Swallowed Star: Simulating Time

Don't dare to deviate from the original work. What's the use of sticking to the details of the original work? You have to have your own story line and main line. I want to write my own story but don't have the ability, so I just have to rely on the popularity of the original work. Abandoned, if the more you write later, the better. Just pretend I didn't say anything.

There isn't much of my own content from beginning to end, it's all copy and paste 🤣🤣🤣👉👉👉🤡🤡🤡

When did the last few Devouring fandoms start to inexplicably ask the protagonist to leave the earth? ① Genius battle, enter the virtual headquarters, and the same Qianwu universe country comes out. When entering the core of the virtual headquarters, the origin of the protagonist from the first time he logged into the virtual universe should have been clearly exposed. The so-called anonymity, the virtual itself can't find it? The protagonist's selling of immortal corpses is also revealed. So who are you lying to by not revealing the relationship between the protagonist and the earth? What's logic! ②What is special about the earth? Mind is born on earth and becomes innate. Hong, Lei Shen, and the protagonists would not take it seriously if their characters were not exposed. What they thought was that there could be original ancestors who could defy heaven? , Xingxing entered the virtual core background and saw that he had inherited the legacy of the fallen feudal lord. That was good luck. After entering the virtual headquarters later, it's up to you to see how hard you work! ③ No matter how many geniuses like the protagonist and Luo Feng come, the top management will only be happy. The earth is just the threshold. Since the Stellar Genius War, the cultivation of the protagonist and Luo Feng has been based on other people's models. We can see more and more geniuses, but is this related to the cultivation on the earth? People only think that the protagonist and Luo Feng will get opportunities during their training, but what does the earth have to do with it? ④When did the earth in the original work become special? When Realm Master Luo Fengcai had no strength to protect the earth, Hong Universe level cleared the fantasy world, and Thor passed through the 16th floor. Two geniuses who were born on earth, both in law and combat power and in character, appeared at the same time. The latter kind of devouring human beings had never appeared before, which led to the giant ax investigation. If your character is not exposed and goes against heaven, who cares about the earth! Even if they are exposed, the protagonist and Venerable Luo Feng's combat power and self-preservation ability will definitely save the earth. The earth is just a special secret realm. Is it possible for something stupid to happen? Why not just write the protagonist in reality to remind the people on earth not to expose their unnatural character in advance? Don't you know how to write? What are you afraid of if the earth is exposed? You were originally born on Earth, so what are you afraid of? Is the idea wrong? What the earth wants is that its unfaithful character cannot be exposed in advance without the ability to protect itself! Can a genius like the original ancestor be compared to the laws and combat power?

No matter how many benefits the protagonist gets from the simulator, his performance in the subsequent simulation will always be worse than others, and then he will be better than others in reality by choosing. What kind of rat man is this?

After reading Chapter 239, I feel more and more uninteresting. The work tag corresponds to time travel and system flow. The protagonist's cheat plug-in was good at first, but the simulation interval became longer and longer later. The author wanted to write about the feeling that the protagonist relies on the system to become stronger at first, but later becomes the strongest on his own. It can only be said that the writing power is not enough and the arrangements are not in place. You must know that the protagonist is a waste from the beginning, relying entirely on the simulator to start. Without the simulator, he may be at the warrior level at most in his life, and he has to hold Luo Feng's thigh to figure out the earth. A protagonist with little talent always wants to rely on himself instead of relying on increasingly weak simulators. If the plot sounds good, it means it is close to the original work, but if it doesn't sound good, it means it has no new ideas. Readers read fan fiction just to see something new, not to read the same thing as the original work again. As for how to write new ones? There are hundreds of mission worlds in the original secret realm, and there are many opportunities in them. The original protagonist Luo Feng only went to a few mission worlds. With the simulator in hand, the protagonist can go to other mission worlds to find opportunities, and the new content and plot can be used at will. Another point is that the protagonist's talent is not very good, worse than Hong and Thor. And Thor's talent is not ranked at all in Devour. The protagonist doesn't think about how to improve his talent. He always thinks about his desire to be strong all day long. He relies on the increasingly weak simulator and dreams of overpowering Luo Feng and becoming the number one genius in mankind. After the time traveler hit the earth, he didn't use much of the time traveler's talent to develop himself. The system flow system also becomes weaker and weaker as it goes up. Every time the protagonist wants to simulate a reward, he has to worry about which one should I choose. The article is really not interesting to read. If you want to attract readers and not say that the writing is more interesting than Swallowing the Starry Sky, then you have to have different plot content. The biggest reason why I can't watch it is that it's not attractive enough. Even if I watch Swallowing Starry Sky again, it will be more interesting than it is now. The above are just personal suggestions, please forgive me if they are wrong.

Damn, I don't know much. This is the first time I've read a novel like Shuicheng 90% of the whole chapter is talking nonsense.

Among the Devouring fandoms, I think this one is well-written, and the others are outrageous. If you don't believe it, you can go and read it. It's nothing. I don't understand. Have they watched Devouring Starry Sky? How many times have they read it? Everyone is talented. Even if they have clones, they create their own species. Obviously they know it. Those who have swallowed the original text all think that their clones are better than those chosen by Luo Feng. In the end, they exist to promote the plot, not for ability. WC, among those who watch Devour, who thinks that pretentiousness is handsome, and those who are high-end, and those who are brainless? ? ? Among the three clones of Luo Feng, the Golden Horn gives Luo Feng an extremely solid foundation and the ultimate inner world; the Space Assassin (can't remember, after all, it has been used too few times) makes up for the lack of Golden Horn's space talent and improves survivability; the Blood Sea: the only possibility in the original universe that can break through the gene 100,000 times. If there is no Blood Sea, in the original text Judging from the content, it is basically impossible to break through 100,000. All other clones have better substitutes, such as World Tree, Time and Space Talent, Half Lord of the Universe, which can quickly increase the strength to Lord of the Universe, and the foundation must be solid, the talent must be good, and it is the dual talent of time and space. It makes sense that one can match the two. Let's understand why the protagonist of this article is an original clone. After all, there is no shortage, so just pick one. To be honest, you can choose a pure talent type. There is no shortage of combat power and so on. The main character of this article lacks talent. I continue to complain about other fanfics. There are actually people who don't choose Blood Sea. Oh my god, you can't say that you are sure that you don't want it. Blood sea, just break through with divine power, you NB, if you don't come up and go through reincarnation, don't directly seize the original universe, you are really creating a clone for the plot, pretending to be and standing at the same time, just squeeze your own universe out of the original universe when you break through, become the original universe yourself, and then reincarnate to devour the plot, and induce other time travelers to come and have fun. Those who voted monthly, don't call me haha

Poison point: The protagonist shows talent, in the eyes of the outside world. The first time I practiced genetic energy, my weight increased by 8,000 kilograms. The only one in the world. It was previously suspected that it was impossible, but it turned around because the protagonist was 24 years old. Not 20 years old. So I was looked down upon. Said it was impossible to break through the God of War. Resource investment suddenly decreased. There is no mention of the quota for the basic training camp. What ancient routine? He is two years older, so he feels "unfortunate to everyone" and refuses to invest.

The author is not very good at dealing with the earth. In the original work, Luo Feng had no choice but to give the earth away when he was not strong enough, and he took it back with great difficulty. The protagonist has no shortage of strength but takes the initiative to divide the earth?

It feels a bit poisonous, especially the simulator, which dies at every turn. The simulated character still has no memory of the original owner, and his understanding fluctuates. The plan to upgrade with multiple copies of dragon blood is a bit unbearable. In the early stage, I tried not to upgrade, but in the later stage, the upgrade was inexplicable. There was a golden finger, and even Luo Feng caught up. The key is that it actually added elements of urban literature.