Seeking Immortality for a Hundred Generations: Start by Unlocking the Fate of the King Snake

Books with more than 5 entries or special abilities 😴 basically have no plot.

I couldn't stand it after more than ten chapters, it was too toxic. If the protagonist doesn't stand out in the early stage, doesn't quickly accumulate resources for the next life, and has to hang around at the bottom to accumulate garbage resources, you will be reincarnated for hundreds of generations, but you are not immortal, so what are you doing? And if you want to go to Gou Dao, you should go to the Mei family. To accumulate a stable life, you have to go to a large sect to work as a handyman to play Gou Dao, and you have to be forced to show your holiness occasionally, which makes you speechless.

The setting of Goldfinger is okay, but the logic needs to be strengthened. For example, the protagonist killed two people in the village, and the village chief found out within a few minutes. In the ancient setting, could the villagers spread the information so quickly? For another example, if the protagonist obtains a lifetime of wealth from a monk in the Foundation Establishment stage, it would cost almost the same to change the skill spirit stone on the back? If the price is so high, then how can others change the technique? Even if you need to spend so much spiritual energy to change the exercises, then the protagonist has acquired the memory of the foundation building period, which is basically half of the foundation building period. Doesn't the protagonist know that it takes spiritual energy to change the exercises? Has the memory been eaten by a dog? And so on

Such an old-fashioned plot, I feel like I'm back 10 years ago

The protagonist's spiritual fetus is too easy to kill. The first one was killed by Golden Finger, so there's nothing to say. Now he's killed two more. A few talismans can kill the foundation. This foundation is too weak.

Having just accumulated a certain amount of popularity from history, we should continue to expand in this area, and suddenly change genres. The readers who have accumulated in this way basically have to start over, and Qidian history readers should be the most loyal readers.

The writing is good, but there are some areas that need to be discussed. Can see

In fact, 100 of these are too many. I feel like 9 is about the same. If there are 100 of them, you won't know which one it is after you see it.

Not bad! It can be regarded as a standard fairy tale.

Encouragement

Come on I feel good

The pacing is not good, there is too much written in the first life, and it is a bit draggy. Generally speaking, this kind of 100-life style will take several lives to build a snowball accumulation, and it can keep readers fresh by reversing several lives. You have written more than 600,000 words in these two lives, and it will probably not take a few lives to finish. It is not interesting.