I'm Right to Bully My Wife for the Young Master's Dignity, Aren't I?

It's a stupid album for the ninja girl🤗🤗. I drew a draft because of the online class syndrome. I didn't draw much before I left the get out of class. If I have time, I will release the full version (pigeon)

😅 My line is not strong enough, 😅😅😅I'm sweating like rain💦💦💦I'm a bad artist and lazy😅😅😅

I have read all of Scrap Tie's books. Regardless of whether I am a genius or a misogynist, what attracts me the most is the warmth hidden beneath the words of Scrap Tie. This feeling is something I cannot feel when reading books by other authors. Therefore, to me, Scrap Tie is definitely the best light novel writer in China!

Or Xiao Xiajiang😋😋😋

It feels like it should match the character. I don't know if I can see it. Don't be too hot at the starting point. I want Yuyu😭😭

I remember that I only came into contact with mobile phones after reading "I Only Come" in high school. Scrap Iron's book can be regarded as my inspiration for novels. I am grateful to have his book with me. Now that I have grown up, that Spartan also has a big belly, and I have also begun to run for my life. I read a few chapters of the novel and I couldn't stand it. Maybe it's because I have passed that age, but I still thank Brother Scrap Iron for his book. It means the same to me as Brother Optimus Prime does to Ye Lin. Although it was snatched away by Ren Xiaoqin (time), I cannot deny that it accompanied me during that period of time. I also hope that Scrap Iron Brother can keep his love for writing and continue to share it with more readers.

This book does have a strong hippopotamus smell, especially the latest chapter. As soon as several of the men come out, there is a strong internal smell! I am a loyal fan of Hippo, and I am very satisfied with the overall content, but I have a few small questions and suggestions. 1. Judging from the combat descriptions in the first few chapters, this book should not be a combat novel, but probably a daily novel, with the background of cyberpunk + Hong Kong-style gangsters, but Hippo does not have much at the beginning. When writing about environment, on the one hand, the background of the world is not strong, and on the other hand, if there is no environment that people are familiar with, the sense of immersion is really not good, which is quite troublesome for daily writing. For example, my sense of immersion is Ye Lin's small bedroom, the old man practicing by the lake, the unpalatable cafeteria on campus, etc. , The detailed descriptions make people suddenly fixate on a certain point deep in the memory, and this sense of immersion comes. Sometimes Niqing does not have these descriptions because they do a good job in exporting culture, and the ultimate animation bombing. When it comes to Japanese campuses, they are cherry blossoms, short skirts, clubs, etc. After all, our background is still A little niche, I think Hippo needs to put some thought into enhancing the sense of immersion. I think there are quite a few that can be highlighted, such as conference rooms, abandoned warehouses, roadside stalls, streets full of water in front of the door, automatic battery vending machines, various neon lights, illegal drug stores, prosthetic limb stores, etc. 2. There seems to be a little bit of character development? I don't know if Hippo did it deliberately or if he was a little impatient. Overall, it felt a bit rushed to me. Also, is the follow-up content going to be about everyone going to college together? So looking forward to it!

If it hadn't been for the fact that I, the devil, had seen my urine before, everyone would have thought that there was another eunuch contestant at the starting point. 😅

As a rewarder for "My Talent" and "The Enemy Girl", I would like to ask why these two novels were removed from the shelves by the author. As a result, I can only download the full version from the network disk file 😭. When I was in the fourth grade of elementary school, I read the novel "I'm Talented". I was amazed at it. It was the best novel ever written. But unfortunately, I only had my mother's Nokia mobile phone at the time, and I hadn't finished the book yet 🤓. The follow-up was when I was in high school, I took the initiative to look for similar youth campus novels, and then I found the completed version of "I'm Talented". I read it in one sitting. Now that I have graduated from college for more than a year, I still feel that this is the most impressive and best-looking novel among the tens of thousands of novels I have read 😁. I have kept every character in it in mind, including Ye Lin, Xiao Qin, Shu Sha, Amy, Gong Caicai, Winnie the Pooh Yaoyue, Zhuang Ni, Su Qiao, Chen Yingran 😭 I also watched "The Enemy Girl", but it was not interesting without me, it was too restrained

It's a pity that it's always a fake harem. The copied book was directly changed into a real harem and became popular 😅