Secret: Starting from Refusing to Receive a Box Lunch

It's really hard to write a mysterious fan story. If the Gou San family has no chance, there must be a deity. The whole five families can only play for nothing, and the black death battle is controlled by the goddess. You can't choose among the six paths to the outer gods. The witch's gender transformation is too tricky. There are also red priests and hotpot angels. Neither the big snake nor the small snake can move the path of destiny. So it's not without reason that so many fans create their own ways.

In fact, I think that mysterious fans should either set the protagonist sequence at a high point at the beginning, and be a demigod directly or bring someone with demigod combat power. This can make full use of the advantages of time travel, mastering the story line and a lot of high-end knowledge, and there is a lot of room for manipulation. Either start as an ordinary person or half of Sequence Nine, without hanging up or memory, and follow the protagonist group step by step. The author's setting is high, the combat power is low, and the series has to be ascended bit by bit. It is easy for readers who read the introduction and expect the protagonist to strategize and repeatedly jump between various forces to lose the patience to read on.

There is only one possibility for the protagonist to enter the Black Death War. He is to control part of the River of Eternal Darkness and become the Pale Emperor through the Path of Death. In this way, he can touch the Goddess by adding the Source of Sequence 1, and then pick up the God of War and jump to the Twilight Giant. Only in this way can the path be successful. Otherwise, just be a hunter or a witch.

Help, don't make the original characters low. What kind of weird characters are the half-animal cat girl Bunny and the witch car, as well as Klein who is worried about Huang Beibei finding her husband's family? No matter how you write the protagonist, can you be a little closer to the original Squid for the other characters?

After reading Chapter 17, I can only say that the protagonist is too useless and his character is not good. He knows that this is a mysterious world and is still so reckless. I wonder if you are not a tyrant. Why, do you want to learn from Master Luo? You push out all the information, you dare to infiltrate anywhere, you only have a Sequence 8, and you don't have any extraordinary items, but you dare to go to the enemy's lair that is higher than your own. Even if you just reported all the information about Qilingos just to save your life, you didn't hide any information, and you surrounded and killed Zesgreen. What benefit does killing him do to you? Moreover, a serial killer has the qualifications to contact the Desire Apostle, and he is also a pirate king.

I don't understand why the protagonist always tells others about his sequence and abilities. It feels a bit intellectual. Isn't this actively exposing his own characteristics and weaknesses?

Why do the more I watch it, the more frustrated I feel, and the more I watch it, the more I feel like the protagonist is useless? Is this the case in the rest of the plot? As a time-travel party who has read the original work and has no golden finger, how can I be qualified to wander around? As a pirate, don't you know the virtues of your fellow pirates? I don't make any preparations and just come up with my thoughts. If it weren't for the author's cheating, I wouldn't be surprised to be shipwrecked on the first day of time-traveling. If it continues to be like this later, it can only be said that I was selected by the author.

Why don't any secret fandoms have a harem of female protagonists? So boring

The protagonist is a Sequence 8, plus a Sequence 9 first mate, and several sealed artifacts. In the end, he was taken care of by two Sequence 9s. He only survived by relying on the protagonist's halo. It's so disgusting. If you think about it, if you are a Sequence 8 Xiao Ke, you still have several Sealed Artifacts, but you cannot defeat a Sequence 9, and in the end you have to rely on Tianzun to survive. How can you be more cowardly? It's because there are so many people watching, so you came here just to make me feel sick, right?

Self-feeling, this article is just for fun, the logic is not enough, self-feeling

It was set up at the beginning of this article that the protagonist has an incomplete soul. The protagonist keeps restarting, and every restart has a life. Every period of life has been laid out and needs to be revealed slowly. There is a reason why the soul is incomplete, which will be revealed later. The so-called substitute is another part of the protagonist's soul. There is a reason why the two cannot be integrated. Why the protagonist is hunted by the Zhengshen Church is also caused by time travel. Originally, this needs to be revealed slowly through writing. If everyone can't stand it, there is nothing we can do. The world is far away, we are destined to meet again!

Without the political commissar, it would be boring.

So is the protagonist doing charity?😰

In fact, you are a bit unscientific here. It was fine at first, but then everyone died with the formula. . . That's too fake

I've only read a few dozen chapters. It seems that many fan authors have the problem of unstable rhythm, and it is not limited to mystery. In the early stage, maybe because I had a lot of ideas in mind, there were a lot of various branch plots and various details. If the writing style is a little worse, there will be an obvious sense of procrastination. When the inspiration runs out in the middle and late stages, coupled with the drop in performance, especially the loss of a large number of readers after it is published, the author will become anxious. Then the rhythm will take off, including the fact that paradoxes with more positive reviews also have this problem. In the later period, the rhythm will collapse and the progress will be rushed.

The ending was written too hastily. It could have been all good, but in the end, the ending was just like a bad project. The ending for the sake of ending was meaningless. If you are sick and uncomfortable, you can wait. If you do this, all your hard work for so long will be in vain.

How to put it, I understand that the author wants to foreshadow and write his own style, but to be honest, readers have been asking questions, mainly because there is already a true god in this sequence. There are three adjacent sequences, and they have almost been taken over by the goddess. In the past, they were almost all decided. How can the protagonist defeat the goddess? Do you want to jump hard? If you don't jump hard, you can't become a god. If you want to jump hard, why choose this sequence at the beginning? There is no hope, so I have no desire to continue reading. The only way is to jump to the hunter. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, he can't beat Zhenzhu.

Isn't there a secret novel that rushes into the dark night at the beginning? How good is it to just eat soft rice but hard food? Why all the hard work?

The outer gods are powerful, both Tianzun and God have to return to their positions to ensure a steady win. Instead of Adam taking the position, it is better to replace them. Two or five dragons are good.

I think it's good to dare to write something different from yourself. No matter what the direction and results are, at least you have a little bit of your own thinking, which will be helpful when you write your own innovative novels in the future.

Author, is the protagonist going to jump paths in the end?

The author has deleted all the ads. I came in to read the comments and was stunned. Good guy is full of ads.

Let's discuss a question, if a thing has no spirit body or if a creature dies and the spirit body dissipates, will it still be under the control of the spirit world?

The story behind the protagonist of the fanfic is long and boring, and the fanfic will inevitably be fast-paced. Such a long and boring background is really a kind of torture.

The protagonist has restarted so many times and made plans, so he should be able to fight against the dark night.

Will the protagonist become a Red Priest?

Is there a female protagonist? The author 😰

Just submit it in the following format: Name of the sealed object: Ability of the sealed object: Negative effects of the sealed object:

How is the protagonist better than Kline?

What is the sequence of this protagonist now?