A Record of the Huge Moon

It looks good. Come on, the author. If you can continue with it, it's a victory.

To be honest, the rhythm is too tight. If you are deceived one after another, a normal person will not trust anyone in a short period of time. And if you are continuously exposed to fatal scams in an unfamiliar environment, you should be a little bit worried. The author makes the protagonist too innocent, causing readers to feel that this person is simply stupid. The author's writing style is actually pretty good, but I hope the author will rethink the outline, otherwise, to be honest, this book won't go far.

I think of a painting I drew before

Will a time traveler tell others that he came from time travel? It's not hard to guess what will happen, as he lost his freedom in the first three chapters.

This book has obvious advantages and disadvantages, and the shortcomings are super low-level mistakes. I can only say what does the author's editor do for a living? You can't even see the obvious low-level errors in this book.

The setting of this book is okay, but the protagonist is naive and stupid. He should be a growth-oriented protagonist, not a cool novel, so he has high blood pressure... It's just my understanding, nothing more, and it does not represent other people's opinions.

I always felt that the pace was too fast, and I realized after reading the testimonials that the author has written too many game scripts, but game scripts are different from novels. Games need exciting moments and plot climaxes to keep players motivated to continue playing. But in novels, if the plot arrangement is too dense, readers will be seriously fatigued. If there are too many daily routines, they will feel watery, and if the plot is too dense, they will feel tired. The creativity of the book is very good, and the writing style can support the creativity, but the author needs to make more adjustments to the rhythm control.

I feel a little uncomfortable. Why do I always have to be number one in the eyes of others? It's a bit baffling. Moreover, this kind of plot is too tight and is aimed at people who have traveled through time. It seems to give people a way to be themselves in the eyes of others, really like that old man, didn't he self-destruct in the end? The latest chapter is a bit baffling now that we know that his identity is in danger and he is still in the hospital. Continuously fighting monsters and leveling up can be very tiring, especially when you don't have much sense of immersion yet.

It's almost enough to leave those who give pointers in the comments section. The author should be humble, why do everyone think they are good again? You should have some idea in your mind, don't be so easy to teach others. Your thoughtless and instructive text really affects the reading experience of newcomers.

The writing is very good. The world view of the huge moon is very attractive. This is the first time I have seen such an explanation of time travel.

When a normal person suddenly enters a new environment, he will be wary of the environment itself, because he does not know the fundamental difference between the environment he has experienced and the current environment. For the sake of his own safety, he will carefully explore the surrounding things and information, then work hard to integrate into the environment, and finally wait for opportunities to move.

I looked at the comment section and found it was too violent. I think the writing is very good, and the many twists and turns gave me a bright feeling. Especially the plot where the computer man deceives the protagonist into being able to travel back in time. It feels like it's the same way of writing as Daogui's Zuowangdao. And the author obviously laid a lot of mysteries and foreshadowings, but it is too short and some of them can't be seen. In the final analysis, there is still too little, and the author needs to stand up!!!

I was just about to read it, but found that the time was wrong. Can the author be diligent and update normally?

It's a very good book, but the crazy pile of settings at the beginning is a habit I learned from someone😢

It turned out that it was gone. The writing is okay. Later, I got a little tired of aesthetics and really wished the keyboard warrior died. It's not that I'm annoyed by this character, it's mainly because I feel that after he dies, there will be a lot less meaningless dialogue. I just don't think the dialogue is funny, but a lot of it sounds like a headache. I want to read it first, but then the book will be gone.

One day tied, I personally think this is a rare and interesting story. First of all, this book is definitely worth recommending. The author is very good at shaping the world view and setting up various abilities. The plot arrangement is tense and coherent, with appropriate ups and downs, and the characterization of each character is also very good. Of course, there are still some small problems, such as the author's sentences describing the environment and the weak description of some characters. Generally speaking, the appeal of the text is not very good. It is recommended to strengthen the writing part appropriately. At the same time, I have a small suggestion. I hope the author can emphasize the transition between ups and downs in the subsequent plot arrangement. So far, it seems that there are always small copies nested within small copies, with small climaxes following small climaxes, which is quite tiring for the senses. I look forward to the author's steady performance and showing this crazy and chaotic world bit by bit before our eyes.

This book is very interesting, and I really recommend it. Some early comments said that some people were not portrayed well and disgustingly, but the reversal in these chapters just shows that it is foreshadowing, making the character transition very natural and not abrupt. This is the first time I comment, it is really a good book.

The protagonist travels around and solves the monsters in the building as soon as he travels through time. He solves several major incidents in two days and awakens an incarnation that others may not have in their lifetime. Then there are a lot of cheats: some beauties give incarnations, all kinds of systems come, and everyone fights for the chance to give the protagonist a chance. ; When someone conspired and fell into a desperate situation, he just said: "It's very simple, I just want to become a god." His combat power increased sharply, and he directly transformed into a world-destroying flood to restart the world. Later, he awakened the god-level incarnation of the Sea of Forgotten, and was invincible. In the end, he couldn't stand the cold at the top, so he decided to travel back home and become an otaku. 😎😎😎😎😎

Are the three golden chapters now full of nonsense? I have no desire to watch anymore

Both have imagination and the writing power to control it

I have convinced some people that the protagonist is a normal person. You let the protagonist fight wits with the whole world without understanding anything and want to take advantage of him. If you want to watch the protagonist Wushuang mow the grass, then don't read it, this book is not for you. If you don't even understand the book, don't make a fool of yourself, it will make you laugh to death.

Finished at the speed of light? 😰

Will it be updated to the end😭

Why is there a Cthulhu label?

Hello author, I seem to have read this book a long time ago, but only a little bit. Then recently I seemed to see your speech on Tieba or station B, and ran over to read it again. Then I was a little curious, do you make games?