Start with the Art of Taiping

It was so boring after reading dozens of chapters. I wanted at least a Thunder God to help me just to watch the one who controls the wind and rain. Nothing. The art of Taiping can't even control the wind and rain. The book next door started with Lei Gong helping me. You started this book by writing more than ten chapters and it already took care of your family. Experience is not like experience. After writing about 30 chapters, I started to create Taoism.

Already read, eunuch.

Lei Gong helps me, blah blah blah!

Corruption! Suffering! It should stop today! The sky is dead, Han Zuo will end! Although we do not have strong soldiers, we still have the people of the world! Blood stains China, Don't give up! The sky is dead, and the yellow sky will stand! At the age of sixty, the world will be prosperous!

The protagonist likes to meddle too much. . . It's easy to write biasedly and write like a nanny.

Seriously, if you don't know how to write, I suggest you read some good immortal writings, such as Immortal Officials of the Heavenly Dynasty, The First Cause of All Realms, A Prosperous Age, and a Troubled Age. They are all very well written. If you really can't write, just learn from them. What you wrote yourself is really good. How can I say it? It feels very uncomfortable

Is anyone here? Can the cute new author Jun be so shameless as to ask everyone for a follow-up reading 🤐╭(╯^╰)╮

I can't accept the money-splitting boy's actions. If it's to repay karma, that's fine. But I didn't expect him to just teach him the exercises for no reason and without any deep friendship.

How can you play the Way of Peace without rebelling? Heaven is dead, Huang Tian shall stand! ! ! !

Open a character post, is there any boss you want to leave your name on? If you have one, just leave a character name. If a new character appears, just come and pick it. If not, forget it. The author is slowly thinking about it ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Nowadays, all the novels about cultivating immortals are about fighting and killing, and there is no sense of immortality at all.

The nanny-style protagonist, no matter who he is, will definitely be a friend as long as he meets him once, and he will definitely save him if there is a problem. So tired. Not interesting

The main thing I want to hear is the classic line: At the age of 19, the world will be prosperous. Thunder God helps me, driving away thunder and lightning.

It's a pity. I personally feel that I want to get a little bit of everything, but nothing is written well. The team is also half-assed, and I feel that I don't have the support to become the protagonist at all.

But all Taoist priests must have no money in their pockets. If they get money, it will be like God cannot tolerate it, and they must be poor.

After writing Chapter 30, I knew that the protagonist had a nine-section staff, but I didn't know anything else. Showing off all the way. The problem is that there are no skills at all, and the upgrade system hasn't been released yet. Taiping wants you to at least get something fancy. Make a prop from the arcade Romance of the Three Kingdoms and say "Thunder God to help me" when fighting with others. Is this unpleasant? The Sword and Heavenly Book in the arcade version can all be written into it. There is a sense of immersion. It's a bit cool too. Your opening chapter has reached chapter 30. I tell the truth. I didn't understand it, the writing was very blurry

In fact, you can add the plot of destroying mountains and conquering temples. There are so many Buddhist and Taoist protectors. Many of them are the result of destroying mountains and conquering temples, rather than pure personal force. The earliest Taoism was to build its own power. For example, the Taiping Dao organized its own forces into thirty-six directions, and the Five Pecks of Rice Dao established twenty-four governance. What they want is to build the political power of the earthly state, Fu Lu Sect. The core ability is to control ghosts and gods instead of cultivating yourself like the Quanzhen North and South Jindan sect. So I feel that there is something wrong with your route at the beginning. This is a different world. Obviously you are not qualified to control ghosts and gods. Then you should start from the initial accumulation to build believers and teach disciples, then start to destroy mountains and temples to gather faith. The final benchmark should be the different world's Heavenly Emperor.

Not bad, not bad, the character is strong. If there are ghosts, I don't know if there will be many yellow scarf warriors in the future. Come on, add a comment to increase the popularity...

The protagonist was too strong in the early stage, with too many backers, and there was no sense of novelty or excitement. The author's writing is good, but now the desire to continue reading is not high because the story is too bland.

I can't stand it. Girls blush all the time. They want to be blushing when they go to the latrine. It depends on the person. They want to be blushing when they say something. Can they be normal when describing the characters?

If you get the way to peace and don't rebel, wouldn't it be a secret betrayal?

Probably a eunuch. . If it is based on the magic reform Taiping Yaoshu from the perspective of farming, it is less dark and more tenacious to survive in the world and hold on to the future. Maybe there is something wrong. Most of the people who use the traffic can't breathe.

If you keep opening a small account, no one will order more and more, otherwise you should just stop writing -_-||

It feels pretty good, why don't you write it down?

If you can't write well, you just can't do it. Don't use being influenced by readers as an excuse. You will know after reading your next book.

Why do you keep it and then lose it? ?

I voted, I haven't been cummed yet, I want to experience it😁

Come on, author! If it doesn't work, just rest first, enrich yourself, travel or read famous articles, after that, look at new hot topics in online articles, come back when you want to write, remember to talk about it then, come on. Waiting for older readers who are more accustomed to it

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