Martial Souls and Spirit Pearls, Starting from Douluo

The reviews are one-sided, these two chapters are indeed very poorly written. What readers want to see is the protagonist crushing Tang San in all directions, trying his best to be unable to do anything to the protagonist. They want to see Tang San covered in injuries, only helpless and furious, looking miserable. In the author's writing, everyone in the Shrek team went all out and gave full play to their abilities. They performed for a long time under the pressure of the Soul Emperor and were not afraid of strong enemies. The captain Tang San was even able to fight with the Soul Emperor and was evenly matched (Tang San was not injured but was mentally and physically weak. The audience did not care whether the protagonist had Trying their best, in the eyes of others, they are evenly matched), but it shows that the Shrek team faces the difficulties and is united as one, not afraid of oppression, failure, or pain, and can still remain calm even when it knows that it will fail, and achieve the result of being able to fight the Soul Emperor and escape unscathed. It can be said that it is an honor to defeat. It's no shame to lose, but it's a miracle for the whole continent to win. These two chapters mainly describe the story of how the Shrek team, under the disadvantages of low soul power, insufficient combat power, and mental oppression, tried their best to perform for a long time but could only regretfully withdraw. In my eyes, it's a plot that raises Shrek's charisma and lowers the protagonist's charisma. I guess other readers have similar thoughts.

Directly suppress the protagonist in one wave. Either you don't write about his soul emperor level. There are all kinds of foreshadowings in front of him, and when he meets the protagonist group on the stage, he will instantly shut down.

As for teammates, I hope I can choose from those in the original work, and not create my own teammates. I feel that creating your own teammates is meaningless. The human qualifications in the Soul Master Competition are really no worse than Shrek who has not eaten fairy grass. Oscar aside, Tang San Xiaowu was not considered a human being at all, and the other seven monsters' talents were only average.

Shrek's 7 monsters who can't defeat the fairy grass can be beaten like this, and the hang is on the dog, pull in pull

There are many NB protagonists in the foreshadowing, and it's like this when fighting Tang San. Also on the shelves. Bye-Bye

The gap of twenty levels! You've still broken through the Killing Hell, but Tang San's Clear Sky Hammer still doesn't have a soul ring! Just this, this

I feel like the protagonist is getting more and more slutty. Author, you described the protagonist so damn well before, but then he became so slutty.

Well, as other book friends said, the general plot of these chapters is okay, but the writing method is very problematic and is a reverse expression. It is recommended to revise it. There are three modification points in the battle 1. When fighting the Netherworld White Tiger, you should be more ruthless, beat him wildly, grab him on the ground and smash him wildly. When the Clear Sky Hammer spirit appears, the Netherworld White Tiger should at least be scattered directly. 2. The first time I had a strong fight with the Clear Sky Hammer. In the article, the protagonist retreated and Tang San turned pale. It would be better to just be shaken and fly a few meters away, but he quickly regained his composure. (And the protagonist is a bit suppressed here. The protagonist's skills, soul skills, and soul bones at level 60+ can only face the martial soul avatar equivalent to level 70. Don't say it is the Clear Sky Hammer, it is just unreasonable here. The Clear Sky Hammer has not been strengthened by the soul ring. It is just a sledgehammer. With the strength of the protagonist, at least he will not fall behind. Don't talk about numbness in the hands and lack of blood circulation, it's ridiculous. In this case, when Tang San is at the same level as the protagonist and the Clear Sky Hammer is developed, the protagonist will be beaten? ! What should I say? Here, the protagonist can beat him, but he can't make Tang San surrender! Book friends are all looking forward to beating Tang San. Finally, at the critical moment, he can beat him violently without using his martial spirit. He presses him to the ground and hammers him wildly. He grabs his hair and runs away. Are you going to surrender? If you want to surrender, you have to wait until the master sees Tang San being beaten badly and hesitates for a long time before surrendering. Don't worry about Tang Hao's actions, with Poison Douluo's current strength, it won't be a problem to protect Tang San, right? With that special poison, even if he was slightly injured, Tang Hao would be left alive or disabled. And in Wuhun City, Tang Hao is useful. If Tang Hao dares to do something small, he can just slaughter the Haotian Sect... There is another flaw in this book. The protagonist has had so much luck, but the protagonist group is not weak but strong? Although Tiancai Dibao only has one earth heart breast and so on, it can be said that the talent is not as good as the original work, but the current performance is that... The protagonist group is not weaker than the original work. The influence of luck is relatively weak. At least Tang San and others are much weaker than in the original work. For example, when Tang San went to the Killing City, his luck was greatly reduced. Because the protagonist had already cleared one round in advance, it should not be able to come out. Or, even if you get out, you still have to pay a price...

I've been blowing it for a long time, but this is it when it comes to fighting? It's almost like this when the passerby Soul Emperor beats Shrek

There was so much foreshadowing, and we finally faced off against the protagonist group, but the result was a forced back and forth. Good guy, are you the Konoha Five-Five Douluo Separation?