Martial Souls and Spirit Pearls, Starting from Douluo
从斗罗开始的武魂灵珠
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- Completed
- Length
- 808k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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The comments are overwhelmingly negative; these two chapters are indeed poorly written. Readers want to see the protagonist completely overwhelm Tang San, unable to defeat him despite the protagonist's best efforts, and see Tang San covered in injuries, only able to rage helplessly, a pitiful sight.
They directly overwhelmed the protagonist. Either don't write his Soul Emperor level at all, and instead, after all the buildup, he instantly collapses when he encounters the protagonist's group.
As for teammates, I hope they'll be chosen from the characters in the original story, and not created from scratch. Creating your own teammates just doesn't feel interesting. The people in the Soul Master Competition are actually no less talented than Shrek Academy students who didn't eat the immortal herbs. Oscar aside, Tang San and Xiao Wu aren't even human, and the other Seven Devils' talents are only average.
To be able to defeat the Shrek Seven Devils without any magic herbs like this, it's like they've used a cheat code on a dog!
The buildup was so impressive, yet the protagonist was so weak against Tang San. And it's still being sold. Goodbye.
A difference of twenty levels! You've even traversed the Killing Hell, while Tang San's Clear Sky Hammer still doesn't have any spirit rings! And that's it!
The protagonist seems to be getting worse and worse. Author, you portrayed him as such a god-like figure at the beginning, but then he became so pathetic.
Yes, as other readers have said, the general plot of these chapters is fine, but the writing style is problematic; it's a case of reverse expression. I suggest revising it. There are three points to modify in the battle. 1. When fighting the Netherworld White Tiger, you should go all out, beat it up, grab it and smash it on the ground.
All that hype beforehand, and this is all it takes to actually fight? This is pretty much what a random Soul Emperor fighting Shrek Academy is like.
After all that buildup, they finally clashed with the main characters, and then it was a forced back-and-forth battle. Seriously, are you the Konoha Five-Five Douluo Separation?