They Just Want Me to Confess

It's so weird. I haven't understood what the dungeon means to the heroine after watching it for so long, especially the second dungeon is a magical dungeon.

After seeing Chapter 38, I was in no mood to read anymore. For me, this book is a pity to abandon and tasteless. Two points: 1. The details are not detailed enough and the opening is blurry. In the second chapter, I can't wait to enter the dungeon. What did I talk about with the village chief? The investigation and evidence collection are also briefly mentioned. 2. Why was he so indifferent to Yao after he came out, even to the point of being a stranger? Is it laying the foundation for the second female protagonist after completing the second dungeon? Is it really possible to use this method? What do readers think? When you said coldly that you didn't know me, I was still confused. Forget it in the cafeteria, forget it in the club. The third or fourth time, people almost put their faces to your face and asked you. You still said no, there was no pleasure at all. You saved people from despair and made people There is only you in my heart, and then you slap your ass and leave. If you can't stand it anymore, just stop here (this is why I gave up reading). Maybe when you write more than one hundred or two hundred, I will come back to read the second copy and the third copy to see if it suits my taste

The writing is top-notch, the plot is top-notch, everything is top-notch. It can be said to be a very good novel. Unfortunately, the character of the protagonist is really not my cup of tea. Alas, a plate of delicious food, and suddenly I ate a pebble, which made me panic. Of course, the most unfortunate thing is that the author is a eunuch. All right! Another book source disappeared 😒

This book is based on the problems of the past life. The people of the two lives and the sophistication of society make people see through life. But the real see through is to see clearly and still face it calmly. The male protagonist is like a child's mind. You don't understand me, you are a bad person, this kind of childish feeling

Open a like forum, crowdfund to find the author, and update 10 chapters every day. Those who can't write and won't be fed can leave me a message.

The author has been in a state where good books are not popular for a long time at the starting point. I hope everyone can give me some help.

Carefully selected character designs for the second copy, the desolate princess and the loyal knight. Jpg

Ah, the author created a really sweet Haruka

Stop torturing Yaoyao😭, everyone else has recognized it, it feels like adding Yaoyao into it will create a grand Shura field😏

I think the copy is indeed not written well enough, which is not the most important thing Another point is that the style of this book is wavering. If you want to focus on the world of the copy, you should quickly let the protagonist grow in strength and mentality. If you focus on daily life, you should reduce the extraordinary description and strengthen the description and interaction of the heroines... Now, even those who want to read a cool novel are not satisfied, and those who want to read a romance novel have not seen the lovable and desirable side of the girl.

The writing is OK, but the copy is too slow. I think the most attractive part of this book is daily life, but the author made the copy too long, and I can't see the growth of the protagonist. Now I don't even know the name of the first heroine. . . .

Let me remind the author that in the first dungeon, because of the sacrifice, the end of the dungeon had a clear time point, and the protagonist was always looking for clues, finding out the truth, and saving the heroine. Therefore, the plot is very suitable and does not seem watery. From the beginning, I know that it will end soon, so I read each chapter with a feeling of knowing that the end is approaching, and I am not anxious. As for the second dungeon, I don't know what the ending will be from the beginning, I don't know how long it will take for the ending to happen, and I don't know where it will end. I can only see the protagonist accommodating the princess and gaining experience. Especially when accommodating the princess has a greater proportion and the protagonist is not obviously stronger, it will make people feel that it will take a long time to end, and it will be easy to be impatient, so they will think you are stupid. But because your setting is obviously that the protagonist and the devil are too far apart, and it is difficult to upgrade in the past, if you write the ending now, it will be very abrupt, and the plot will be completely ruined, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic; if you continue at the current pace, then it is obvious that some people will find it boring and wasteful, and will keep the book or even abandon it. Therefore, the rest of the story in this second dungeon needs to be controlled by yourself. Either it should be short and reasonable, or it should be long and exciting, or it should be a compromise. By the way, the span between the first dungeon and the second dungeon is too short. The reader has not completely come out of the first dungeon, and is dragged out on a blind date with the first heroine when she is still in the honeymoon period. Therefore, the second heroine will definitely be disliked when she is not attractive enough. This is also one of the reasons why she dislikes you. I want you to end it quickly and go back to continue your honeymoon. The above are purely personal opinions. If you have different opinions, you can post them yourself and let the author make his own evaluation.

It's a good but not popular series. It starts with a copy of the underworld. I thought it was a suspense novel. Come on, author, if you get through it, it will become popular.

I will give you a few hundred rewards as a proof of the few chapters that are released╰(‵□′)╯

I understand everything

It's a little bit poisonous, the male protagonist can give his life for a girl he just met for a few days. Just tell passers-by that they are fake and don't care at all.

Although it is very abrupt, I hope the author can post the outline and so on. I also hope that this story can have a happy ending.

I think the author can write very long. At least a million words. You must work hard. Definitely not a eunuch.

Damn, I feel so uncomfortable! It turned out to be a eunuch. It seems that I have to wait until the book is finished before reading it. I feel so uncomfortable now!

The role of Haruka Shimizu came from her, right?

I would like to thank the author for providing us with such an excellent work. However, horses with a thousand li horse often exist, but Bole does not always exist. This ending is not perfect. I still hope that the author will stick to his writing and bring us better stories. Remember to leave the title of the book. Grateful!

Does anyone know the new number

First of all, I would like to apologize to the author for accidentally spoiling this book! Let me talk about my feelings. Personally, I think the most exciting part of this book is that the second copy ends at the beginning but has not yet started. The protagonist has a personality, distinguishing between dreams and reality, and through comparison, embodies the advantages and warmth of the heroine (from inference, Rin should be a girl). A copy is a copy, reality is reality, "I don't owe you anything"! The last third copy was the worst written at the end, and it was extremely depressing to read! I just want to say, does the protagonist owe them anything? Who pays for whom? Only Rin is paying for the protagonist! The protagonist in the dungeon is like, no, that is, licking*, more licking than his friend, I don't know how serious it is! The heroines of the three dungeons are really ** and annoying. All three heroines are very self-righteous. They really take it for granted how much the protagonist has paid for them! Could it be a female video! Unscrupulously enjoying the protagonist's supreme dedication to them, why do you come to the protagonist to let the protagonist continue to pay for them as they deserve? In the first dungeon, the heroine was okay at first, but at the end of the broken bridge scene, my impression of her dropped. Later, when we came to reality, the contrast between Rin and Rin showed off its beauty, one of giving and one of enjoyment. The second copy talks about taking this kind of natural dedication to the extreme, and the pride of the heroine, I hope she will be proud of where and when, and proud of everyone! After all the dungeons are finished, I will mainly write about her plot, which also reflects her deserved dedication and what she has done for the protagonist! Why continue the persecution after finding the protagonist? In the third dungeon, I thought that after the suppression of the heroine ended, I would finally get a warm plot, but as a result..., Those who didn't know thought that they were the ones who saved the protagonist! In terms of details, the side plot is well written. The shopkeeper where the third female protagonist works at the end is probably taking advantage of the protagonist. Not only is he infringing, but he is also scheming! Maybe I didn't write it well, I wrote bad things (I didn't pay attention to it), and I wrote inferences about the plot, and I didn't pay enough attention! In terms of writing techniques, the plot is one chapter at a time, and the characters are oppressed. It takes a long time for the protagonist to appear, and the pace is not controlled well. Although breaking the chapter here can attract people to continue reading, it should not be broken here. It feels like the protagonist is watching a play and has not appeared for a long time. The most obvious ones are the scene where the old man buys ice cream and the scene where the princess meets someone in the academy and is plotted against! The previous reading was very exciting. Personally, I think the most outstanding part of this book is saying no to self-righteousness? Repay kindness with kindness, repay hatred with kindness! But at the end, it was so uncomfortable. If I hadn't seen the book cut, I would probably have given up on it! From beginning to end, I wanted to see the protagonist say, "I don't owe you anything?" (Who owes whom?!!!)

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