From the Start: Becoming a Negotiation Expert
开局：从谈判专家开始
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- 414k Words
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- Urban
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- Urban Life
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- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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The first five chapters of Toxic are written by a mentally retarded young white guy and are very awkward.
The author can't cut it anymore, otherwise it will be gone. I really hope the author will write another book about me being a detective in the movie world.
I have mentioned before that I am in the Hong Kong Zong, and I know what kind of movie it is, but I also forced myself to lower my intelligence and pretend to be 250. I talked about the title character, but my behavior showed that I had no idea about the development of the plot. Even if there was no mention of vomiting blood, I would have seen him vomiting blood.
Stop writing and go to work. Your novel is too cool. If you don't plan to develop the girl in the plot in depth, don't spend too much time on it. Otherwise, there is a suspicion that the number of words is too high.
What I hate seeing the most when reading books now is the increase in favorability and charm of the opposite sex! This kind of thing feels more science fiction than magic, science fiction more fantasy, and more fantasy than fantasy.
What is it about? The fusion of Hong Kong movies is so confusing that people who have never seen the movie can hardly understand it. What is the goal of the protagonist, Brother Yi? Get rich? Power? Money? Beauty? Cultivation? Become stronger? No, not at all. It's a mess, just messing around. The character of the protagonist is not lovable. Is there a female protagonist in the end? I missed several of them. Who else is behind? Goodbye
What the hell? Can't you normally write a novel?
Onlookers: Brother, don't jump! Think about your wife. Jumper: He ran away with someone else. Onlookers: Think of your children. Jumper: Not mine. Onlookers: Just die, there is no value in living anymore! Is the author an expert in this kind of negotiation?
After reading two chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The long nonsensical dialogues, even at the scene of the case, are all kinds of nonsensical. Author, this is not a movie, and you are not Mr. Xing. This is a novel. One or two nonsensical dialogues or plots in novels are enough. Your use of such large lengths will only make people think that the characters in your book are all a bunch of imbeciles.
I even suspect that the author's third-level writer account was bought from someone else!