One Piece: the Strongest Vice Mr.3

I have been reading Naruto fan novels recently, and suddenly I saw that this One Piece fan novel is very different from the Naruto fan novel 1 The goal is very clear (short term), and the main line is clear There are no major flaws 2. I read this novel with a smile, it was not that depressing and it was a lot of fun 3. I saw that other fan series writers like to add a lot of skills, and in the end I don't even remember what skills they have. The author added them very subtly. Although the number of words added is not many, it can control the number of words in the novel. The author has a clear outline in his mind I read the above before it was put on the shelves. I decided on a chapter and left a comment first.

This is a pirate novel with a relaxed and happy flow. The writing is quite smooth, and it is a little bit invincible. There are some flaws, but the classification direction of the book can still be seen (I really couldn't stand it when I saw that the fight was omitted in that chapter). However, the shortcoming of the author's slow updating is really fatal. Looking at the time of the first chapter, I see that it is only 800,000 words now. At this speed, it can easily disappear from the library while eating dust.

I feel like the push all the way is not intense enough.

Personally, I think it is necessary for the author to design a picture of Mr3 whose appearance has been enhanced. Otherwise, every time I say that his appearance has improved, I will only think of his ugly appearance in the original work.

The configuration of One Piece Baki's group

There is no need to deliberately improve your appearance. The world of pirates emphasizes that one appearance comes from the heart. As your strength increases and your personality changes, your appearance will change drastically in less than a year.

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Come on, the author, I hope you can refer to the wax figures: biscuit fruit, imitation fruit candlelight: burning fruit, rockberry fruit smoke: smoke fruit, gas fruit wax oil: swamp fruit, stone fruit self: soft candy fruit, glutinous fruit

1. Wax Museum, seal the enemy to obtain a wax figure, which can fight (original ability enhancement) 2. Wax ash releases the heat of wax instantly (it is better to eat it with awakening). As long as the wax is enough, it can release terrifying temperature and heat. As long as the temperature and heat are enough, even magma can evaporate and gasify (this is a certain one🐶) 3. Awakening-wax food, liquefy, and the place where the wax flows will wax, causing wax waves. If the wax is not used up, you will not be injured or die (setting it on fire will only make it stronger, but the wax consumption will be stronger) 4. Magic wax, because the wax museum cooperates with the soul wax sold out, it can stick out the human soul and turn it into a wax pill. If it is ignited, it will burn the soul (it hurts, but only the flames from high-quality souls can hurt the strong, and it is easily extinguished by domineering, clearing the weak and disturbing the strong). Because it is an accessory ability, only those who are dying or incapable of action will have their souls glued out.

Is there anyone who can add a picture? I'll do it😋 All members of Buggy Pirates

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Third brother two years later

Candle Dragon Earthworm (a large area of ​​wax liquid that releases armed domineering energy) Thick, turbid and strange and changeable, unrestrained and free, it is about to get up like mercury pouring all over the ground, sucking bones and marrow, turbid heart and cutting will. Candle Dragon's Abyss (Candle 🕯 Domain) Releases a large amount of wax liquid to gradually cover a certain area around the body. These waxes will greedily suck the body heat of living beings other than the caster. People who step into the field will feel as if they are suffering from heat stroke and are experiencing three states of weakness, numbness of bones, soft muscles and muscles: heat cramps, heat exhaustion and heat stroke. Teng Snake Wanjiu (a single target releases wax liquid attached to the weapon-colored domineering spirit) The twisted wax liquid is shot at the opponent, and it penetrates every hole. Mainly corrosion, it will take away a lot of heat from the opponent when it penetrates the body. ps: adapted from Zhang Lingyu's Water Dirty Thunder under One Person, the changed name is what I thought ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

There aren't many clever pirate articles out there. I should say that they really fit He Sange's cunning and cunning character. Hahaha, the latest one is pretty good. Come on, put it on the shelves and at least give it to a fan😄

The name of the surgical fruit is promoted by the World Government. In addition, the last person with fruit ability was a doctor, so the world generally named it the surgical fruit. . . . Its real name should be Space Fruit. Judging from the current fruit performance. Open a space bubble. The spatial combination of things inside can then be manipulated. No matter what, this should be a space fruit that controls space. . . . Im is a man who has lived for 800 years. It is very likely that he used the ultimate move of space fruit users from 800 years ago: space pause, which moves and fixes all the particles in a fixed space. The effect is that time is suspended. Obviously. The place where this space pauses is the center point of all kinds of material supplies around the world. The Throne of Heaven is located in the core and most secret place of Holy Land Marie Joa. Im's location. . . . . . Also. And about Aquaman. Hades. Joyboy's light inheritance and other ideas will not be explained one by one here. Finally. The Ship Elf is definitely a brain teaser. If Pluto is really a battleship, will ship elves be born? Where is the Ship Elf? . . . This guess is over.

The fake Joey Boy can only laugh at himself, but the real Joey Boy can bring joy to the whole world and the audience. This era is called Red Nose😡

There are some physical and sword skills that are no less powerful than Haki and Devil Fruit. Physical Skills: ① The upper limit of the navy's 'Sixth Marine Style' is relatively low, and only one 'life return' is barely useful to a naval admiral. ②The giant's move 'Hegemony' is extremely penetrating and can destroy an island with one move. The upper limit is not low. ③ Fishman Karate, such as Jinbe, can easily reach the Shichibukai level at the peak of their skill, and can freely control the water flow. One Piece is the sea, restraining all devil fruits, and has a high upper limit for sea battles. Swordsmanship: As a swordsman, you can cut through steel (the iron block move can be practiced by dogs). The great swordsman can use various sword energies and long-range attacks. For example, the 'murderous aura' and 'ghost aura' that Zoro has comprehended, and even some sword moves of Wano warriors have fire or ice abilities. His sword is worn by warriors all year round and is dyed into a 'black sword' with armament color, which can attack all elemental abilities.

Since the rubber fruit can be said to be the Renren Fruit, the Phantom Beast Species, and the Nika form, then my third brother would not go too far by saying that it is the Renren Fruit, the Phantom Beast Species, and the Lantern Buddha form, hahahaha

Get the empress out of Aheiyan and I will give you my votes every day.

Lao San changed sides and returned to Lao Sha's command.

If I have to have a female protagonist, it can be Golden Week, my old partner in the art group

Even if you don't accept Hancock, don't write a plot for Wang Luffy, otherwise it will look disgusting. Even if the empress is left to die alone, don't write a plot where the empress goes to save Wang Luffy. As the protagonist's ally, the protagonist will have to save her.

It's quite good. While adding your own ideas, you can maintain the personality of the original characters, especially the empress. The protagonist shows both the true "color" of the hero and whether he is obsessed with sperm. The battle of wits is simply a breath of fresh air among pirates

It's a rare good book. The writing is really good, and you can immerse yourself in the characters very well. This is a fine novel that has no shortage of laughter, passion, and friendship between partners. Thank you to the author for allowing me to see such excellent works in the Pirates fandom that has been dormant for a long time. I wish the author good success with this book.

Anticlimactic, I am so disappointed with this ending. It is a completely unnecessary war. If you have the strength to crush it, you still have to pay tribute to the war? He also deliberately spent a long time to forcibly strengthen the navy's strength. It's a failed setting. I really can't stand the last few chapters. Im has become a god. I don't want to read the content, so I just read the title. I still rely on Nika Luffy to handle it. It is incomparable with the ending of Conan and starting from scratch. The old one is more stable. It directly gives Im a setting of rules-based fruit abilities, but the strength does not exceed the level of a general, which is about the same as three generals. In this book, the double fruit of the protagonist has already crushed the general. He is obviously no longer in the same class as the general, but he still can't beat Im...

I have a small suggestion. Can the protagonist take two Shichibukai to Mariejoia to help Sabo save the bear, and have a fight with Mariejoia's people? This way 1 can gain favor with the empress and confirm his anger towards the Celestial Dragons. 2 Can also make the GM army owe someone a favor. 3. By helping Sabo, not only the GM army will be grateful to the Clown Pirates, but Luffy will also be grateful, and he will not kill them in the future. It will give him some face and prepare for killing Blackbeard in the future. 4 Has increased its influence, making the Navy and the world think that Bucky is connected to the GM army. The Navy is thinking about it. Bucky has not been famous since the disbandment of Roger's regiment. What he has done since the big prison is to put a bounty on the Navy and gather the Shichibukai. This time, he is helping Sabo. Thinking that Bucky also has an arms business and mercenaries, tsk tsk~ What is he trying to do? In this case, it makes sense for Green Bull to say that there is chaos outside.

Neither the cover nor the title of this book attracted me, but after reading it, I found it surprisingly good. He is a very thoughtful author. The character of Third Brother is really quite charming.

I've been following this book since I started it and it's almost finished now. I've always liked this book, but I still couldn't bear to give it up. Seriously, why are you washing that Deserter King? It means that it will disgust readers, right?

It is a soul lamp similar to a fantasy world. When a person dies, the light goes out. Burn the enemy's soul like a candle. You can use your Haki to resist, but it will consume your Haki, which is not endless. Once it is consumed, your soul will be burned directly. If you want to resist, you must at least achieve fruit liberation, but how many people can achieve the level of fruit liberation?

It's finished, it's a great piece of pirate writing that makes you think. Come on, start a new book!