Broken Sun Hunting Diary

It's too embarrassing. The writing is good, but the various prehistoric routines such as starting with useless qualifications, being looked down upon everywhere, hiding one's clumsiness, getting into trouble because of irrelevant beauties, etc. Are hard to describe.

I just don't understand. The previous book was clearly well written in the early stages, but it fell apart later on. The ending was so bad that I was speechless. The heroine named Mu was not mentioned at all. Is this the attitude towards readers?

Why don't you just open a book to continue Dragon Seal, about Sun Yan's younger brother, or start a prequel? Wu Yanqiao, Bai Xiuluo, Lin Xinghe, Sun Xiao, Dongfang Huang can all write it. Filling in the Dragon Seal pit is not much better than this bad book.

I still feel proud yyds

Those who have come to speak are all old readers. The online games Shield of the Sky and Dragon Seal God of War are obviously so well written, and the Supreme Sword Emperor has also done a good job in building momentum in the early and mid-term. But what happened after that? I saw you re-opening a new book before. This boss was a bit stubborn, and he happily pursued it, but found that it was also unfinished and boring.

Dragon Seal was so amazing back then, why are the following books getting more and more awkward?

Xiao Ao Tian Xia is the only novel that I can read several times without getting bored.

Dunyu watched it several times from middle school to university. It was really wonderful. Xiao Ao Tianxia also liked it very much. The author hasn't written about online games since then, I hope to see you again

Writing a book randomly? He disappeared for more than a year and never said anything about his return. Is this a failure if it doesn't become popular?

It's over, and it's time to seal the coffin. It's normal for this book to be cut half-way due to poor performance. The writing idea should have changed half-way. The simple cheat upgrade to kill monsters and carry the old man with you is really not easy to use. You can see the changes made in half-step, that is, I want to be included in the game The equipment is also integrated into the fantasy novel. This is the commonality of these two books. However, the result is not good. The world view setting of Half-step has always been quite good. This is what I think is great about Half-step. It is just that the way of telling stories should change. It still uses the old style of how many years ago. Serious portraits are really unattractive, and to be honest, in the four books after the character transformation, Long Yin's characterization is considered successful. Moreover, the protagonist is always surrounded by beauties, constantly emphasizing how beautiful she is and keeping the protagonist distanced. It's not necessary, no. As the main character, there are so many beauties, which is a poisonous point rather than a selling point. The two unfinished books gave me the impression that they were not exciting enough, or not exciting enough. There was a lot of foreshadowing and the climax ended hastily, which always gave me this feeling. The previous book said it was due to physical reasons, but what about this time? I hope I won't make excuses. How about trying a harem novel or something more relaxed? If you continue to write this kind of traditional fantasy, you really have to keep improving. There is really no way out with this way of writing now. Finally, I am still looking forward to your new work. I have ordered both of these unfinished books to make up for the previous ones, Shield Control and Xiao Ao. After reading your books for so many years, I am still willing to trust you again. I am looking forward to your new story. I hope this day will not be too long.

It turns out I'm not the only one who wanted to read Dragon Seal. I felt the ending was so rushed. It's my favorite mecha novel 😭

I have watched Xiao Ao almost every year since the year it ended, Jue Qianzhui, Vanilla Sky, Mi Lier, Half-Waist Man, Burning Light Blue, Medicine Master. I remember the order of appearance of each member of the Thousand Faces Adventure Group, including Qinran Yanyu, Duke Mu, I don't understand (it feels like Duke Mu), and Sarana. A series of female characters that impressed me deeply. The only thing that made me unhappy was that the relationship was not clearly established in the end, but they all lived together. There was still ambiguity at the end of TM, or Dragon Seal God of War nb

The Unparalleled God of War that I have been thinking about so much, wow wow, this book amazed me back then. It is the only interstellar mecha book that I still miss almost nine years ago.

A book that cost thousands of people, the next online game, and two online games that I have read more than three times. And don't end it like the last one🙅

Brother, why don't you stop writing this online article? Xiao Ao Tianxia's writing is so amazing. Although online games are now niche, niche also means that the fundamentals are stable and there is a market. Nowadays, there is nothing to read about online games.

I support the Dragon Seal. My youth is because of this. I got into interstellar navigation science fiction, but only the Dragon Seal is the pinnacle. There is also a Galaxy Emperor who dominates the galaxy, and there is no interstellar anymore!

Family, why don't you restart online games?

What makes me feel the most pity is that Sun Yan's ancestor Sun Liexue, a peerless genius at the same time as Wu Yanqiao, had to squeeze his talent and time due to the environment of the dark age, and finally died in obscurity. If in peacetime he would at least be a peerless martial artist.

It's another new year, and I beg the author to write the second part of Dragon Seal! ! !

After all, Xiao Ao has read it seven or eight times recently Don't ask why, half a year later, you know the last one Hey, I actually want to see you write about online games.

If you really have no life left, you can just write Dragon Seal 2

Watching it again after so many years, it's still so engaging

I suspect that the author has sold his account since the beginning of the Supreme Sword Emperor. Obviously the writing of Shield Control and Dragon Seal is very interesting.

Come on Brother Cangsang, I look forward to your next book, this one is also very good

It seems that the half-step vicissitudes of life is not very short of money. The previous book was well written, but the ending was suddenly rushed. After waiting for more than a year, there was no news about a new book or even about him personally. A few years have passed, and today I came back to see if the boss has any new books. The good news is that there is a new book. The bad news is that it only has a few hundred thousand words and it shows that the book is finished. Looking at the comment area again, the person disappeared after the book was finished.

When will I write another online game? .

When will you come back? I really want to read your book

I still like Dragon Seal three or more times

The last time I read your book was three years ago. Why are there not any new books?

Now I just want to read a book about fighting, and I don't want to read about literary youth, where I can't get up and down.