I Am a Detective in the Movie World

I don't understand. You've already been suspended, and instead of trying to resolve your own issues, you're meddling in other people's cases. This isn't showing off; it's inciting hatred! And the kind that everyone in Central hates. Given your current situation, forget about getting back to work. Even if you open a private detective agency in the future, you won't gain any friendship in Central. I really don't understand. You're writing all over the place. Are you a newbie?

Don't limit yourself to Hong Kong. Hollywood has so many con artists, bombing the White House all the time—that's impressive. Honestly, Hong Kong's stuff is all small-scale and not exciting enough. But it shouldn't be surreal; the protagonist must be full of positive energy, but not a saint.

A gangster, because his underling was kicked, led dozens of his men to surround four armed police officers on duty, and even threatened to arrest the female officer? What kind of drinking session did he have to come up with this plot?

Damn it, I'm quitting being a cop! I'm going to join the underworld! I can kill him however I want! With skills like that, I'll be a boss in no time, laundering my money!

After looking at a dozen or so pages, a bunch of shorty-looking guys actually dared to gang up on a patrol car, and they were really going all out! And the police didn't dare to fire a shot; only the protagonist was showing off and engaging in hand-to-hand combat!! Wouldn't it have been more ruthless to just shoot and kill a few? Even if you wrote it because the British were bribed and protecting the shorty-looking guys who attacked the police, it's still too unbelievable.

A butcher selling human meat buns, a butcher on a rainy night—they saw it, then waited a while before arresting him. I'm speechless. If you can't do it yourself, why don't you ask your colleagues to do it? So the person who was killed has nothing to do with you, so they just die and that's it?

This novel is the worst one I've ever read about Hong Kong films.

I don't understand why the protagonist, whose choices are all geared towards promotion, insists on beating up his superior. It's a forced conflict. And you seem to have forgotten the book's title. There's no deduction, just direct crime-solving. What about the chain of evidence? I'm reading this for the process. This isn't a job where you only need the result; the process is more important than the outcome.

He offends his superiors wherever he goes, and he still expects a promotion? He'll probably never become an inspector, even if he dies.

Ignoring the Rain Night Butcher and the Human Meat Bun case to deal with other people's cases is toxic, bro. 💀 Every day they live, someone might die.