Game Pioneer

Overall, it felt rather unremarkable. The pacing was rather slow, and the subject matter was quite old and outdated. Even among game-themed novels, I saw seven or eight that started with "Benny and I... Through the levels" as the first game, while the rest featured games like "Plants vs. Zombies," "Angry Birds," and other simple mini-games.

I suggest the author go back and continue writing the previous book. You can write a sequel to the previous book, but it would be better to reduce the amount of gaming content. We're here for the gaming content, not the daily life content. The characters in the previous book were well-developed, and the results were decent. Maybe the author could write another novel of the same type as the previous one.

When you're starting a new book, you should include a chapter of advertising in the old edition, otherwise many people won't know about it.

It seems like a good book; the pacing of the plot is quite comfortable so far.

It's turned into a romance novel (sad).

When I saw the rankings of the new songs, I couldn't help but complain. Author, are you sure you're writing a game novel? I've already rejected this book three times because it's too bland, but this time I got into it and you've taken me off-topic. I'm furious.

To be fair, while the two-player game is decent, I don't think it's as classic as its predecessor, Away Out. Although Away Out did sell well, if I had to choose between the two, I probably wouldn't pick Away Out because the emotion and impact it gave me was unprecedented in two-player games.

Keep it up! The description looks great.

First, raise 300,000; it seems like a good book.

Why didn't you say you started a new book? That wretched woman!