Da Xia Mendian Man

The author is very imaginative and has a profound writing style. I give it a thumbs up.

Up to now, I admire the world view of "Mending the Sky" that Zuihu has greatly constructed. Combining martial arts, family and country feelings with the cultural heritage of Daxia, every upgrade makes people feel the weight of culture, rather than simply killing monsters and changing maps. " Among fantasy novels, at least it can be seen that the setting of this book is carefully polished by the author. For example, upgrading the elixir and even describing the protagonist's outfit are said to be superficial and pure nonsense. Xiaobai's article is really interesting. Anyone with any brain can see how much care the author takes in his work. This is not just my opinion. The work is here for everyone to see. And why is it so easy to talk about it during the free period? Hahahaha Finally, "Mending the Sky" is not only a heaven for mending strength, but also a heaven for mending people's hearts! The signs that can be seen so far in this book are already exciting, and it is another masterpiece of dancing with shackles!

Qian Shen Nuo Noodles, how do you use this thing? What are the specific functions, and how can I explain something unclearly using Gold Finger? I guess I wrote it for myself. The novel that is most popular among the public should not be written in a foggy way. It should be written more clearly and simply, so that others can understand it at a glance. After holding it in for so long, it turned into a piece of shit.

Just one question: Daxia in another world is so strong, why do they have so many suits and trousers for various occasions. . This does not conform to the logic of a strong culture

Your feeling is very accurate: "The Man of Great Xia" is indeed "watery", with a slow pace, and a weak connection between the early and middle stages and the introduction. Let's make it clear from three points. 1. It is really good, but the pace is slow - There are too many unit cases and the length is long: 960,000 words and more than 320 chapters. The main plot is still very slow to advance to the core secret of "Butian Pavilion". There are a large number of paranormal unit cases in the Republic of China (Meile Hotel, Death in a Secret Room, Netherworld Flower Poison, etc.). A single case has more than ten chapters, and the number of words is obvious. ​ - The description is full and there is a lot of nonsense: the environment, atmosphere, psychology, and supporting character backgrounds are laid out in detail, and many chapters have very little advancement and low information density. ​ - Author's style inertia: Zuihu's previous works (such as "Snow Wash the World") have the characteristics of slow pace, heavy foreshadowing, and many psychological dramas. 2. The linear plot advances slowly, and the main plot is deeply hidden - The main plot is vague and the unit drama dominates: The introduction talks about "Butian Pavilion, Nuwa repairing the sky, and protecting the world for ten thousand years", but the first 200 chapters almost revolve around the investigation of the Republic of China and local events, and Butian Pavilion is only a shell. ​ - The protagonist's growth is slow and his upgrades are delayed: Lin Can goes from an ordinary reporter to a patchworker. His abilities, authority, and information are improved step by step without skipping levels. He lacks a fast-paced and exciting experience. ​ - A gray line of grass and a slow recovery: The clues of the case point to the evil path, the Demon Treasure Sect, and the Butian Pavilion conspiracy, but there are many foreshadowings and a long recovery cycle. It is easy to "forget to read and forget to read" in the mid-term. 3. The content and introduction have low correlation (early and mid-term) - The introduction is grand, but the opening chapter is small: the introduction is ancient mythology + ten thousand years of guardianship + a great era; the first half of the text is about a reporter from a small town in the Republic of China investigating a case, local evil spirits, and family grudges. The pattern is much different. ​ - "BuTianRen" setting is marginalized in the early stage: The core of the introduction is the identity and mission of "BuTianRen", but in the early and mid-term, it is more of a "supernatural reporter + part-time warlock". The inheritance, responsibilities, and crises of Butian Pavilion only unfolded very late. ​ - Elements of Nuo Opera and Butian Pavilion appear late: The Qian Shen Nuo Noodles, Thirteen Taibo Nuo Noodles, Fuxi Bagua, etc. That are highlighted in the introduction only appear after a hundred chapters, and their early presence is weak. Suitable/unsuitable for the crowd - ✅ Suitable for: readers who are slow to read, like unit investigations, can accept the fine setting, and are not anxious about the main plot. ​ - ❌ Not suitable for: readers who pursue fast pace, strong main line, high excitement, and want to read a grand narrative at the introduction level.

Just write five or six fucking chapters just for fun, and all the readers' money will be blown away by the wind?

Butian is so powerful, why do the other Butian people live in such poverty? Only the protagonist is prosperous, other Butian people in the newspaper office even have extravagant hopes of buying a car or a house, and other forces are so afraid of Butian people. Are all Butian people honest and honest, and selfless in taking risks? Wouldn't he be like the protagonist who takes advantage of the situation and uses his identity as a Rodian to gain some benefits? 😅

Zuihu is the number one god in Qidian in my opinion, even though he is not the most popular. I got to know Drunken Tiger from Xue Xi Tian Xia. A copy of Xue Xi Tian Xia made me read it online every day for more than a year until Tiger's update. Maybe more than a year, it was too long, almost 20 years ago. What impressed me most about Tiger was his feelings for his family and country, his love and thinking for this nation! Whether it's the tap water, edible salt, transfer funds or the secrets of cancer in Xuexianxia, ​​I even want to believe that what he said is the truth that cannot be seen in the media. After Snow Washed the World, I followed every book and read them all. There are surprises, such as Black Iron, and The Expanse, and there are puzzles, such as Machine Age! However, I found that Zuihu has not changed, and my pride and pride as a Chinese have not changed at all. I guess Zuihu is not young anymore. As a book lover, I am already 43, and Zuihu must be at least 50+. In short, I hope Zuihu will keep writing and I will pay you back all the monthly tickets I owed you!

To be honest, this book is quite good, and the first 100 chapters are very in-depth. The writing is also very good. The writing style, characterization, various aspects of the image, details, the advancement of the plot, and the improvement of the realm are all quite natural and just right. I hope the author can maintain this skill and continue. The running water does not compete for the first place, but the continuous flow. Only a steady stream of water will be the final winner

I don't know how you feel about reading this book, or what it feels like to read Zuihu's books. Anyway, there will always be a group of people who criticize it. I like this feeling very much. When I see the words, I have a sense of pictures. I have read many chapters over and over again. . . It's rare to read a novel with such a sense of picture

Recruiting people openly and openly, why does Mao have to keep people anonymous and do ordinary work? Isn't this taking off your pants and farting? Don't need to increase your strength? Don't need to handle business?

I really can't help but want to make some comments. The writing style is indeed very delicate, but the descriptions of costumes, scenes and psychological activities are too complicated and useless. Is it because of the low number of words or because of the literary youth? Many descriptions have no effect on the plot and character creation. I came here to read novels, not fashion magazines and real estate information.

This introduction is not very attractive 😅

But the writing style is too uncomfortable to look at. I don't know how much AI polish is in it. Anyway, if 80% of the description is removed, it will be a good novel.

I am a man of Daxia Butian, Iron blood and thunder forge my soul... Stop all the evil and evil things, Inaction is also light and dust!

I have been a bookworm for 20 years. So far, this book is the best book that I feel can be used as a god or a mystery in the past two or three years.

Tiger, are you addicted to playing cards? You paid for so many chapters to write about playing cards. I'm really speechless.

The author conceived and described this part of Butian Pavilion well. But the power is too great, especially the awe of the secular forces, and there is no restraint. If someone in Butian Pavilion has an impure mind, it is easy to do big things and even cause disasters.

The protagonist in these two chapters has obviously lost his wits. He can't even figure out the order of promotion to Danyue. It doesn't fit the protagonist's personality and work style. There is something wrong with the writing!

It's okay to read a chapter or two! As long as it lasts more than five chapters... It feels very watery, lukewarm, and your description of clothes is almost ruined! ! ! You look very anxious, don't you? ! !

This was not the case when writing the Black Iron Castle 😥

Every Tiger book is a classic. Regardless of the three black iron, silver, and gold books, the earliest snow wash or several other books, they all have the special flavor of tigers. Even the eunuch King Kong is the same. But now this book features tigers in the first few chapters, which makes people happy, but later it doesn't feel like the author's article. What is the reason? To be honest, if it weren't for the name of Zuihu in the last twenty or thirty chapters, I would have abandoned the book long ago.

The first time I came across Tiger's book was Black Iron, and then I read Silver, and many subsequent books. Tiger's books, no matter what time, remain unchanged in their original intention to speak out for the weak. Another characteristic of Tiger's book is that the data is very rigorous and he will not write blindly. Tiger, come on, this book must surpass Black Iron and become a masterpiece.

From Snow Washing the World to now, I have been chasing Drunk Tiger for more than 20 years. I have watched every work. Butian Man does not disappoint, with the same feelings of family and country, grandeur and delicacy. The most important thing is that he should be my fellow Yunnan fellow. I like you and am proud of you!

I've read the first 100 chapters and it's really good. I can see that the author is writing with great care and persistence. I'm optimistic about you 👍

The quality of every book is guaranteed

Why can I participate in the Butian Pavilion audition just by going there?

Happy New Year to all you book lovers!

I really like your writing style, please keep updating!

My favorite author, favorite work, nothing more to say, top up 😁😁