
Douluo: My Martial Spirit Is Xiaofa
斗罗之我的武魂是小法
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 150k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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73Chapters
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If you have a serious illness and you have to restrict the protagonist, will your body be weak if your soul power is of high quality?
Um, can the protagonist just rely on Xiaofa's skills? Can't you create a soul tempering body? And you are stronger than Titled Douluo and yet you are still short of money? It feels a bit too repressive!
So far, there's nothing wrong with it, but there are 2 million-year-old soul bones and a bunch of fairy grass under the Yuanyang pot. Why don't you take it?
Poison, too poisonous. Chapter 1: Dissuade me from quitting. A teenage boy fights back and forth with a hundred thousand year old soul beast and yet still ensures that his mentality is the same as that of a normal person. This is simply an insult to my IQ. Do you have to do this daily guide?
You can tell from the writing that this is a newbie, with personal perspective and psychological description thrown in randomly. It's like it's dark, a raises his hand, b thinks about something, b talks, it rains, a thinks about something, b raises his hand, the rain stops, a talks. Writing this way makes the plot extremely incoherent. Behavior, speech, psychology, and environment. These four pieces of information cannot appear more than three at the same time in one description. Otherwise the writing will be extremely confusing
It's obviously unreasonable. With a hundred-thousand-year-old soul ring, how can the body be so weak? It's not afraid of bursting. It doesn't even follow the most basic underlying logic, and it's still writing a novel.
The intensity of the pressure on the protagonist was too harsh, and the performance was very poor. As far as the level of hard hacking is concerned, a good high-financial plug-in must be cut down to the level of internal low-level cheat codes.
It's poisonous, start with a woman.
The author wrote this for fun? I just wish the author a happy writing and I will withdraw it first.
With this ability, I can kill through this world of floor tiles in three days. I am really good at it.
5,000 Gold soul coins made a man who was far beyond the title Douluo cry. He was so poor. And what kind of legitimate defense was there? Who cares whether you are righteous or not? Killing is killing. These are all trivial matters. The important thing is how to write what makes you feel good. Generally, Douluo accepts female novels because it is originally a romance novel. Fighting is also part of it, but the main battle relies on strange and weird soul skills to attract people. It seems that you are not very good at writing emotional scenes. The protagonist's soul skills are not as good as those of Xiaofa. He is so powerful that I don't know how to write it.
Drive high and go low, but I didn't realize the power of the Piezo monster at all.
I can't understand it. I've read it but haven't read it. I don't know what it's written at all.
Hello, you cut it, right? One hammer in the east and one hammer in the west.
I don't know how to play League of Legends, so I can't read this novel. Moreover, the protagonist is so awesome in the first three chapters, and the result is a flaky movie.
I looked at more than 10 pictures and had no idea what I was looking at. It looked like a piece of shit and was disgusting.
The writing is so damn rubbish. The main character started to gain passive power when he was six years old, and when he was 18 years old, he was completely passive. After doing so for so long, he couldn't even achieve a burst star, even if he was fighting with others, he still had to use Seraph's Embrace. So useless? Why don't you write about eunuch?
The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.