
Pirate: My Partner Is Too Crooked
海贼:我的伙伴太不正经
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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One Piece Fanfic
It's a pretty good pirate fanfic I've seen before.
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New expansion, new story
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Shanzhu's reading aesthetics (;`O´)o📢 (limited to two dimensions): 🎯, the writing is smooth, the routines are not vulgar, and there is no pretentiousness. 🎯. The plot is logical and will not be inconsistent. 🎯. The male protagonist's strength is not easily improved, and the character setting is not collapsed. Updated from time to time, eunuch works will be removed from shelves in a timely manner
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The novel's routines are all the same, but the novel ideas are unique! This book mainly recommends novels that you like to read, without routines, wit, or saints. Upgrade flow, system flow, invincible flow, extreme flow, two-dimensional flow, as long as it is well written, there is no distinction between categories.
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Pirate: I Want to Die and Become the King of the World
























The boss of Wanding next door, your first partner is Tom Cat, and you are Aqua. He opens a tavern and you open a restaurant. He's on a tour, and you're also catching pirates. I also plan to write a book. My first partner was Spongebob, I opened a hotel, and we all went to catch pirates. The three of us all have over ten thousand.
Aqua's settings
Aqua's setting is actually ridiculously strong. He is a god himself, immune to almost all law-based skills. His own HP and MP are almost unlimited, and his defense is almost unlimited (he has not broken his defense in the whole novel) but because he was afraid of pain, he quickly became timid and in fact he was not injured at all. Almost all of Aqua's skills have no CD That Hagoromo is immune to all debuffs and all mental attacks. Aqua's Purification: While having extremely high penetration against holy resistance, it can also clear enemy buffs and remove teammate debuffs. Aqua's Water God Handle: In addition to her ultimate move, Flood, liquids that have come into contact can be directly purified, and can even be directly purified into holy water. (Just a quick mention here, generally the elemental gods in Japanese animations are concept gods, which are higher in rank than ordinary gods) Aqua's Reincarnation God Handle: Can resurrect teammates infinitely without CD. Aqua's special divine handle: seal, using it on an item can make props of any level directly ineffective (so don't brag about world-class props being useless). Using it on a living creature can permanently seal one of its attributes or abilities. The above are the attributes Aqua displayed after being taken to a different world. If it is Aqua from the Heaven Realm, in addition to the increase in all the above attributes, it also comes with the ability to wholesale world-class props (the world-destroying puppet that even the Bone King in the theater version admits cannot be beaten was made by the old wall lamp in Su Qingli with the world-class props given by Aqua) In addition, Aqua's rank is extremely high, and the gods who appear in the plots basically related to Aqua, whether from Su Qing or from other worlds, call Aqua their senior. Aqua's special ability, the Goddess of Civil Engineering, is top-notch in wall repair speed. She can continuously repair fortifications under the devil's explosive magic, and even repair them faster than they can be blown up. There is also the True Seeing Eye, which can see through everything. When you descend to earth, you can transform into night vision and enter the maze without a torch. In addition, this Aqua basically integrates offense and defense, so what else is needed for IQ to think about tactics. It can be said that apart from her low IQ, Aqua is designed with the strength of the evil god D in a spider.
I feel like in the future when we go to war, the protagonist will appear domineeringly with a bunch of funny characters and then say "Hey kid, I haven't paid back the jewelry I owe you, so I'm going to die like this and don't want the interest!"
How can I put it, when I saw the protagonist eating the fruit that was so popular that it was so awesome, I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading too many books where eating fruits had no side effects, I felt nauseous when I saw the same plot again. I think that since the protagonist in One Piece has a golden finger to slowly become stronger, he can also use some weird fruits instead of fruits. Use unexpected things to win. Nowadays, there are so many pirate articles that rely on writing novel things to attract readers' attention. Figure out the positioning of your own book in the eyes of readers before writing a book. Unless you are not here to make money, you are writing for readers. You should ask readers what they want to see and then draw inferences. Otherwise, what can you use to compete with others? That's all I have to say, I deleted the book and ran away. If I'm lucky, I might be able to see your other books. (Everyone please push me up so that more people can see it)
So why is king? I can't imagine what role he has.
Can I have a cauliflower snake
I actually ate the fruit. The abilities in so many worlds are not as good as this dick thing. I don't understand. I walked away.
The author was obviously in too much of a hurry, and his combat power collapsed. Eneru ate the fruit and brought the highest level of knowledge and color. He has been practicing for almost 10 years and equipped with an enhanced spaceship to fight Luffy. Luffy has nothing to do with him. The main character of this book has a name like Nikolayski with zero sense of substitution. After eating the thunder fruit, it didn't arrive for a day, and he didn't train anything and came up with two things. With only one skill, he can compete with Kaido. Luffy has fought so many BOSS battles but he can't stand a blow from Kaido. Fortunately, the protagonist has never left the novice village, so he can hit Kaido with a few blows. I originally thought that the thunder fruit was king and took the serious funny and relaxed route. The protagonist suddenly changed to the protagonist of Long Aotian's brainless novel from more than 10 years ago. I can only say that I saw it.
Nowadays, even the funny articles about the navy taking the blame have to face the fact that the Celestial Dragons are against the will of heaven, and the justice of the navy is a shitty problem, and it is almost impossible to laugh out loud.
If wisdom had a color, it would be blue! Long live Axis!
Let me just talk about my opinion on the main character eating Devil Fruits. After so many years, I have read a lot of pirate fics, and Thunder is almost the most common one. Even a time traveler knows what to do after eating them, so this part is very boring. In contrast, I am more interested in watching some relatively niche fruits that can show their power through self-explanatory imagination. There are several next door, and one of them ate the Shaoshao Fruit. Heating the fuel can make it release heat faster, and the endothermic storage ability was thought out. In the finale, the saved heat was directly bombarded with tens of millions of degrees and burned Im into ashes; the other one was eating Jinjin Fruit, thinking that changing the weight is changing the density. After practicing as a training cheat for several years, he was able to defeat Kaido with a million pounds of one blow. The original version of One Piece has a classic case of the Meatball Fruit. Why can't fans let their imagination run wild?
Much better than the Tom Cat book next door
It's much better than the one written by Tom Cat next door, but the more you write about it, the more disgusting it becomes. Even Wanguo, who has sacrificed 17 years of his life in exchange for 83 years of a stable life without having to work overtime and have a stable life with food and clothing, is forced to be more oppressive than other franchise countries, and the conditions are worse than other franchise countries. It would be cruel to trade life span for that.
It's best to change the main character's name. It feels very inconsistent. I always think of him as Lin Chiling.
In Chapter 29, a bandit king was killed, and it was the red-haired pirates who did it. The protagonist wanted to use a gun to kill him, and Aqua was equivalent to a piece of trash who only knew how to use large-scale water balloons, and slipped away.
Um, doesn't Aqua kill randomly in the pirate world? The nemesis of all abilities
Sure enough, everything fell apart when I got the Thunder Fruit. The author couldn't control the plot and was stuck with Oda's ruined setting. Once you get the Thunder Fruit, you can make up whatever skills you want without any brains. You can make the protagonist I wrote invincible for a second, punch the navy and kick the four emperors. Once you have the strength, you can do whatever you want. You must clean up these nondescript contents.
The companions are just a gimmick, and the core is still a fantasy novel about the two-dimensional monster-fighting and upgrading system. Anyway, as long as you summon the protagonist, you can get a fairly practical ability, and you don't have to rely on companions to survive. This is actually not what I wanted to see when I clicked in...
I want to ask if Aqua will be taken in later. Although most people who have seen Su Qing will not subconsciously regard Aqua as a love interest. Although this guy does have a worrying IQ, is very disdainful, extremely unreliable, arrogant, and likes to shirk responsibility... But I have always thought that this guy is cute when she is stupid occasionally. I feel like I can't help but want to bully her... And I admit it. In real life, she does have the look of a goddess, and occasionally she will be gentle and tolerant of others, probably from the movie "Isekai Quartet". What she said left a deep impression on me: "If there is something you hate, just run away. Running away is not failure, sometimes running away is victory." Although she won with a little spirit, it really touched my heart. All in all, I personally quite like the character of Aqua, but then again, if there were Darkness, Yoyo or Wiz, I would not choose her first 🙂
It looks like it's a mess. . 😅
This... It's just bad. It's normal to have bad subscriptions and bad comments, but what do you mean by your final remarks? Who are you trying to fool? 😅
Keep it till you die
After reading these three chapters today, the author feels that you just posted the outline to fool us.
Py is here, I'll leave it up to you to read it!
Extra story
And what's going on with the author's new book? Cut?
See you all in Chapter 1
It's really a pity that I didn't see the protagonist's love story.
Not only have there been fewer recently, but it feels like the author just wanted to finish it quickly and just posted the outline. The result of the battle with the final boss was supposed to be at the end, so he just omitted it? Is the author worthy of readers like us who follow the update? Even if the setting in the future is different from the manga, it doesn't matter. Just treat it as a parallel world. It's so irresponsible.
Author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
It's over, but I still feel so sad
Summon the prison master
😭😭😭
How can I put it this way? It's pretty good-looking, but don't think too much about it. Pretty cool.