Ascension and Deportation, I Became the Strongest in the World

I feel like this content is easy to be sanctioned recently.

Very well written, keep it up. Most articles of the same type are rough, but this book is exquisite and interesting.

The protagonist should change his job to become a demon, not an immortal. Why? Because the main world of the protagonist is filled with dark energy such as death energy, the demon cultivator improves quickly. But the cultivation of immortality is slow to improve.

Classic new book: open high and go low New ideas: 2 Updates: 2 Writing: 4 Fluidity: 2

Yuanying dodges bullets,,, is petty, retro routine, came back from time travel but was disabled, even worse than Yuanying, Oh, it's nothing

In fact, you don't need to dig too hard. The title of this book is about fast food. After reading it, you find that it is not a mindless and refreshing article. It's not a problem at all for Yuan Ying to squat for bullets, right? 🙂

Using this kind of title and tags, it gives me the feeling that this protagonist, even if he is not the ceiling of combat power, is still in the game world. As a result, the opening chapter showed me a stereotypical half-crippled character, and I also struggled with fighting and training. Parents aside, if you have good writing skills and this word count, a lot of people will like to read it. However, it is not necessary for you to introduce the estranged aunt and the younger brother. You are really afraid that readers will feel too comfortable by introducing the plot like this. I probably understand the rhythm behind you. . I don't know what your score is. Although I can't judge most readers based on personal preference, I still want to say that readers will accept it and like it, just because the setting and plot are self-consistent.

There is nothing wrong with death gas. Petroleum = corpse oil. Car exhaust is naturally corpse gas.

The character of the protagonist is completely unlike the old monster. That's too much. Lived for 12,000 years. Everything is taken lightly. The moment I ascended, I looked down upon everything. Family and stuff, really. It's like, you lived a poor life a few years ago, and you become a rich man a few years later. If you live the life of a rich man, do you seem to have returned to the previous feeling? These are two feelings. Even if it's a friend you met as a child, you'll see them again decades later. What would you say to him? At most, they just have a few words to talk and reminisce about old times. What should I do next? That's how the main character made me feel. A newcomer who has just entered the cultivation of immortality. Real.

The majestic Mahayana ancestor actually wants to go to college

Seeing such a small number of monthly tickets, I thought it would be bad, so I came in to try it out after reading the reviews. In the end, my dear, I finished reading it in one sitting. There are no clichés in the whole text, and the writing is smooth. It is much better than most works of one or two hundred monthly tickets in the same period. It can only be said that Qidian is getting more and more depraved. There are only 25 monthly tickets for this book. No wonder I usually look for books but can't find anything suitable for hours. It turns out that all the good books have been buried in the bottom of the pile.

There are so many plots of mindless slaps in the face, and the slaps in the face are very painful, a bit like the subplots from a few years ago.

The official wisdom of this book is that you know you are a strong person but you still want to force the other person to listen to you.

I grabbed a package of this book, read one chapter, and then I was hooked. It suits my taste. This kind of setting is interesting, but I am worried that the author is cheating. It is only 150,000 words. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Come on, author, don't collapse later.

Come on, author, your writing is really great. I hope it can be recommended as soon as possible so that more people can read this good book.

The writing is pretty good, I can read it! Why hasn't the author signed a contract yet? Compared to those books, the author is a newcomer, but he is already very good. What's going on?

I would like to make a small suggestion. You don't need to arrange a touching story for every ghost. You will get tired after reading too much.

It's not bad for the time being, there's nothing serious about it. Although it's the rebirth of the Immortal Emperor, the background is not an ordinary city, but a strange resurrection. The characterization is also okay, and the male protagonist's personality changes are written very clearly. If you are short on books, you can read it, but the number of words is too small, so I'll just keep it for now.

This book shouldn't be cut, I think it's quite good.

As a junior VIP, I am sure that this book can be used. Unfortunately, the author is a newbie and comrades still need to work hard