before. There is a mysterious fan called Ring of Fate, but it failed to pass the review.