I Am the Xuanmen Wine Sword Immortal

There is a big gap between the book's synopsis and its content. When I first read the synopsis and title, I thought it was the same as the Liquor Sword Immortal in Fairy Sword. However, after reading a few chapters, I found that the character was completely different from the character described in the synopsis. The protagonist is an ordinary person who is seriously ill and suspicious. I was cautious when I first chose a sect. However, when I became a master, I was worried about the demonic methods such as body snatching. After I became a master, I suspected that the clothes given to me were eavesdropping and surveillance circles. The author's initial introduction gave me the impression that he was a carefree and unrestrained protagonist, but after reading it, the difference was a bit big. The protagonist will be 70% cautious when he is a disciple (prevent others), but after reading four or five chapters, he has no idea about his golden finger. This character is not consistent.

Let me review the book. Overall, the writing is good, and the plot is okay. It was a popular work a few years ago, but it is a bit uncomfortable now. The protagonist upgrades too slowly. I can't say that it is not fun to be slow. I couldn't stand it until chapter 45. The author said that in order to highlight the awesomeness of the upgrade, I said in this world, who can read the book and wait for chapter 45? The above is just my personal opinion.

I have watched three and a quarter of them, and the characters stand out a bit, and the plot arrangement and writing are average to above average, but the overall system has dropped a lot in terms of detail description, just like the cultivator Jin Ran has not strengthened his memory and understanding, at least I think these four There is no performance at all in Chapter 50. The spells provided by the plug-in are not practiced and studied carefully. When the protagonist fights with the life and death talisman, he relies on the plug-in to automatically cast spells. There are also problems with the protagonist's character. I remember not writing much foreshadowing of the previous life. Why is he so timid and cautious? Shen's character, you died because of the rolls, not because you were too public and offended others. You are not Gou Daowen, so why do you have to be so timid and cautious when it comes to the rolls? When it comes to the rolls, it is even more outrageous. After dozens of them, there is really no cultivation at all. It all depends on You have a plug-in, even if you want to lie flat, you have been curled to death in your previous life. How can you stop thinking inertia? At least part of the habit of working should be retained. Occasionally, you have to practice by yourself. It is very sudden to lie completely flat all of a sudden. There are also very few descriptions of the Xianxia system. This is half of the interesting part of the Xianxia literature. Alas, you don't write much about the protagonist's magical cultivation, or the various wonders of other people's cultivation. The writing itself is relatively bland, and the part of the plot that relies solely on daily life is compromised. Overall, the writing techniques and other basic facilities are quite interesting. At least I won't feel the embarrassment of those poisonous novels. However, the protagonist's character and plot arrangement are not to my personal taste at least.

How can I say that? The novel about cultivating immortals is so depressing. This is not the brain circuit of a normal person. Chapter 2 should be able to persuade many people to quit

Good novels are always difficult to write. I don't think I'd say it's very good, but so far it's okay. I'll keep pursuing it as long as there's nothing serious in the future. Come on.

After reading a few chapters, I went to apprentice and tell me my thoughts. The protagonist was afraid that he did not understand the situation and went to a bad place. However, first of all, the protagonist was in a deep mountain forest and the snake monster was killed. What about another monster that cannot be defeated? Can white-collar workers survive in the wilderness? Won't you starve to death on the way? What should I do if I have diarrhea after eating poisonous fruit or drinking raw water? Even if you go out, can you understand the language of the mortals over there? Do you know the words? Why are you so confident that you can survive on your own? Can you still find the cultivating sect in the mortal world? Let's talk about the list of geniuses. The main reason is that you are afraid of the underworld cultivators and the demon sect, right? If you become a disciple of the demon sect and you can still survive, it's normal to be killed on the spot if you refuse. The underworld cultivators are so arrogant that you don't give any face and you still have to watch the genius you got go. Can they accept it? No, I will probably beat you to death on the spot. Only classical and decent immortal cultivators can accept it, so I think this rejection plot is a bit poisonous.

After being drunk, I don't know that the sky is in the water, and the boat is full of clear dreams that overwhelm the stars

Tested for poison, not recommended. Because it's all about selling dog meat over someone else's head Looking at the introduction, I was overly attracted by the characteristics of loving wine and being slapped in the face by my classmates who didn't understand them. After reading more than 50 chapters, the protagonist shows no love for wine at all, and doesn't even drink in front of others. So where is the "alcoholic" in the introduction? Where does the discussion among fellow students about pig's trotters and their love for wine come from? The introduction has nothing to do with the specific content. Furthermore, Jiujianxian's characteristics are crazy, free and unrestrained, and this pig's foot is not like that at all.

It's hard to describe. The whole article can only be described as garbage. I suggest the author go back and remake it.

In the introduction, the personality of the protagonist should be that of a drinker, but the protagonist only drinks for profit, just like people who don't like to drink in reality but have to force themselves to drink for money. Such people are called alcoholic swordsmen. Habits can be developed but the personality is destined by nature. Without that personality, no matter how you develop it, it will be like a tiger but a cat.

The pace is too slow... The golden elixir period mentioned in the introduction will probably reach 6 or 700 chapters.

I don't know why I wrote it, it feels very messy. I wanted to write about my inner activities, but the writing style is still far behind, and it feels messy.

It's a good book, but the author writes too slowly.

Let you choose your own sect. You are afraid that others will trick you... Why don't you go? I will tie you up. If you are worried that others will be wiped out, you will directly become a disciple... Isn't it really schizophrenic? Or shake M?

What the hell are you writing? The logic is messed up.

I can't stand it anymore after reading three chapters. Death from poison. When you are about to drown, someone throws a lifebuoy to you. You shout, I don't need your help. I want to escape by myself.

Demi-gods? Six Meridians Divine Sword? Talisman of life and death? Cultivation? Reborn? Annulment? There are various descriptions of the disciples looking down on the protagonist and thinking he is decadent, and the protagonist not caring about him, and then showing off his power when the engagement is broken off, so righteous that I don't know where I found the time to watch it for so long.

What are you writing about in the first few chapters? I'm still confused about whether to join or not. If they are a demon cultivator, they will kidnap you directly. Why are there so many helpless people who have met the real cultivators and still shirk one thing or another? If they are a demon cultivator and they let you go, will you be safe? If you still want to plan to grow your hair, will the magic door give you time? It's better to get started and master the power first. There is no need to worry about the Zhengdao sect. It is true that the writing is unbelievable. It is better to not use your brain and half of it.

How can a person who is about to die still debate whether to enter the immortal sect? Is there such a rubbish? You must be brave enough to take advantage of that snake's unconsciousness and kill her to death. Instead of talking a lot of nonsense, how can you show off when you have such a big face?

I dare say this author has no outline

I didn't understand even one of the three golden chapters at the beginning.

Can the protagonist's fear of heights be overcome quickly? This setting will not make the protagonist's character more full, nor will it make the readers feel fresh. It will only disgust the readers.

I feel like it's a pretty good idea, but if the hodgepodge series isn't laid out well in the early stages, it will easily collapse in the middle and later stages, right? All in all, I personally feel that this book is worth looking forward to, that's all. . . There are currently too few chapters at 90, and it's not enough to read, so please give it a try, author. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

When wine is cheap, I often worry that there are few guests, and the moonlight is obscured by clouds.

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The writing style is very comfortable and beautiful. I hope it will be updated more often.

It's still very good now, with the style of previous novels about cultivating immortals.

A very nice novel. For casual viewing. Fine

It's okay, but the pace is a bit slow. The protagonist, if you have a brain, speed up the pace.

[Martial Arts Recommendation Building] If you have a martial art that you like or think is suitable for the protagonist, no matter which work it is from, you can suggest various martial arts and martial arts from all over the world. Maybe the exercises extracted from the word "sleep" in the next book will be recommended by everyone.