The Dragon of Douluo Sings in the Sky

I really don't understand why some people like harem stories. High school students like me really can't accept it.

The plot and setting of the book are very good, but the author's writing is unstable and gives people the feeling of a novice. In many places, he said some things that should not be said in this scene, or some things that happened were very abrupt. Then I saw the comments next to it and clicked in. Sure enough, some people also felt that this was unreasonable. This kind of detail still affects the overall experience.

Come on, don't be affected. The single heroine is pretty good.

The toothpick cloud enters 🤓

The writing is comparable to Dou Yi! Come on, the author is great😆😆

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Dialogue between Yao Chen and Xiao Yan: Tang San Chapter

No one in Dou Er can help him awaken for free...

Although the progress is a bit slow, there are no poisonous points, the logic is self-consistent, and the heroine is determined early. Unlike the one next door who was ambiguous with Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong, Ning Rongrong confessed to the protagonist, and the protagonist neither refused nor agreed. Then Qian Renxue, the single heroine, asked Ning Rongrong in the comments section if she would get married. The author said that Ning Rongrong would be single for the rest of her life. How disgusting!

In fact, Zhou Weiqing was also tamed by Tang San like a dog. Of course, Zhou Weiqing was not a normal person. Zhou Weiqing was high-spirited as the protagonist at first and rejected Tang San. Later, Tang San hung him up and watched his wife die of old age. Then after Zhou Weiqing became a god, not only did he not hate Tang San, but he acted like a dog to Tang San and betrayed and supported his leader. It can only be said that the protagonists of Three Dogs are all somewhat seriously ill.

I hope the author will not embarrass Huo Yuhao. After watching Dou Er, I found that he has no black spots and works hard.

Posting a book, The God-Defying Author, I said he was banned for not labeling the harem, so that's a criticism, right? Then I won't be polite. I am a supporter of originality, and I don't want to be a troll, but today I really can't stand this. This book is called "The Black Myth of the Tang Dynasty" because I said in a review post that he did not have a harem label and created an image of a female character with a brainless attitude. I was banned for the day. Did I say something wrong? You are so guilty. I said why the popularity is so high and the number of comments does not match. It turns out that it is just a joke to control the reviews. Don't worry, I will read this post for every book I order. Let's see how you can control it.

The first and mid-term were fine, but the rest was all about water. I kept fighting against the Holy Spirit Cult and the Sea Spirit Master. Every time I hit the limit, the Holy Spirit Cult reached the limit. I appeared with Di Tian, ​​and then the two of them ran away. They went back and forth several times. It was just adding some supporting characters to change the scene. It was just changing the soup without changing the medicine, right?

He had a bunch of skills in a daze, but I didn't see him use them a few times. It's ridiculous.

Xili

Can one of the heroines of the new book accept the senior sister Zhang Lexuan? This perfect woman like a sister is really heartbreaking. Her parents were gone when she was young, and she was rescued and treated as a child bride. She watched the boy grow up little by little, and fell in love with him unknowingly, but saw him fall in love with someone else. Although she had unparalleled talent and appearance, she could not win back the boy who was engaged, and she watched him and his girl sleep together, but what? There was nothing she could do, and all that was left for her was bitter love, thinking that it would be okay to protect her in silence for the rest of her life, but this relationship was wiped out by the so-called god's charity, and in the end she silently accepted another man unconsciously. This perfect senior sister liked it very much when I first read it, but it made people feel distressed. I only regretted that my writing could not give her a good ending. I sincerely hope that the author can give her a good ending. Instead of being given a charity by the gods, even if she accepts another person, I hope she can open up on her own and not be forcibly erased by Tang Gou and then accept another man.

There is nothing serious overall, but there are quite a few minor problems. First of all, I feel that all the supporting characters are not well developed. Basically, they are written twice when the protagonist can use them, and they are completely ignored when they are not needed. For example, in the protagonist group, several people such as Caitou and Xiao Xiao may not have spoken more than three sentences in the whole story. As a result, the fairy grass is still used later, which is very abrupt, including the heroine. As for the level, there is no leveling up, but there is no leveling up, but the level in the early stage is improved very steadily, basically through practice. Later, it is improved to five levels and five levels, all relying on external force. Without external force, it will be stuck. I am 12 years old and 38 years old. Contra is 17 years old. The writing later is obviously very perfunctory. Let's talk about the protagonist's martial spirit. Hundreds of chapters have been laid out before, and each part appears one by one. It looks very powerful. However, when he opened his true form for the first time, he actually fought seven or eight times with an evil spirit master of the same level? You wrote about armor. Whose armor requires seven or eight cuts when it is fully expanded? And the cool point is that you should directly destroy the team after opening the A level. But it is outrageous when you use the Snow Emperor Soul Skill at the opening level. The same goes for later. The Wuhun Avatar is like a decoration. In the fight, you still rely on the Ultimate Ice and Soul Bone skills? I don't know what the use is of having so much foreshadowing in front of you. It feels like an anticlimax. There is also the issue of combat power, which was fine in the early and mid-term. When you came out of the Temple of Destruction, you were a level 80 person, and you ran into a group of level 70 or 80 evil soul masters. Even other original soul saints could have banned you. You killed two soul emperors here, and then relied on Emperor Tian to save them. There is also a problem. There are too few fights in the whole book. They are basically just struggling to develop, either daily life, or competing in competitions. There are almost all the plots in which the protagonist goes out to fight in the wild. The whole book grows like a flower in a greenhouse. The other protagonists are all fighting to survive and escape from death. How can you still play like this after so many mistakes? It would be okay if you didn't read Glory of the Sun and Moon Next Door. After reading that book, there will be a huge gap between reading this book.

Why is there a single heroine? Isn't Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor delicious? There are also Silver Dragon King, Xiao Xiao, Ma Xiaotao, Zhang Lexuan, Ning Tian, ​​Meng Hongchen, and Orange.

The author just said at the beginning that he would not downgrade, but when I saw it later, I felt that you were just downgrading. It felt like the author was used to downgrading and couldn't change it. Other than that, everything else is pretty good.

In fact, there is no need to keep the protagonist and friends at the same level. Every time the protagonist's level soars, the levels of other people are also mentioned inexplicably, which makes me speechless. He should now gradually benchmark himself against the older generation, instead of always playing and growing up with his peers. The main reason is that the protagonist has opened so many tricks, and Di Yueli can forget about it, while the others only have one fairy grass. Their level is not much different from that of the protagonist, but they can still keep up with his growth rate, which is inexplicable.

When I first started watching it, I found Big Poison to be a little bit different than Little Poison. It's innocuous. The most important thing is the heroine, the auspicious beast. I love it.

No, buddy, Snow Emperor succeeded Poseidon? Not professional, right?

You must have been too strict in leveling up. There are more than 200 chapters and only level 30 is over.

An excellent Douluo 2 fanfic. It has interesting points in resolving the conflict between humans and spirit beasts. The story between the protagonist and the heroine is a bit sweet.

It's rare to find a book that appeals to my taste, and it's the hero of King of Glory as a martial spirit. I also tried to write about Hou Yi, but I couldn't finish writing after a few chapters, and the author helped me find some motivation.

Didn't anyone tell me to start reading from Chapter 6?

It's so bloody. If you write about the inspirational Third Brother in such a bloody way, Third Young Master won't sue you.

Can it be refined?

Didn't the author say at the end that there will be an extra chapter of about 2,000 words 😢

Why are the author's books so expensive😭