Hogwarts Pureblood Glory

To be honest, there is nothing poisonous about this book, but it just doesn't look good. The author feels that it is too immature. Whether it's the characters' personalities, the dialogue between the characters, or various situations, everything is immature. There are flaws almost everywhere. Let's pick a few. Let's talk about the part where Professor McGonagall leads the protagonist. Whether it's performance or dialogue, is it like what Professor McGonagall said? Make a play! If you look at the original work and the better written fan fiction, you can tell that this is Professor McGonagall even if you cover up McGonagall's name, but what you are writing is just a passerby with Professor McGonagall's name on it. Then there is the affiliated family that I met when I bought a cat, and then I met Luna, and I met Hermione before being sorted. Apart from being awkward, I was also immature. Let's put it this way, without saying that the plot is exciting or not, the writing is not restorative, and the writing is not original or innovative. This book does not even meet the most basic requirements for HP fans. It is like a novice novel that uses HP. The author gives the impression that he read HP and made all kinds of YY on a whim. There are a lot of poorly written HP fics, but there are really very few like this. I recommend reading more original works and well-written fics. After writing a certain dialogue or plot, read it yourself to see if it's embarrassing or not, and whether it's funny or not.

Come on, it's been a long time since I read a Harry Potter fanfic, it's very well written.

The author has great ideas and good writing style. The only problem is that the choice of material conflicts with the character of the protagonist. I don't know if the author did any market research before writing the book. First of all, Hogwarts: Pureblood Glory, this title is destined to attract readers who like Slytherin. Secondly, do these readers like kind protagonists? Readers who like Slytherin like the elegance, mystery, strength, and pursuit of power of the Slytherin protagonist. If you don't believe it, you can search hp fandom on Qidian. Com and read all the excellent books about the protagonist of Snake Yard. However, until the chapter of the Sorting Ceremony, what is the biggest trait displayed by the protagonist? Integrity and kindness. He is humble, polite, courteous to Professor McGonagall, and very kind and patient to Hermione. He is an upright and kind-hearted young man. His only problem is that he is not Slytherin enough... An upright and kind protagonist, no problem. The first impression given to readers is that of an upright and kind-hearted protagonist, which is a huge problem. Because the readers who came here because of the title of the book are all readers who like Slytherin! They read the first 30,000 words, and their first impression was that the protagonist is not Slytherin at all, but very Hufflepuff... If Pureblood Glory is changed to Badger House Glory, the results will definitely not be bad based on the author's writing skills. But I am writing about the protagonist of the Snake Yard. I would like to use an analogy. It is like hanging a halal sign outside and selling braised pork and pig intestines inside the restaurant... The author, of course you can say that the subsequent protagonist will show strong Slytherin traits. He will control power, transform the Snake Yard, and lead the pure-blood nobles to glory. The question is, how many readers who like Slytherin will actually read the end?

I paid just to say a word, neither Hogwarts, nor pure blood, nor glory.

You are as loyal as Hufflepuff, while Scamander next door is pure-blood glory.

The Gunter family is very thin. If you want to have heirs prosperous, you can only have two if you have one female lead. If you have one more female lead in a lifetime, the number of people will increase 😏😏😏😏. The manpower needed to control the entire wizarding world, no one is more reassuring than your own heirs😏

Let me tell you, I saw Chapter 20 and subscribed to one chapter just to complain. To be honest, when I first read the title of the book, I was actually quite curious. After reading two or three chapters, I thought it was pretty good. But, the back part is really crotchless. It sounds like he is a pure-blood aristocrat, but he doesn't look like a pure-blood aristocrat at all. It is also possible that this is what the author thinks a pure-blood noble looks like 🤭 One more thing, the writing of Ron in Chapter 18 is a bit inexplicable, and I don't know what it means. From what I understand, the author's meaning is that Ron said to the protagonist, "What are you looking at?", And then the protagonist didn't even fart. Speaking of which, I have only watched the Harry Potter movies, and I really disliked the character of Ron, who failed to achieve anything but failed. In fact, my opinion about this book is that the author has some problems with the development of the plot. The entry point feels a bit stretched. The pure-blood nobles should not start from the third child. Talking about recasting the glory of pure blood, but there is no sign of it at all, and it feels a bit like selling sheep over dogs. After all, it is still a plot issue. I can only say that the author is still too young and does not have enough control over the plot. If you are an old bookworm, I feel that there is a high probability that you will not be able to read this book, but for those who have never read HP fan fiction or have read less, this book can still be read. Above, some of my thoughts on this book

It's really embarrassing to write about Chinese food. I don't know why I write about it. Do you think too many people read your book?

The protagonist is a really nice guy, really polite, but he doesn't look like a pureblood, right? According to my understanding, the protagonist should appear to be friendly, but in fact he is aloof and unreachable. He treats people politely and courteously, but psychologically he never agrees that they are worthy of his respect. It is just the upbringing and etiquette that makes him do so!

After seeing him telling Hermione the secret of the Sorting House, he stopped reading.

I typed a lot of words, but finally deleted them all, because people who understand will naturally understand, and people who don't understand will still not understand no matter how much they say. As far as the article can be said in one sentence, the aristocrats the author writes about are the aristocrats in the minds of children, not the nobility in the eyes of adults.

How to say it? This book gives me the impression that the butt determines the brain, and the penis determines the mind.

Is the protagonist from the Snake Yard? I was confused. The title of the book didn't seem to match the content. . .

I have inherited a large amount of inheritance and have not developed any power. I only know how to talk to the so-called nobles. I am in danger every day. It's okay to hire some thugs. As long as they don't beat me to death, I can exchange benefits, right? The so-called nobility is all about ceremonial dress. Very awkward.

To be honest, the more the author writes to the end, the less people read it. There are so many conspiracies and tricks, but the writing skills are not good enough. They are all riddlers. There are many ideas, but they are useless. Some plots are too advanced to reduce IQ. Forget it, I will still read it and see how the author gets it right.

The identity of the protagonist, the Witch King, the Demon Lord, the creation of the Lord of the Rings, there is a lot of chaos. It combines elements of romance, sadomasochism, tyrannical president, prince and Cinderella, Lord of the Rings and other traditional Western fantasy stories into one, this is amazing! The heroine Luna has no conflict, Voldemort is not strong enough, and he can't go far without strengthening it, and the heroines are beautiful Fleur and Ginny. Hermione is suitable, but it was influenced by the actors and other books. After all, she is a Mudblood. He can be tortured, he can be pampered, and a mudblood can become a queen, or even a queen. This is exciting. The protagonist's bloodline is the Gaunt family, Slytherin, Peverell bloodline, and with black hair, he looks like a Roman at first glance. Let's talk about it again, the Royal Mages of the Roman Empire and the priests of the Roman Republic. Even Caesar performed sacrifices. Mage, wizard, and priest are actually the titles of clergy.

Being plotted against every day, and then being able to resolve it peacefully, even being attacked, and being able to laugh away the grudges. The noble character turns out to be just talking about it. What a high noble etiquette.

Very disappointed. Reading the title and introduction, I thought the protagonist would be the kind of person who is powerful but not wanton, noble and elegant from the inside out, not as flamboyant as a "peacock". Chasing power but not blindly using everything, etc. The protagonist's words are not reflected, and his actions are not very reflective. Also, five years after the protagonist's arrival, he only has a few skills, there is also a treasure trove that says he is "confused", and Professor McGonagall opens a book to read without permission, etc.

I don't feel that the protagonist has much aristocratic air. From my personal point of view, I can't even do it deliberately.

The writing is actually quite good, and the writing style is not bad, but there is no background. The words that are not pleasant to the ears are like the family and the nouveau riche that have been passed down for many years. It may be a bit ugly, but it is simple and easy to understand. The proposition is very good, but the Chinese open-mindedness is too strong. To put it simply, "Harry Potter" is set in Britain, and it was still a very traditional Britain that focused on class, tradition, and etiquette. Especially the protagonist is the Gaunt family, which can be said to be the oldest noble family. You are born to be the leader of the noble family. Lead by example, be aristocratic in everything you say and do, be gentle, treat others gently, be humble and polite, and pay attention to etiquette. These are all necessary. The author's writing style is actually okay, but he cannot write about this kind of background. Just like how a nouveau riche uses money to decorate himself, improve himself, and integrate himself into high-end circles. Others can also tell that he is a nouveau riche at a glance. He lacks the historical background. To give a simple example, in the eyes of businessmen, money should be invested and circulated, so that money can make money. But in the eyes of people from big families, spending a lot of money to buy some antiques, calligraphy and paintings, and works of art is more important and will increase the family's heritage. It can be seen that the author wrote very carefully, but the background is slightly poor, and he cannot write the kind of settled elegance. Modern ideas are used in many places. This strong modern idea makes me only see a civilized and polite child. I do not see the elegance of an ancient family heir. Many details are not handled well. After all, it is quite troublesome for a modern person to write about ancient things, but after all, it is a proposition chosen by oneself, right? There are occasional bright spots. The part where the protagonist is in Ollivander's shop is very interesting. The etiquette between ancient nobles is very interesting. As for the failure, the front is so-so, mainly in the waiting auditorium before the admission ceremony. First of all, nobles would not do such a disrespectful thing as stretching. Secondly, the clothes of nobles are always elegant and decent, and there will be no such embarrassing things as cloak slipping or tie crooked. Overall, the book is a good book, but if you are attracted by the title and introduction, you may be disappointed, but if you don't mind these and just want to read a good HP fanfic, this novel is a good choice. This is just a personal opinion, a small reference. No interpretation can replace the original work. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand eyes. You can decide whether you like it or not.

Well... No matter how ridiculous the magic in the Harry Potter world is, it is still an extraordinary world, right? Why would a fan from an extraordinary world write like this? Status? Reputation? Money? Sophisticated people? Are these things really useful in the extraordinary world? Shouldn't power be supreme in the extraordinary world? Still negotiating? Still speculating? Still calculating? In the extraordinary world, shouldn't I kill you if I don't like you? This book seems to have copied the real-life British aristocracy into the world of Harry Potter. It may not be bad enough, but it certainly looks awkward and funny. Strength is respected in the extraordinary world. If you have the strength, you can do whatever you want. No matter what the rules and laws are, you can just follow them. This is the true portrayal of the extraordinary world! I have read more than a hundred chapters of this book, which is almost one-sixth of the whole book. I haven't even finished half of the first grade. Moreover, after more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist's strength has hardly improved compared to the beginning. It is dragging and full of nonsense. What on earth do you want us readers to read, author? Do you think you are doing all those shady plots and intrigues? There are so many of these things in reality, why do we still need to read your book? It's not that there were no Harry fans with similar themes in the past, but most of them were based on magic and supplemented by aristocratic communication. But you, the author, have completely reversed the situation. It's completely indifferent and messy! What you are writing is not a Harry Potter fan at all. I advise you to understand what the extraordinary world is before writing such a book... Also, I don't know if it is because I am not good at interpersonal communication. Many plots in this book are confusing to me... The author's writing style is worthy of recognition, but it seems to be too deliberately pursuing that kind of book. There is a sense of mystery and grandeur to the point where I was confused by many of the content in the article, not knowing what it was talking about, but the author had no intention of explaining it... And the character of the protagonist is really unlikable, hypocritical, pretentious, indifferent and numb... As if he was wearing dozens of layers of masks, which made people very uncomfortable! Anyway, if it were in reality, I would definitely stay far away from this kind of person; even if I were a person from the extraordinary world, I would definitely kill the protagonist as soon as possible! If nothing else, just that I don't like such a person is the best reason to send him to death!

After seeing Chapter 50, I specially subscribed to one chapter to say something. Personally, I feel that playing politics in the magical world and people's hearts is not very pleasing. It may feel a bit novel in the first paragraph, but in the final analysis, the essential charm of this subject is to explore the magic of magic, which is to digress. At this time in 1991, the surname Gaunt represented constant troubles, which were unavoidable. The protagonist in the book made all the right choices along the way, which I agree with. But the feeling of being in trouble is still unavoidable, and it will even affect the growth of the protagonist's strength. At the same time, the protagonist cannot give up power or strength. If you give up power, unless the protagonist can kill 999, there will be no hope of survival. To be honest, I personally think that the most ideal route is to start with a pure-blood family with a lot of books, read books to learn about the magical world before entering school, enter the Eagle Academy or Badger Academy, explore the secrets at night, and start in-depth study of ancient magic texts, alchemy, and medicine refining to explore and invent. As for the Academy Cup? Is that something like a primary school red scarf? In the timeline, it is best to be in the same grade as the Weasley twins. After Harry Potter enters school, he will at most just watch and eat, don't get involved. Inviting the twins and several classmates to join the team, they began to invent and manufacture some interesting things, such as alchemy items for instant messaging, exploring the nature of magic, and occasionally adding things that students liked to hear and see, to add some work to the professors. While strengthening yourself, you can earn hundreds of millions of Galleons, publish some inventions or papers, get a Merlin Order of Merlin, and travel and explore other countries during the holidays. . . Of course, this is the most greedy and perfect route, which requires hundreds of millions of talents and a master of time management to complete. . Of course, we can't forget about picking up girls.

I spent 19 points specifically just to criticize this book. It's almost as disgusting as shit. The plot of refusing Qiu Zhang to work with Harry as his wingman is really poisonous. It feels like being cheated. It can be called a different kind of Qiongming Fairy Record. There is a green-haired turtle, and he has a good harem and he does it right. I don't know how the author came up with this plot.

Now, only when you turn to To be continued from the starting point, you can count on reading the data.

Are there many people who write novels now who are learning to create scripts? The things written here are hammers, hammers, sticks, various names, characters, and names of passers-by A, B, and C. The most confusing thing is that in the middle of the narrative, the plot suddenly cuts and a bunch of brainless characters come in. Without explaining clearly, they directly cut to new chapters. There is no connection between them. This is a novel, not a script. Everyone who reads it is confused.

Taylor, wouldn't this conflict with Malfoy cause trouble for Luke? Hermione actually said this when she was at Flourish and Blotts Bookstore. That's Luke's problem, just let him solve it himself. Tyler said to Hermione nonchalantly: Don't worry, these are just insignificant things. In the first moment, she stood in the protagonist's position and verbally attacked Lucius, and later she threw herself away. This original heroine is really interesting.

Harry Potter seems to be from the UK. . . Pure blood means nobility! You can learn about the British aristocratic system and the rise and fall of the aristocracy. Otherwise. . .

Thanks to the suggestions of some book friends, I have modified the plot related to the first meeting with Luna. If you are interested, book friends who have already read it can read it again.

On the evening of September 28, 2023, it was announced that Mr. Michael Gambon, the second actor who played Principal Deng, passed away. Aged 82

After reading a hundred or two hundred chapters, I really don't understand what the whole book is about. The protagonist Goldfinger has no sense of existence. Most of the content is like a battle of wits and courage in the air. The pure-blood glory that describes the theme is very watery.